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English for Academic and Professional Purposes
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Teacher’s Guide
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PREFACE The articles in the Reader vary in subject matter, length, and style of writing in order to give the students a wide range of reading exposure. Some are light in tone but informative; others are serious and content-heavy. The reading materials thus provide exciting opportunities for learning. The recommended activities contained in this accompanying teacher’s guide
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train the students to become effective readers. The activities are grouped into 1) a motivating introduction that builds up on the learner’s schema, their prior knowledge and their skills required in their earlier years of schooling, 2) the lesson proper, where guide questions lead to activities that develop and enhance the
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learning competencies of the students, and 3) concluding activities that encourage the students to apply their new learnings to practical situations independently. The teacher’s are encouraged to use this guide as a springboard for lively classroom discussions. For this reason, most of the selections contain only general
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instructions to give room for the teachers to innovate and adapt the materials to
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their classroom conditions.
Some reactions include more detailed explanations to facilitate discussions
on more specialized topics. The expanded activities found in these actions serve as
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lesson exemplars.
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TABLE OF CONTENTS CHAPTER 1 – Reading Academic Texts 4
Brief History of English
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Understanding Calories
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Wrigley’s Chewing Gum
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Golden Age of Comics
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From Hand to Mouth
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On Various Kind of Thinking
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From the Autopsy Surgeon’s Report
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Competition and Cooperation
Legal Indictment
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Newspaper Account: Local Girl Found Slain by Rejected
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Lover
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Porphyria’s Lover
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Quiapo: The Procession of the Black Nazarene
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The Sob Sister’s Story
Black Nazarene Procession Awes American Tourist
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CHAPTER II – Writing a Reaction Paper / Review / Critique 30
Four Values in Filipino Drama and Film
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Art
The Digital Divide: The Challenge of Technology and
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Equity Ang Bayan Muna Bago ang Sarili
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Why JFK’s Inaugural Succeeded
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Dead Water
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Four Perspective on Heneral Luna
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CHAPTER 3 – Writing a Concept Paper 70
Months of the Year and Days of the Week
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Ketchup
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Mercury Pollution
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Hormones in the Body
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Paleolithic Art
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Words to the Intellectuals
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Boondocks
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The Sentiments of Kundiman
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Our Very Own Arnis
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Why Sinigang?
Fusion vs. Fission
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Things: Throw Away Society
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CHAPTER 4 – Writing a Position Paper
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Doubts about Doublespeak
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The Case for Short Words
The Other Side of E-mail
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Women Talk Too Much
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r u online?
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Is Bad Language Unacceptable on TV
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Good English and Bad
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With These Words I Can Sell You Anything
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The Great Global Warming Swindle
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The Hazards of Industrial Agriculture
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More Energy
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Mahatma Gandhi’s Hunger Strike
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I Have a Dream
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Detecting Propaganda
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CHAPTER 5 – Writing a Report Fast Food Addiction
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Nonverbal Behaviour
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Philippines 2013 International Religious Freedom Report
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Executive Summary 192
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Guides for Physics Lab Report
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Chapter I
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Reading Academic Texts
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Reading Academic Texts Reading is one skill that is put into good use everyday. As soon as we go to the kitchen and open the cupboard to prepare our first meal for the day, we start reading the labels on the boxes and cans found on the shelves. We pick a box of cereals and read the instructions written on the package. With proper understanding of these directions, we can enjoy a hearty breakfast. This section aims to enhance the students’ skills in reading academic
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texts. In the earlier years the students were taught reading strategies. These strategies can give them a better grasp of the reading texts.
The first two selections provide an account of the history of language;
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one discusses language development from gestures to speech, the other gives a broad perspective of the periods in the history of the English Language. The chronological presentation of facts can help explain how languages change through time.
The four selections that follow are a sharp contrast to the first two in
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terms of length. These selections though brief, provide sufficient information on a variety of topics. The longer selections require skills that enable the
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reader to determine text structures as the key to understanding meaning and gathering information.
This section also contains texts that illustrate the use of the English
language in different disciplines. The language registers as these varieties of English in the different fields of learning are called, are distinctly shown in the
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selections that include the language of medicine, law, journalism, and literature.
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“From Hand to Mouth” Motivating Introduction 1. Ask the students to observe people talking to one another. Tell them to pay attention to the hand movements of these people in conversation. 2. Let the students communicate to one another without using oral language. Find out how long the students can sustain their “silent conversation.”
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1. Ask the students to prepare an outline of the selection. Let them identify the main headings of the article.
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2. Make the students list the evidence that vocal language was a development later than gesture or signed language. 3. Prepare
the
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worksheet
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the
advantages
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language.
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disadvantages of the speech or vocal language, and of gesture or signed
Disadvantages
Advantages
Disadvantages
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Advantages
GESTURE
Post-Lesson Activity 1. Assign students to do a research on the origin of language. 2. Ask them to comment on the different theories of language origin. 3. Let the students discuss other developments in communication (e.g., written language, electronic or computer-mediated communication).
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“Brief History of English” Motivating Introduction 1. Assign the students to consult the dictionary for the origin of the following words: a. b. c. d. e.
cheese camp school religion beef
f. chicken g. carpenter h. sky i. cat j. altar
menu, chef, captain, navy, military)
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2. Give them an additional list in class (horse, coliseum, candle, mother, father,
1. Introduce the following terms to the students: Old English Middle English Modern English Anglo-Saxons Indo-European language
Celts Dialect Case Standardization Mutually intelligible language
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Notes
f. g. h. i. j.
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a. b. c. d. e.
Old English usually refers to the period in the history of the English language
covering the years from 449 (or 450) to 1100 (or 1150). Around the year 450, England was invaded by the Germanic tribes (the Angels, the Saxons, and the Jutes). These Germanic tribes are regarded as “the founders of The
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English nation” [Albert C. Baugh and Thomas Cable, A History of the English Language (London: Routledge, 2002)]. The account of these invasions is found in the Benedictine monk Bede’s work Ecclesiastical History of the English People, which was completed in 731 (Baugh and Cable 2002). The earliest records of the language date back to about 700.
Middle English covers the period from 1100 (or 1150) to 1500. William of Normandy, a French territory, conquered England in 1066. The French rule brought change to the English language. The Anglo-Saxons chronicle existed until 1154. By that time, the English language had taken on new futures different from the ones of Old English. 5
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Modern English covers the period 1500 to the present in the history of the English language. The introduction of the movable printing process into England by William Caxton in 1476 made possible the production of uniform copies of big numbers of books. The increase in the number of schools, in literacy production, and in travel and explorations brought change to the language from the time of the Renaissance in the 1500s.
The Anglo-Saxon is the term that came about with reference to the Teutonic period of English” (Baugh and Cable 2002).
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tribes that invaded England. The term is often used to refer to “the earliest
Indo-European language is the family of languages to which English belongs.
The Celts were “the original inhabitants of the British Isles before the arrival of the Romans” [Phillip, The Story of English (London: Quercus, 2009)]. Dialect is a variation of a language.
Case is the choice of form depending on the function of words (nouns,
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pronouns, adjectives) in the sentences in an inflected language. Standardization suggests an “ideal” norm or model of usage.
Mutually intelligible language indicated that the language are distinct from
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each other and are not dialects of the same language.
2. Talk about the use of the English language in the Philippines and other countries in Asia. Explain to the students the role of English in global communication.
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Post-Lesson Activity
1. Ask the students to look up the origin of the following words used by Filipinos: a. mesa
f.
silya
b. lapis
g. titser
c. bag
h. baso
d. kabayo
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kotse
e. tsunami
j.
lahar
2. Explain briefly how these words became part of the local language(s) in the Philippines.
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“Understanding Calories” Motivating Introduction 1. Bring to class some pictures of some food items with their nutritional information from the dried goods section of the grocery (e.g., a small can of sardines, a can of fruit cocktail). 2. Teach the students how to interpret the nutritional information on the labels of these food items. Show them samples like the one below.
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3. Call the attention of the students to the part which says “calories.” Occasionally, instead of “calories” the word “energy” appears. Explain this
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distinction to the class. Explain to them the other entries listed on the label.
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Lesson Proper 1. Guide the students through a careful reading of the selection. 2. Let them identify the function of each paragraph (e.g., Paragraph 1 introduces the topic by giving a definition of calorie). 3. Ask the students why it is important to understand calories. Post-Lesson Activity
intake. What is a healthy intake of calories?
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1. Ask the students to interview a school athlete or a team coach about calories
2. Go to the grocery and compare the nutritional ingredients of products that are
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sugar-free with those that contain sugar (e.g., Regular Coca-Cola, Coke Light
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“Wrigley’s Chewing Gum” Motivating Introduction 1. Ask the students if they have tasted chewing gum. 2. Do the students think that chewing gum is popular? Lesson Proper 1. Let the students read the opening paragraph. What does it say about the
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subject matter?
2. Make the students prepare a chronology of how Wrigley’s chewing gum came to be.
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3. Do the students think that chewing gum is a good premium that can still be used to sell other products?
Post-Lesson Activity
1. Assign the students to observe how new products are introduced to the
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market. Are there promotional campaigns to launch the new products? 2. Do the manufacturers of new products use give-away items in order to sell
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their products?
3. Tell the students that in some countries, chewing gum is banned. A person caught chewing gum ends up paying a fine. Encourage the students to discuss why there is a chewing gum ban in some countries. Should chewing gum be banned in the Philippines? Let students present their stand on this
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issue.
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“The Golden Age of Comics” Motivating Introduction 1. Ask the students if they read comic books. 2. Ask them about their favourite comic books and characters. 3. Let them tell the class what it is that they find interesting in comic books. Lesson Proper
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1. Ask the students to identify the thesis sentence of the selection. The thesis sentence states the central idea of the selection. This thesis statement may be expressed or implied.
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2. Let the students prepare an outline of the selection. Show them how the ideas are arranged in the selection.
Post-Lesson Activity
1. Find out from the students if they read local comic books. Do they know some
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of the local comic book characters? 2. How do the foreign comic books compare with the local comic books? Which
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is more appealing to the students?
3. Ask the students to work in groups of five to create their own original comic
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books.
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“Competition and Cooperation” Motivating Introduction 1. Start your class with a spelling contest. Form two teams. Ten words will be given. For every word to be spelled, each team will choose its representative who will compete with the other team. 2. Help the students process their learning from this experience with working in
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a group and competing with another.
Lesson Proper
1. Discuss the definition of competition and cooperation in class.
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2. Ask the students if they noticed similarities and/or contradictions in the definition and application of these two concepts. Call the attention of the students to the mechanics of holding contests or competition. The competing teams act in harmony with each other, agreeing on the terms of competition, the rules of the contest, the general conduct of the event. Without
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cooperation, the competition will not achieve its goals.
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Post-Lesson Activity
1. Ask the students to gather information from the last election. Tell them to identify the candidates who ran for the Senate. Indicate the political parties they belonged to.
2. Ask the students to discuss how competition and cooperation work during the
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election campaign period.
3. How do competition and cooperation work within the family?
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“On Various Kind of Thinking” Motivating Introduction 1. How many times have we heard the expression “Think about it” or “Give me time to think it?” 2. Do the students think while they are listening to their teacher? 3. Give the students a few minutes of reflection. After three minutes, ask them
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what they thought about. Compare the different subjects of their reflection.
Lesson Proper
1. Ask the students to state the central idea of the selection.
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2. Ask them to name the various kinds of thinking. How were they able to identify these kinds of thinking? Did they find markers in the essay that served as clues or indicators? Call their attention to expressions (Par. 2), Like “This is our... kind of thinking” “... a second kind of thinking ... (Par. 4), “A third kind of thinking... “(Par. 5), “In the past this type of thinking has been called
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Reason” (Par. 18).
3. In order to determine the structure of a text, the readers are advised to look
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for markers such as the ones given above and other similar expressions such as “first..., “ “ next...,” “ as a result...,” “finally...,” “in conclusion...,” “to sum up...” These markers help situate the succeeding statement or sentence in the entire text. The last three expressions in the list given above (i.e., “finally...,” “in conclusion...,” and “to sum up...,”) clearly end a discourse.
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4. Ask the students to outline this selection with the help of the structural markers.
Post-Lesson Activity 1. Ask the students if they have engaged in the various kinds of thinking. Which type of thinking do they most frequently engage in? 2. What benefits do we get from the different types of thinking?
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“From the Autopsy Surgeon’s Report” Motivating Introduction 1. Give the students the following information about the medicine called aspirin.
BAYER ASPIRIN
Bayer
Non-Rx
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C: Acetylsalicylic acid I: Prophylaxis of thromboembolic disorders, MI, transient ischemic attacks & stroke. D: 1 tab daily. CI: Gastric & duodenal ulcers. Haemorrhagic diathesis. Children <16 yr. SP: Renal disorders, G6PD deficiency. Pregnant women close to delivery, patients w/ flu, chicken-pox or haemorrhagic fever, GI ulceration or asthma. Onset of persistent vomiting may be a sign of Reye’s syndrome (immediate treatment). AR: Gastric haemorrhage, hypersensitivity, thrombocytopenia. DI: Anticoagulants, corticosteroids, antirheumatics, sulfonylureas, methotrexate, spironolactone, furosemide, antigout agents. Alcohol. P/P: Tab 100 mg x 300’s (P393.50). US FDA Preg Cat, : C; D if full-dose used in 3rd trimester.
2. Ask the students if they found the information useful. Did they encounter
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difficulties in understanding the information? Who, do they think, is the intended reader of this write-up about aspirin?
3. Teach the students how to access information by looking at how ideas are arranged in the text. There are instances when complex information can be better understood if the ideas are presented in an organized manner. 4. Show the students how every piece of information about this medicine is conveyed in the above entry taken from MIMS, 107th Edition 2006 Philippine Index of Medical Specialties. Emphasize to them that clustering of ideas under specific headings can facilitate understanding of texts. 13
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5. Explain to the students that there are certain registers of language (types of language use) peculiar to specific professions such as medical science, engineering, and business. These types of language use may be unintelligible to people not belonging to the same profession. Such language use is also referred to as jargon. 6. In the case of aspirin, its common use as a drug to relieve pain and reduce fever has gained popular knowledge. The explanation given in the MIMS
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entry, however, contains jargon and codes that are not familiar to the lay reader. It is, therefore, important to grasp the coding system. What do the initials stand for?
7. MIMS explains that C stands for “Contents.” Therefore, aspirin is acetyl
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salicylic acid. D is for “Dosage,” which is 1 tablet daily. "I" stands for “Indications” or what the medicine is recommended for, that is, it prevents certain health threatening conditions. The list that follows again consists of jargon in the medical sciences. CI stands for “contra indications.” When these conditions are present in the patient, the medicine should not be
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administered. SP stands for “Special Precautions,” when extra care should be
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taken when the medicine is prescribed. AR stands for “Adverse Reactions” or bad or unfavorable effects or reactions to the medicine. DI stands for “Drug Interactions.” This means aspirin interacts with any of the items included in the list. P/P, or Presentation and Packing, shows how the medicine is sold or its available packaging.
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Lesson Proper
1. Ask the students to read the autopsy surgeon’s report. 2. Guide them in their reading by explaining how the report is structured. Ask them what they learn from each sentence in the report. They can begin with a simple grid like the one below:
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Sentence Number
Topic Cause of death
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Manner
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Evidence
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Evidence
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Evidence
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Manner
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Evidence
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3. The ideas that relate with one another can now be grouped together for a
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4. Ask them to state briefly the content of the autopsy surgeon’s report.
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“Legal Indictment” Motivating Introduction 1. Ask the students to read the Philippine Constitution.
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LANGUAGE Section 6. The national language of the Philippines is Filipino. As it evolves, it shall be further developed and enriched on the basis of existing Philippine and other languages. Subject to provisions of law and as the Congress may deem appropriate, the Government shall take steps to initiate and sustain the use of Filipino as a medium of official communication and as language of instruction in the educational system.
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Section 7. For purposes of communication and instruction, the official languages of the Philippines are Filipino and, until otherwise provided by law, English. The regional languages are the auxiliary official languages in the regions and shall serve as auxiliary media of instruction therein. Spanish and Arabic shall be promoted on a voluntary and optional basis.
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Section 8. This Constitution shall be promulgated in Filipino and English and shall be translated into major regional languages, Arabic, and Spanish. Section 9. The Congress shall establish a national language commission composed of representatives of various regions and disciplines which shall undertake, coordinate, and promote researches for the development, propagation, and preservation of Filipino and other languages.
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2. Ask them to write down their observations about the language used in the Constitution. Are the words of the Constitution commonly used in everyday conversation? Are the sentences simple in structure?
3. Help the students understand the structure of the Constitution. Explain the division of this entire document into articles and sections. Let the students state briefly the main idea in the article. 4. Let the students paraphrase the article.
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Lesson Proper 1. Ask the students to read the ‘Legal Indictment.” Ask them to discuss the text in groups of five, focusing on the type of language that is used in the selection. Is this language commonly used in ordinary communication? 2. In plain language that can be understood by an ordinary reader, let the students share the findings of the Great Jurors. 3. Express the last paragraph of the District Attorney’s statement in simple
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Post-Lesson Activities
1. Ask the students to watch any of the hearings on any of the recent issues being investigated by the Senate.
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2. Ask the students these questions:
a. How are the arguments presented?
b. What kind of language is used in the hearings?
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c. How do people address one another in the hearings?
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“Newspaper Account: Local Girl Found Slain by Rejected Lover” Motivating Introduction 1. Assign the students to bring a copy of any broadsheet/newspaper. 2. Ask them to read articles from the paper in groups of five. 3. Make them identify the information contained in the news articles. 4. Let them pay attention to the words and sentences used in the news articles.
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Ask them if the words are difficult to understand. 5. Who is narrating the event?
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Lesson Proper
1. Ask the students to read the news report on “Local Girl Found Slain by Rejected Lover.”
2. Ask them to compare this text with the article that they read from the
the text?
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newspaper that they had brought. What kind of information did they get from
3. Did they notice any similarity/difference between the two?
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4. Are the words and sentences difficult to understand? 5. Who is narrating the event? How was the event narrated?
Post-Lesson Proper
1. At the end of this activity, summarize the students’ observations.
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2. What did they learn about writing a news article? Discuss with them the characteristics of a news report.
3. For the final activity, ask the students to write a news report about a recent school activity.
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“The Sob Sister’s Story” Motivating Introduction 1. Ask the students if they have heard of people committing crimes because of love. 2. Ask them to explain if such acts are justifiable. Listen to the students’ point of view. Help them to process their answers, emphasizing the need to rise
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above human weaknesses and uphold moral values.
Lesson Proper
1. Ask the class to read “The Sob Sister’s Story.”
2. Make the students aware of the difference between the language used in the
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text and that found in the preceding texts – “From the Autopsy Surgeon’s Report,” “Legal indictment” and “Newspaper Account: Local Girl Found Slain by Rejected Lover.”
3. Ask the students how they got to know what happened in “The Sob Sister’s
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4. Who is narrating the story? How does the narrator feel about what happened
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in the story?
5. Discuss with the students the structure and features of the story; pay particular attention to the elements of fiction.
6. Let the students re-tell the story in their own words.
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Post-Lesson Activity
1. Engage the students in the discussion of moral and ethical issues in society. 2. How can the youth participate in the movement against crime in our society? 3. What role does the family play in the prevention of crime or other forms of misconduct?
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“Porphyria’s Lover” Motivating Introduction 1. Review the characteristics/elements of a typical poem. How can one tell if a text is a poem or not? Is each feature characteristic of a poem? Are words arranged into lines and stanzas? Do the words rhyme at the end of the lines? Is there rhythm in the lines? To facilitate the discussion, give examples of these elements.
Trees
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2. You can choose a poem that the students are familiar with.
I think that I shall never see A poem lovely as a tree.
A tree whose hungry mouth is prest Against the earth's sweet flowing breast;
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A tree that looks at God all day, And lifts her leafy arms to pray;
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A tree that may in summer wear A nest of robins in her hair
Upon whose bosom snow has lain; Who intimately lives with rain.
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Poems are made by fools like me, But only God can make a tree.
a. Talk about the form of this poem. 1. How many stanzas are there in the poem? (6) 2. How many lines make up each stanza? (2) 3. What is the rhyme scheme/pattern of each stanza? (aa) 4. Is there a dominant rhythm in the entire poem? (yes, iambic tetrameter) b. Explain the use of figurative language in the poem. Cite examples of personification and simile.
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e.g.,
A tree whose hungry mouth is prest. Against the earth’s sweet flowing breast.
c. Ask the students to paraphrase the poem. Lesson Proper 1. Ask the students to read aloud “Porphyria’s Lover.” 2. Discuss the different elements of poetry found in this literary text. 3. The poem contains a narrative. From whose point of view is the story being
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told? How does this point of view affect the telling of the story? 4. Compare “Porphyria’s Lover” with the form of other renditions of the same story that have been discussed. How does this poem differ from the earlier texts?
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5. Help the students to re-tell the story of Porphyria and her lover.
1. Organize the students into two or three groups, depending on the size of the class.
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2. Ask the students to dramatize the story, using the autopsy surgeon’s report,
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the district attorney’s statement, and the sob sister’s narrative as sources for the script for their presentation.
3. Help the students create a script for their stage presentation. The students can make use of their knowledge of variations in language use in various professions. The characters in the play will use different registers of
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“Quiapo: The Procession of the Black Nazarene” Motivating Introduction 1. Ask the students what they know about the annual celebration of the Feast of the Black Nazarene in the district of Quiapo. 2. If they have not heard of this event, ask them to gather information from newspaper and from books. 3. Ask them if there is a difference in the style of presentation of information
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between these two sources. How do the newspaper accounts differ from the book sources?
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Lesson Proper
1. Together with the students, read the poem aloud. 2. Ask the students to paraphrase the poem.
a. In the first stanza, explain to them the reference to “The sober days that follow the intoxicated season.” How does the poem describe the
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atmosphere on the feast day of the black Nazarene? b. Who are being described in the second stanza?
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c. Notice the shift in the object of description in the third stanza. d. As the procession moves, more description is given in the fourth stanza.
e. The fifth stanza, through a series of parallel phrases, mentions the manifestations of the devotion to the Black Nazarene.
f.
The sixth stanza, through another series of parallel phrases,
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emphasizes what the devotees’ experience.
Post-Lesson Activity 1. Ask the students to prepare a list of new words they learned from the poem. 2. Make them use these words in sentences.
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“Black Nazarene Procession Awes American Tourist” Motivating Introduction 1. Do a review of the elements of reporting. 2. What information should be included in a news report? How is news conveyed to the audience? Lesson Proper
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1. Ask the students if the article “Black Nazarene Procession Awes American Tourist” follows a conventional format of a news report.
2. Call the attention of the students to the opening paragraphs of the news
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article. What is the function of these paragraphs?
3. What is contained in the last two paragraphs of the article?
Post-Lesson Activity
1. The American tourist Gerry Blevins said that “the Philippines is [a] much nicer
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[place] than the United States.” Ask the students to comment on this remark. 2. Ask them to give examples of why they think (or do not think) the Philippines
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is a better place than other parts of the world. 3. The students can also form two teams and conduct a debate on the topic
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“Why the Philippines is a good/not a good place for tourists to visit.”
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Assessment 1. Ask the students to gather information on interesting places, folk traditions, cultural practices, and beliefs found in their hometown. 2. They can do this through observations and cultural exposure, interviews with the elders in the community, and research in the internet and in school and public libraries. 3. Require them to submit an outline of their findings.
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4. Let them prepare an essay summarizing their findings.
Examples of Topics:
1. The students of Arts and Design can choose an interesting work(s) of art that
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their place is known for (e.g., the paintings by folk artists of Angono, Rizal; the old churches in Ilocos, in Metro Manila or in the Visayas; handwoven textiles of the T’boli and Yakan communities; the wooden furniture of Betis). 2. The students of Sports can choose to focus on Filipino games or any sports activity that is popular in the community.
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3. The students taking the academic track, particularly those in the Social Sciences and the Humanities may opt to investigate our religious beliefs and
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cultural practices.
4. The students who are going to specialize in creative writing may choose to write a poem or a story to talk about their discoveries; the arts students may want to paint a scenery depicting a cultural tradition. 5. Those going into the health sciences can look at the relevance of folk healing
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practices and examine their contribution to the contemporary medical practices.
6. Students interested in science and technology can attempt to connect folk technology with scientific gadgets. The use of simple technology such as the pulley mechanism used in outdoor performances of religious plays like the sinakulo or the salubong can be enhanced with the introduction of more sophisticated machines.
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Chapter 2
Writing a
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Reaction Paper / Review / Critique
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Writing a Reaction Paper, Review, and Critique A very important expository discourse that students must know how to write is the reaction paper or review, or critique. It is mainly written to communicate a fair assessment of situations, people, events, and literary and artistic works and performances. Whether a social commentary, or a critical judgment, it conveys incisive insights into its analysis of events, its interpretation of the meaning or importance of a work or artifact, or its appreciation of the moral or aesthetic values
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reflected in the work or performance. It may include the main purpose of the event; the devices and strategies employed; an evaluation of its success or failure; and an
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assessment of its significance and relevance, timeliness or timelessness.1
The teacher should explain to the students these general guidelines for writing the reaction paper:
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Guidelines for Writing the Reaction Paper/Review/Critique2
1. Value Communicated
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a. Sound critical judgment
b. A fair and balanced assessment of situations or events, people and things
2. Basic Content
a. Ranges from an off-hand gut reaction, favorable or unfavorable,
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merely expressive of emotion to a more rational impersonal critical analysis that seriously communicates some value, ethical or moral, some hidden or forgotten truth, and some aesthetic delight
b. May take the form of a reflection, an appeal, a protest, a tribute or denunciation, a speculation c. In general, the content would include the following topics: 1
Borrowed from Concepcion Dadufalza, “The Reaction Paper,” Reading into Writing 2: a HandbookWorkbook-Rreader for Critical Reading and Writing for Expository discourse (Makati City: Bookmark, Inc., c1996), pp.257-258. 2 Ibid.
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1.)
For human situations: a.) A brief description of the event b.) People involved, their roles and contributions c.) Other driving forces, in the open or hidden and unsuspected d.) Implications and consequences e.) Assessment and prognostication f.) Some offered solutions For cultural affairs, people, works, performances:
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2.)
a.) The central purposes of the event or product
b.) The means, devices, strategies employed to achieve the purposes
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c.) An evaluation of the achievement: success or failure
d.) The significance (if any) beyond mere entertainment of the event or product in ethical and/or aesthetic terms, its timeliness and/or timelessness
a. From
the
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3. Modes of Ordering (Any of the following):
event/performance/artifact/work
presented
and
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described/narrated in themselves to the writer’s critical evaluation of the entire event, show or work in a sequence of its elements
b. Discussion that intersperses critical comments between mention or description of the details of the event, show or work
c. From a cover statement giving an over-all judgment of the event, show or piece to a discussion of each angle, aspect or element of the
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event, show or work illustrating or providing evidence for the evaluative cover statement
4. Basic qualities of a Good Reaction Paper a. Gives a fair and balance social commentary b. Provides relevant and accurate factual information on the situation c. Exhibits by means of thorough and in-depth analysis an appreciation of context (including time, place, people, involvement, their motivation, and actuations)
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d. Makes a clear distinction, through language, between what is actual and what is probable or possible e. Exhibits a deep sense of humanity and an understanding of the human situation even while expressing disapproval or disagreement most intensely 5. Basic Qualities of an Adequate Critical Judgment a. Provides accurate and relevant information on the event, show, or work
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b. Exhibits full appreciation of the purpose behind the event, show, or work
c. Shows a clear understanding of the means (strategies, techniques,
purpose
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devices, etc.) and their appropriateness and power in achieving the
d. Exhibits fairness and balance in the judgment made e. Projects incisive and profound insights into its (1) analysis of the event on artifact, (2) interpretation of the underlying meaning or significance
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of the event or artifact, and (3) appreciation of the values “(moral
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and/or aesthetic) unfolded in every detail of the event or artifact”
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“Art” Critique of a Visual Statement Motivating Introduction 1. Regale the students with the socio-political roles of famous art works, especially the painting, Guernica. 2. Interest the students in the role that these art works played in reacting to socio-political events and advancing the artists’ views and positions. Mention
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the powerful Victor Hugo novel turned stage play and movie, Les Miserables; silversmith Paul Revere’s engraving, the Boston Massacre, which mainly galvanized the anti-British Revolution; Francisco Goya’s The Third of May
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1808, the most famous and extreme depiction of Napoleon’s execution of Spanish rebels; even Jose Rizal’s Noli Me Tangere which inspired our own anti-Spanish revolution.
3. Fascinate the students with this little anecdote:
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One of the most iconic images of the 20th century, Guernica depicts the carnage from the bombing raid on a Spanish village by the Nazi air force. During WWII, when Nazi officers visited Picasso's studio and saw a print of the famous image, they asked, "Did you do that?" Picasso answered, "No, you did."
Lesson Proper
Reading the Critique and Reacting to It
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1. Unlocking Verbal Difficulties: Have the students look up the meanings of these expressions in order for them to read the text with greater facility. a. Cubist style b. Filtered through the artist’s eyes
c. Visual argument d. Multiple perspectives e. Stronghold f.
Outrage
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i.
Commissioned
j.
Atrocity
k. Imminent l.
Critically acclaimed
m. Depicts images simultaneously n. Assumptions o. Emotional cacophony of war p. Carnage of war
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2. Comprehending the Text: Use these questions to guide the students in understanding the essay.
a. Explain how and why “art is an interpretation,” not a faithful depiction of reality.
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b. What is meant by art as a visual argument?
c. What are achieved by the cubist style of painting? d. On which shared historical experience does Picasso base his painting, Guernica?
e. Why would Picasso think that “people viewing the painting would be In what way does cubism allow Picasso to paint “truth rather than
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f.
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upset by it?” reality?”
g. Which symbols in the painting would the viewers have readily recognized?
3. Reading the text more critically, let the students reflect on the painting more deeply and discuss their answers to these questions:
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a. Which images catch your attention, and why? b. What, do you think, is the main image? Which images are found in the foreground? Why do you think Picasso arranged the images in the way he did? How do these images relate to one another?
c. How would you describe the images? Which of these images are underscored? Which are exaggerated or idealized? d. What are gained by his use of black and white?
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e. Why did Picasso title his painting, Guernica? Would it have made a different impact if it had been given a different title, like “The Carnage of War?” f.
Aside from being a recognizable image for Spain, what else would the bull stand for? How about the horse?
g. Explain how the painting could simultaneously protest the violence of war and appeal for peace. 4. Structural Analysis. Explain these elements to the students:
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a. Main idea. Using the possibilities afforded by cubism in representing reality through multiple perspectives, Picasso created a mural depicting his outrage against the devastating bombing of Guernica.
b. Supporting details. Using “wailing figures, panicked faces, darkness
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contrasted by jumbled images of light all project the horrors of war.” The painting depicting the horrors of war entitled Guernica would strongly resonate among the people familiar with the bombings, and everyone condemning the atrocities of war. Insinuating that such
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carnage should not happen again, the painting also becomes an
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appeal for peace. Concluding Activities
Inspire student appreciation for significant visual reactions (art works) to socio-political phenomena by immersing the learners in these projects: 1. Art and Design: Savor Juan Luna’s Spoliarium, at the National Museum;
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research on the background of this world- acclaimed Filipino painting. Then write a three-paragraph critique of the mural focusing on the subject, the images and the manner of their depiction, the use of color, light and other devices, and the overall message of the artwork.
2. Academic Track: List at least ten famous politically committed art works of the world, the occasion or event that each work reacts to/against, and the message and impact of the work on the people for which it was created. Then write a three-paragraph essay explaining how and why visual art works make for effective visual socio-political statements/arguments. 32 All rights reserved. No part of this material may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means electronic or mechanical including photocopying – without written permission from the DepEd Central Office.
3. Tech Voc: After listing the ten major tourist-hotel destinations, museums, or theme parks in various parts of the country, select major Philippine art works (paintings, engravings, sculpture, installation art, etc.) that should be mainly featured in each destination. In a three-paragraph essay, explain why you chose the art work, and the appropriateness of the political message for the hotel/tourist
destination,
and
its
geographical
and
historical
importance/relevance. Example: The huge mural, the Battle of Mactan, hangs in a covered structure in the Mactan Shrine.
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4. Sports: After selecting your top choices of art works depicting sports, write a three-paragraph essay of their favorite subjects, the artistic devices
Summary
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employed, and their messages.
1. Picasso’s Guernica embodies his visual statement or expression of outrage against the violent effects of war especially on civilians. 2. By presenting the “carnage of war”, he and his art work were making a visual
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argument for peace.
3. To present the horrifying effects of war, he uses the multiple perspectives and
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images afforded by the cubist style.
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“Four Values in Filipino Drama and Film” Motivating Introduction 1. Ask the students what their favorite Tagalog movies are. Why would they consider them their favorites? 2. Make them choose their top ten favorite actresses from among the following: a. Carla Abellana
b. Angel Aquino
c. Nora Aunor
d. Julia Barretto
e. Ann Curtis
f.
g. Bianca Gonzalez
h. Kristine Hermosa
i.
Heart Evangelista
j.
k. Pops Fernandez
l.
Maja Salvador
n. Liza Soberano
o. Dawn Zulueta
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m. Pokwang
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Marian Rivera
Eugene Domingo
Do Caucasian looks figure in the choices? Lesson Proper
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Reading the Text and Reacting to It 1. Getting to Know the Author
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a. Inform the students that before they read more about the Filipino audience’s preferences for the fair-haired girls, and other colonial choices, they should first meet the Philippine studies scholar-author:
b. Dr. Nicanor Tiongson is a leading critic, playwright, and academic professor emeritus from the Film Institute of U.P. Diliman. His important works include The Women of Malolos, Noli at Fili sa
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Dekadang Dos Mil, and Manuel Conde,
c. This founding member of Manunuri ng Wikang Filipino has specialized in Philippine cinema, Philippine theater, Philippine arts, and popular culture.
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d. Encapsulated e. Perpetuated f.
Invariably
g. Caucasian h. Relegated i.
Slapstick comedies
j.
Authenticity
k. Colonial aesthetics Commendable
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l.
m. Adulation for the white n. Subjugated
p. Wreak havoc q. Catharsis r.
Maudlin
s. Raison d’etre Run-of-the-mill
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o. Most abject
3. Comprehending the Text. To help the students do a critical reading of the
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text, ask them these guide questions: a. What are the four negative values that have dominated our stage and film?
b. What are the roots of these “disvalues.” How did these advance the cause of the colonial rulers?
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c. How has the adulation for the white affected our dignity and our national pride?
d. Which two factors have created box office hits? e. If religion “was the opiate of the masses in the past,” what have become “that opiate today?” f.
What is wrong with suffering and submissiveness?
g. What does Tiongson mean by, “Filipino aesthetics will blossom only if the Filipino can depict his experience with utmost authenticity?” h. How can the concept of entertainment be deepened and enriched?
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i.
Analysis of the Structure of the Text: As the first part of the critical review discusses the “disvalues” that plague our film and stage, what does the second part discuss?
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Identify the four counterpart values that could help Filipinos find their identity.
Concluding Activities 1. Academic Track: Does our use of English help promote colonial mentality?
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Explain your views in two to three paragraphs. 2. Art and Design: Research on how our Western-oriented perspectives in music have marginalized, if not denigrated our indigenous music. (Search the Internet for studies of Dr. Ramon P. Santos.)
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3. Tech Voc: Discuss how our clothes/fashion, hairdos, dance crazes, holiday practices (Christmas, Thanksgiving, Mother’s Day, Father’s Day, etc.) reflect our colonial mentality. Use specific illustrations to support your points. 4. Sports: Discuss how Manny Pacquiao, as a boxer, exemplifies the four
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counter values more than the “disvalues.”
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Summary 1. Major ideas
a. The four “disvalues” that have perniciously prevailed in our film and stage include: “White is Beautiful,” “Shows are the Best,” “Hurrah for the Underdog,” and “All Is Right with the World.”
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the colonial values include: “Brown is Beautiful,” “Shows with Substance are the Best,” ”It’s Good to think and Decide for Oneself,” and “The World Could Indeed Be More Beautiful.”
2. Supporting Ideas a. The causes and effects of the colonial values show their denigration of the Filipino. b. The counter values form a critical, scientific, and realistic frame of mind that can help develop the Filipinos’ cultural economic and political independence. 36 All rights reserved. No part of this material may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means electronic or mechanical including photocopying – without written permission from the DepEd Central Office.
“The Digital Divide: The Challenge of Technology and Equity” Motivating Introduction 1. Ask the students how many of them have computers/laptops/tablets. How many have internet connections? How many have smart phones? How many have cell phones? 2. Ask further: How many homes and schools have computers? Do you think that majority of our students, all over the country, have computers? Do they
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have internet connections? Do they have cell phones? Lesson Proper
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Reading and Reacting to the Text
1. Unlocking verbal difficulties. To understand the text better, ask the students to look up the meanings of these difficult expressions and use them in sentences: a. Equity
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b. Grow exponentially c. Instantaneously
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d. Similar disparities
e. Exacerbates disparities f.
Authentic settings
2. Understanding the Text. Ask these guide questions to help the students understand the essay:
a. What comprise “information technology” and its far-reaching effects?
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b. What are the implications of having “only 6 percent of the population in developing countries [are] connected to telephones?”
c. What is meant by “digital divide?” d. Explain
how
income,
race,
education,
household
type,
and
geographical location, affect digital equity. e. Why are women and minority groups not eligible for the jobs with the highest salaries? f.
Why do schools with rich students have greater access to Internet?
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g. How can the computer and the internet be the great equalizer among people? h. How does the use of figures and percentages bolster the observations that certain factors have created the “digital divide?” 3. Reacting to the Text. Ask the students: a. How can the internet be used in “culturally relevant ways?” b. In the Philippines, have students benefitted much from information technology?
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c. Can computers and internets bridge the gaps in educational achievements between the rural and urban schools in the Philippines? d. Can we say that information technology has become an end in itself in the Philippines? Why or why not?
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e. Considering that internet speed in the Philippines is much slower than that of its ASEAN neighbors, does this speed create another reason for disparity?
4. Analyzing the Text Structure. Explain these notes to the students.
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a. Introduction – Information Technology is “influencing the way many people live and work today; computers are common in homes and
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work areas.”
b. Thesis - Access to information technology affects our work and way of life.
c. Supporting details (1.)
Despite the growing number of computers, the world’s
population have little access to computers and the internet.
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(2.)
(3.)
Only 6 percent of the third world countries have
telephones, much fewer have computers. In the USA, except for the Native Americans with few telephones, 94% have telephones, but only 56 percent have computers.
(4.)
Income,
race,
education,
household
type,
and
geographical location create “digital divides.”
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(5.)
Ethnic minorities (African-Americans, Latinos and Native Americans) and women (gender) benefit less from information technology jobs.
(6.)
The schools of the rich children have greater access to the internet.
d. Conclusion – Equal or greater access to computers and the internet plus their interacting with the technology as an end to itself, will
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reduce disparities in schools, and among peoples.
Concluding Activities
Engage the students in these learning activities:
1. Academic Track. Research on the number of students in your school who
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have laptops and tablets, and have internet access. Find out how they use the internet – as resources for assignments, for social media sites such as Facebook and blogs, or some other reason. Write a two-paragraph reaction on how beneficial to their educational needs the internet could be.
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2. Art and Design. The different arts may now be executed using computer technology. Prepare a computer-aided design or visual representation of the
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digital divide discussed in the essay. 3. Tech Voc. Write a two-paragraph commentary on how diverse industrial arts can benefit from the computer and internet access.
4. Sports. Write a two- to three-paragraph commentary on online sports games – how popular are these games? How effective are these in developing
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sportsmanship, and physical health?
Summary
1. Thesis: Computers and the internet may have affected various facets of our life; however, most of the world’s population have little access to computer technology and the internet.
2. Strategy for development – The essay uses figures and percentages to represent the groups that do not have as much access to the internet as the rich, the white, and the educated Americans.
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“Ang Bayan Muna Bago ang Sarili” Motivating Introduction 1. Make the students relive the tragic homecoming of Ninoy Aquino in August 1983. Recall how his strong desire to serve the Filipinos made him come home despite warnings against the concomitant dangers. Unfortunately, he was gunned down at the International airport. 2. Make the students realize how his death became a rallying cry for unity and
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survival for many Filipinos, but after five years, Cardinal Sin reminds the Filipinos how they seem to have forgotten his “dream.”
Reading and Reacting to the Homily
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Lesson Proper
1. Getting to Know the Author. Inform the students of the significant role played by the author, Catholic Archbishop of Manila, Jaime Cardinal Sin, as he used his influence to rally for the rights of the poor. In this excerpt from his homily,
the nation.
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he notes how the people have forgotten their important role of helping build
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2. Unlocking Verbal Difficulties. Ask the students what these expressions mean: a. Transcending our petty selves b. Authentic name c. Cynics
d. Predominant strain
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e. Demoralizing f.
Destabilizing
g. Anarchic h. “Basket of crabs” i.
Addressed vigorously
j.
Unrelentingly
k. Chronic illness l.
Operative guideline
m. Too calloused
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3. Comprehending the Essay. To guide the students in comprehending the essay, ask them these questions: a. What is Ninoy’s gift? How should the Filipinos show “gratitude” for this gift? b. What does the “truest motto of our people” mean? c. How have we transformed the ideal? d. What is the significance of the allusion to the three monkeys to our “national pastime?”
f.
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e. In what way “must we criticize in order to be free?” When does our criticizing degenerate into self-destruction?
g. What does Cardinal sin mean by “our national game, an anarchic free-for-all- in a ‘basket of crabs’?”
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h. How does the other meaning of K.K.K. negate the moral order that must be addressed vigorously? i.
What does he mean by our need as citizens “to go into an action mode ourselves?”
j.
Where should change start?
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k. What qualities are reflected by the motto, “Bayan muna, bago and
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sarili?”
4. Reacting Critically to the Essay. Make the students think more critically of the homily message by asking these questions: a. Of the four versions of K.K.K., which, do you think, is most applicable to our people and government today? Why?
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b. In what ways is the motto, “Bayan muna, bago ang sarili” a nonoperative ideal even today?
c. Would you agree with the Cardinal that the saying, “Every man for himself” is a “formula for disaster”?
d. Who is Chino Roces? Is his call for a moral order in 1988 still applicable today? e. Why must we begin change with ourselves? f.
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5. Analyzing the Essay Strategies. Call attention to the devices used by Cardinal Sin to emphasize his points. What specific effects are achieved by these: a. Why does the homily start with an allusion to the gift of Ninoy to the Filipinos? What does he achieve by this reference? b. Why does he bring up the four parodies of the true meaning of KKK if these were a far cry from the ideal? c. What is the importance of his allusion to the three monkeys who see,
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hear, and speak no evil? d. In the next paragraph, he quotes Ninoy, “We must criticize in order to be free…” What is the effect of this exhortation- quotation on the idea of the preceding paragraph?
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e. Again, what is the significance of the pun on what KKK stands for in Par.7? Why is it juxtaposed with the allusion to Chino Roces and his call for a renewed moral order? f.
Do you agree that “our President [at that time, Cory Aquino] is bent on pursuing the battle against corruption forcefully?”
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g. To make the guideline, “Bayan muna, bago ang sarili” operative, we
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must start with ourselves… and implement it for a year; otherwise, we would be dreaming an “impossible dream” and not “follow the star.” What is gained from borrowing from the popular song?
Concluding Activities
Make the students realize that the message from Cardinal Sin becomes more
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significant if the students implement a facet of it in their contextualized activities. 1. Academic. Choose a government official, youth leader, or any popular personality who has practiced “Bayan muna, bago ang sarili.” Explain how he/she made the motto her/his guiding principle. 2. Art and Design. Prepare simple but striking posters of the motto in various major languages to be placed in the various offices of government service in the country.
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3. Tech Voc. Request a slot from the public service program of [government] television channel to feature a weekly 30-minute presentation of a school or government office featuring a “Bayan muna, bago ang sarili” experience. 4. Sports. In the spirit of bayanihan, and “Bayan muna, bago ang sarili,” create weekly sports tournaments in your barangay. After linking up with the barangay officials and civic-spirited citizens, make the championship game fall on the barangay fiesta or Christmas celebration to drum up
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support/donations for uniforms, sports equipment, uniforms, and prizes.
Summary
1. Main Points - Instead of showing love of country first before our own self interests, we have made “Kanya-Kanyang Katwiran/ Kabig/Kurakot our way
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of life. The challenge is to use our freedom of speech to criticize and be free, instead of endless, destabilizing criticism of others; and to work together against corruption. Specifically, the challenge is to start practicing “Bayan muna, bago ang sarili” among ourselves and make it govern our deeds for
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one year. 2.
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3. Strategies - The allusions to Ninoy’s “gift,” to the laudable KKK motto, to Ninoy’s quotable views on constructive criticism, and to Chino Roces’ call for a moral order emphasize Cardinal Sin’s message. The contrasts between the
unifying KKK motto vs. the parodies of this; between the three monkeys and the freedom of speech and criticism advanced by Ninoy; between the propensity to corruption and the call for a renewed moral order, between the
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self-interests and the need for unity against corruption all underscore Cardinal Sin’s call for making “Bayan muna, bago ang sarili” an operative principle and to start now and do it for a year.
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“Why JFK’s Inaugural Succeeded” Motivating Introduction Inspire the students to meet a very promising youngest American president by introducing John F. Kennedy.
1. Inform the audience that: Kennedy remains the iconic figure of America's Camelot–an era people remember for the energy and idealism emanating
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from the White House. He was the youthful, earnest visionary who might have changed the world, if not for his cruel fate. In A Thousand Days, Arthur Schlesinger captured the sense of loss that many felt after Kennedy's death: "It was all gone now–the life-affirming, the life-enhancing zest, the brilliance,
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the wit, the cool commitment, the steady purpose.”
2. Impress on the students that the JFK inaugural address is considered one of the best; hence, they must read it before reading the reaction to it:
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The Inaugural Address of John F. Kennedy is considered one of the greatest speeches in twentieth-
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century American public address. Communication scholars have ranked the speech second in a list of the hundred "top speeches" of the twentieth century based on its impact and artistry. It is famous for its eloquence and for its call to duty: "Ask not what your country can do for you--ask what
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you can do for your country.”
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Lesson Proper Reading the Text and Reacting to It 1. Getting to Know the Author. Before reading the text, the students would do well to know the author of the reaction paper. Provide them this mini background: A noted historian, the Yale- and Columbiaeducated Thurston Clarke has written eleven widely acclaimed works of fiction and nonfiction, including three
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New York Times Notable Books and two books about JFK: Ask Not: The Inauguration of John F. Kennedy and the Speech That Changed America (2004), and
JFK's
Last Hundred Days: The Transformation of a Man and the
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Emergence of a Great President in which he asserts that
“JFK's legacy lies as much in the promise he didn't live to fulfill as in what he actually accomplished.”
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2. Unlocking Verbal Difficulties. Advise the students to address the difficult expressions first in order for them to read the text smoothly and critically.
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a. Currier & Ives
b. Exhilarating air
c. Much animosity
d. Smoldering bomb e. Droned on f.
Alterations
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g. Political spectrum h. Astounding i.
Paraphrased lines
j.
Impossible to replicate
k. Most memorable l.
Off-the-cuff remarks
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3. Comprehending the Text. Use these guide questions as study helps for the students: a. What does Clarke mean by a scene worthy of Currier & Ives? (Par. 1) b. Which among the “No one knew that…” details makes Kennedy most endearing”? (Par. 2) c. Which is the best proof that the inaugural address was greatly received by all sectors? (Par. 3) d. Why was George W. Bush the “most recent offender?” (Par. 4)
f.
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e. Which constituted the magic of his inaugural address? (Par.5) Which “magical element” of the address would be nearly impossible to replicate? (Par. 6)
reading copy?
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g. Which JF Kennedy trait is reflected in his continuing alterations on his
h. What is the significance of his speech revisions without help from the “speechwriting teams that have become de rigueur?” Why did he not need much help revising his dictation? (Par. 9)
Which five important moments in his life influenced his eloquent
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delivery? (Par 10)
Which two sentences proved to be an emotional tuning point of his
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delivery? Why were these emotionally-powered? (Par. 11)
k. What elements really evoked the deep emotional response to his inaugural speech from the Americans? (Par. 12)
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Unlike other critical reviews of the speech, which emphasize JFK’s ideas, especially his championing freedom and democracy as well as
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defending these all over the world, and probe his very effective rhetorical devices and memorable lines, Clarke focuses on other points. According to him, why did JFK’s inaugural address succeed?
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Analyzing the Text Structure 1. Introductory observations a. Par. 1 lays the overall view of the well stage-managed setting (worthy of Currier & Ives). b. Par. 2 zeroes in on the unnoticed, unsuspected, even humanizing “goings-on” among those on stage. 2. Body: focus on the success of the address. a. Par. 3 focuses on details proving the success of the address, from
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comments, to soaring Gallup polls to later Presidents’ paraphrasing of his quotable quotes.
b. Par. 4- provides the magical factors for the success, not just in the message/words.
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c. Par. 5 – asserts the crucial factors for success that cannot be replicated – his life, and his close call with death that imbued the
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address “with power and urgency.”
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Concluding Activities Ask the students to do the following: 1. Academic. Secure a text copy and a video recording of the inaugural address of Pres. Rodrigo Duterte and explain why the address succeeded/failed. 2. Art and Design. Design a website featuring the different programs foregrounded in the Philippine President’s inaugural address. 3. Tech Voc. Write a three-paragraph reaction to the election promise of eradicating drugs and criminality in three to six months. Would the tough -
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talking President be able to keep the promise without violating human rights? How would this implementation affect our tourism promotion?
4. Sports. What kind of sports program should the Duterte administration emphasize? Write a two-paragraph proposal to revitalize the national sports
SONA).
Summary
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program to be incorporated in the President’s State of the Nation Address
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1. Although the reaction paper-editorial maintains that the address is one of the best in America, it focuses more on the factors for its success than on the
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contents.
2. Although it notes various memorable quotes from the speech, even imitated by later Presidents, the editorial stresses that not the ideas and words alone have evoked the magic of the inaugural speech, but several factors in JFK’s life that cannot be replicated contributed to the eloquence of his message and its delivery.
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3. Most important, his war experiences and close calls with death together with the loss of a brother and friends in battle, added the authentic passion and emotion that so touched the listeners.
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“Dead Water” Motivating Introduction Instill in the students an appreciation for a different kind of a reaction paper. Instead of an essay, Wen-Ito wrote this poem as a reaction to the stagnant water around. 1. Ask the students to think of all the garbage- and plastic bag-filled ditches, “esteros” around, and even areas in Manila Bay. Think of the fly- and rodent-
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infested piles of uncollected garbage especially in various parts of Metro Manila.
2. Ask the learners what the implications of these polluted bodies of water have
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on the residents, on the bathers and swimmers. Remind them too of the flash floods during the rainy season and what constitute the aftermath of the raindrenched and flooded areas where the infested garbage piles had remained. Lesson Proper
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Reading the Poem and Reacting to it Make the student’s realize that after a first reading of the poem, it is
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imperative to know the poet behind the creative and environmental perceptive. 1. Appreciate the Poet’s Role. Share a brief background about the colorful life of
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Wen-i-to/Wen Yi-duo:2
“On June 6, 1946, at 5pm, after stepping out of the office of the Democratic Weekly, Wen Yiduo died in a hail of bullets. Mao blamed the Nationalists and transformed Wen into a paragon of the revolution. Wen had received a classical education. But he came of age as old imperial China and its institutions were being swept away, and the Chinese people were looking ahead to a new China. It was fertile ground for a young poet. In 1922, Wen studied art and literature at the Art Institute of Chicago. There he published his first collection of poetry, Hongzu or Red Candle. Returning to China in 1925, he became a university professor, active in the political and aesthetic debates of
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This is borrowed from Robert Hammond Dorsett (Translator), “Stagnant Water & Other Poems by Wen Yiduo”, in https://chinafile.com/library.books/Stagnant-Water-Other-Poems-Wen-Yiduo, March26, 2014
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the time. His published his second collection of poems, Sishui, or Dead Water, in 1928. As political trends shifted from an intellectual, elitist base toward a populist one, Wen was one of the leaders of a movement to reform Chinese poetry, from a classical style and diction far removed from everyday usage, to adapting common speech and direct observation, while maintaining a strict, albeit new, formalism. However, Wen never resolved the conflicts that existed within him: The elitist and the proletarian, the scholar and the activist, the traditionalist and the innovator, the personal man and the public man, fought for ascendancy. Yet it was these contradictions that proved so fruitful and give his poetry its singular power.”
2. Unlocking Verbal difficulties. Make the students realize that before they can
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understand the poem and interpret its meaning well, they have to know the meanings of these expressions used: a. Raise a single ripple b. Silky gauze c. Colorful spume
e. White scum
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d. Ferment into jade wine
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3. Comprehending the Text. Use these questions to guide the students in understanding the literal meaning of the poem: a. Stanza 1- When is water “hopelessly dead?” b. Stanza 1- Why cannot a breeze “raise a single ripple on it?” c. Stanza 2- Can the green on rubbish copper become emeralds? Can peach blossoms sprout from thrown away tin cans? Can grease cover
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the surface with “silky gauze?” Can germs produce colorful foam on this water? In what ways can these “emeralds, “peach blossoms,” “silky gauze,” and “colorful spume” come out of the stagnant water?
d. Stanza 3 – Again, can dead water be fermented into wine? When can white scum be viewed as floating pearls? When do pearls chuckle and become big pearls, then turn into gnats? In what ways would these gnats steal the rum?
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e. Stanza 4- In what way can one see that the “hopelessly dead water” may have a bright touch? Why would the frogs croak in delight “when they cannot bear the silence?” f.
Stanza 5 – In a seeming contradiction of early assertions that pearls, peach blossoms, colorful spume, etc. all beautiful images, can spring from the dead water, why does the last stanza say that nothing beautiful can live in the dead water? What frame of mind is revealed when one leaves it to the devil to cultivate the dead water? What may
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come out of the dead water if the devil “cultivates” it? 4. Interpreting the text. To make the students move beyond the literal reading of the text, ask them these guide questions:
a. What does a hopelessly dead water stand for?
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b. If the breeze cannot even move the water to produce a ripple, why would one add to the pollution by throwing in rusty scraps and left over food and soup? What does such an action signify? c. From your science, you learn that the green on copper is more of
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blue-green layer of corrosion that develops on the surface of copper when exposed to sulfur and oxide compounds; that
the oily film
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floating on water may be caused by decomposition of grease; that the colorful foam or water may be caused by cyanobacteria with harmful cyanotoxins. Why does the poet “romanticize” versions of these effects of corrosion, decomposition, and toxicity as “emeralds, silky gauze, or colorful spume?”
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d. What tone does the poet use, especially in Stanza 3, when he gives in to fermenting the water into jade wine, etc.? Can water be fermented? Why would that fermented water be “jade wine?”
e. What do the small pearls stand for? What does their chuckling mean? And how can their chuckling turn them into big pearls? Moreover, how do they burst as gnats that steal the drink? f.
As though the persona relents a little about the hopelessly dead water, he/she allows it a “touch of something bright.” To what would this bright touch refer? In what way would the frogs no longer able “to
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bear the silence?’” Why would the dead water (not the frogs) sing/croak its “song of delight?” g. In the last stanza, what do the last two lines signify, considering that the water is hopelessly dead and unable to contain any form of beauty? On what note does the poem end then?
Reminders:
speak or act in the text.
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The persona in a poem is the role or character adopted by the author to
Tone in poetry or prose refers to the writer's attitude toward the subject or audience. It may be admiring, afraid, aggravated, aggressive, agitated, angry,
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apathetic, apologetic, sarcastic, and sardonic. It is the emotional coloring of the poem.
5. Critical Reading of the Text
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Remind the students of the brief background on the writer. That he was killed for his writings means that his socio-political background calls for a
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reading beyond an environmentalist’s concern. Ask them to examine the two interpretations below and explain which they would agree with, or which parts they would disagree with, and why: a. In “Dead Water” Wen Yiduo made claims to the past. With the passage of time the consolidation of the Qing rule and censorship
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determined how the fall of the Ming dynasty was remembered, imagined and represented, Yiduo represented the poets of this era as they tried to base their poetry on past models and make them meaningful for the present generation. The dead water was symbolic of the state of China. The people were desperate and hopeless. Realizing the lack of new ideas, the narrator stated “Here is a ditch of hopelessly dead water / No breeze can raise a single ripple on it / Might as well throw in rusty metal scraps / or even pour left-over food 52
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and soup in it” (ll. 1-4).This stanza makes a powerful statement on the times of China. A ray of hope had sparked the era, the narrator explains to the reader “this ditch of hopelessly dead water / may still claim a touch of something bright / [and] the dead water will croak its song of delight” (ll. 13-14, 15).
Poetically, the poem displayed a duality of what was potentially dead could have life and could potentially live again. The poem appeals to
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the use of nature and natural elements to symbolically stimulate the reader. Despite the narrator’s losing hope in the last stanza, the reader is stimulated to believe that a new era is approaching and a
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new social state is on the verge of beginning.
b. “Stagnant water”. The "dead water" symbols, irony , and other artistic techniques refer to The Northern Warlords, the dark rule, the performance of the author, and the government's determination
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opposed to darkness.
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The poem of five sections can be divided into three parts. the first part (Section 1) the "dead" water, refers to the old China and the emotions of the reality of corruption. A “Hopeless dead" has a profound meaning: it symbolizes that in the semi feudal warlords’ corruption in the dark, semi colonial old China, is "a ditch of despair and the poet’s
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disappointment. In the second sentence of the poem, "the wind blowing up a ripple," "cool" and "dead" can refer to all the fresh ideas and strength that cannot create the slightest reaction in the stagnant water." In the poem’s third, fourth sentences "If you are to throw some junk-heap, you might as well throw leftover," express that the "stagnant water", following the disappointment, caused the mood of extreme hate. If the reality is so dark, desperate, rather than let it rot completely, the hopelessly bad will grow more thoroughly bad, and the new things may grow stronger. This poem expresses here how the poet is full of anger, yet has ardent hope for good things. 53
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c. In the second part (second, third or fourth), the poet makes a detailed depiction of the "dead water,” specifically vividly reveals the social status of the old China -- decadent, and this expression of the old Chinese hatred, anger, sarcasm.
In the third part (the last section), the poet expresses the curse of reality, the eager desire to change reality. In the first two sentences, the poet, in a very flat tone, asserts that the dark China Society is
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completely negating, denying that “this is a stagnant ditch of desperation, definitely not beautiful. The ugly reclaiming the world – actually, the ugly to the extreme, attempts a ray of hope. Therefore, the last two sentences include not only the despair of the poet for the
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old China, but also the new China’s expectation and longing, with a strong desire to change the reality.
The poem then comprises a strong attack and curse of the reign of the dark old Chinese, and expresses the poet’s deep patriotism.
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(From “Stagnant Water” in http://www.et97.com/view/37664.htm) Concluding Activities
Ask the students to perform these contextualized activities to make the poem more relevant to their concerns.
1. Academic: Write a two-paragraph description of the most polluted Philippine river, the Marilao River. Focus on the details of its pollution and the hazards
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these bring. Make the third paragraph a crucial step to revive it and make it “alive” and fresh again.
2. Art and Design: Prepare a visual graphic of the highly polluted Marilao River. Focus on the images that contribute to its hopelessly dead state. Accompany the visual with a two-paragraph description of the stagnant water and its implications on public health. 3. Sports: Explain how swimming in a polluted river or lake can be very dangerous for athletes.
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4. Tech Voc: Pretend that you are the secretary of the Department of Environment and Natural Resources. Write an urgent program of action to clean up the Marilao River and transform it into a clean, toxic-free river that can “support and protect the livelihoods of the people and wildlife that depend on these waterways and the life-sustaining resources that they provide.”
Summary This creative reaction to a hopelessly dead ditch water emphasizes how
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useless and polluted it has become. 1. It satirizes the fermentation, corrosion, and toxification that happen through seemingly beautiful images of emeralds (patina of corrosion), silky gauze (grease decomposition), and colorful spume (toxic cyanobacteria).
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2. Greater irony is created through images of graver spoilage presented as pretty objects, like jade wine (green liquid of corrosion), pearls (of scum), etc. 3. In ultimate frustration, the persona leaves the cultivation of this dead water to a devil even, and sees what kind of world can ensue.
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4. While these images, as well as the sarcastic and ironic tone deplore the hopelessness of the polluted water, this decayed water may be seen as a
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criticism of China and its political, even moral decay. And if the dead water cannot be rehabilitated, even by the symbolic devil, China cannot be
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revitalized by the Kuomintang and political rivalries (at the time).
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“Four Perspectives on Heneral Luna 1. “Epic Movie Shows How the Revolution Assassinated Heneral Luna” (Inquirer.net) 2. “Heneral Luna” (Film Police Review) 3. “Heneral Luna Shows the Human Side of the Hero” (Rose Carmelle Lacuata, ABS-CBN.Com)” 4. “Heneral Luna” (Clarence Tsui, PDT)”
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Motivating Introduction
Draw out the students’ reactions to the movie Heneral Luna. Then ask them these questions:
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1. Why did many school authorities “require” students from different parts of the country to watch Heneral Luna?
2. Did the movie open your eyes to several views about Antonio Luna, Gen. Aguinaldo, and other leaders of the revolution? Which details and facets of
Lesson Proper
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the movie did you find most interesting, most striking, or most unforgettable?
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Reading the Reviews and Reacting to Them
1. Brief Background on the Film Subject
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Find out how much the students know about Antonio Luna. Do they know that he was much more than what most people consider him -- the great military strategist and the greatest general of the Revolution? Do they know that he excelled in chemistry, had a Licentiate and later a doctorate in pharmacy (Madrid)? Do they know that after his highly acclaimed dissertation on malaria, he studied bacteriology and histology (Paris), and medical chemistry in Belgium and Germany? Do they know that as a chemistry expert in Manila, he was the first to study environmental science, and forensic science? Do they realize that when he was associated with the Katipunan, he was jailed, and then exiled to Madrid, where he studied military science when he was released from prison? When he returned to the country, he founded a military academy where trained soldiers but earned their ire for his having been a strict disciplinarian. But do they realize that for all his ideals and efforts, he was assassinated, stabbed allegedly by his own people?
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2. Unlocking Verbal Difficulties. Make the students eliminate stumbling blocks to smooth reading and comprehension by their looking up the meanings of these expressions: a. Group 1 from “Epic Movie Shows How the Revolution Assassinated Heneral Luna:”
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revitalizes dormant genres well-choreographed production design nascent expatriates stark fashion fossilized desiccated contemplative character cliché heroics pantheon of heroes hubris damaged culture parochial interests opportunism
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(1.) (2.) (3.) (4.) (5.) (6.) (7.) (8.) (9.) (10.) (11.) (12.) (13.) (14.) (15.)
b. Group 2 from “Heneral Luna:” compelling story allegorical run-of-the-mill historical bio pic dastardly periphery inner turmoil volatile rile up their morale banter nuanced cohorts political foil snippets rowdy meeting glossed over grit trifecta
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(1.) (2.) (3.) (4.) (5.) (6.) (7.) (8.) (9.) (10.) (11.) (12.) (13.) (14.) (15.) (16.) (17.)
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c. Group 3 from “Heneral Luna Shows Human Side of Hero:” (1.) (2.) (3.) (4.)
artistic license spewing curse words superb portrayal comfort zone
d. Group 4 from ““Heneral Luna” (Tsui):
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spearheading treachery high octane turn swash-buckling drama futility of ideals global diaspora mainstream production values reconstructing the historical narrative broached pedagogical objective lingua franca inconvenient truth delved headlong into the revolution reconciliatory voices dissenting comrades j’accuse double-dealing clandestine affair impunity anachronism unflinchingly subtlety raucous still chaotic political landscape
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(1.) (2.) (3.) (4.) (5.) (6.) (7.) (8.) (9.) (10.) (11.) (12.) (13.) (14.) (15.) (16.) (17.) (18.) (19.) (20.) (21.) (22.) (23.) (24.)
3. Understanding the Texts. Make the students note that the four movie reviews critique the same movie, Heneral Luna. Ask them if they find that the four reviews are all extolling the movie, foregrounding similar/different strengths and flaws, and/or asserting unique observations.
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Ask these guide questions: a. Review 1 – “Epic Movie Shows How the Revolution Assassinated Heneral Luna” (1.) How does Director Jerrold Tarog revive the historical action movie in Heneral Luna? (2.) In what ways may the movie be considered “superbly made?” (3.) How significant is the reference to Juan Luna’s Spoliarium
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to the ending of the movie? (4.) How different “an action man” is Gen. Luna from other Filipino heroes depicted in movies?
(5.) What makes the subject matter of the movie most
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intriguing?
(6.) Explain why A. Luna was a tragic character, a “victim of the damaged culture of the Filipinos,” and of the “ultranationalism that has bedeviled Philippine history.” (7.) Do you agree that Gen. A. Luna “was assassinated by the
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Revolution?” Why or why not?
b. Review 2- Heneral Luna (1.) What makes Heneral Luna different from the run-of-the-mill historical biopic?
(2.) What tone do you detect in Par. 3 when the review asserts
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that the “real focus here is the tension, the inner turmoil, that brewed in the ranks of our so-called founding fathers?”
(3.) Which is the most praiseworthy feature of the movie? (4.) Which is the problematic element? (5.) What are the positive and negative effects of the use of the frame narrative?
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c. Review 3 – Heneral Luna (1.) How does the movie "pay tribute to the heroic military commander spearheading the Philippine struggle for nationhood at the end of the 19th century?” (2.) What important qualities of the blockbuster movie “have generated immense buzz in the Philippines? (3.) Outside of the country, however, what limitations would prevent
the
movie
from
winning
in
international
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competitions? (4.) What special role does Joven play in reconstructing our history in the movie?
(5.) Contrast Gen. Luna with Aguinaldo, especially in their traits
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and their manner of operation.
(6.) Explain what is meant by the bold observation here that the movie, in effect, “plays out a whirlwind J’accuse?” (7.) In what way is Luna depicted as “a selfless patriot in a dangerous age?”
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(8.) Clarify how the movie is a “wake-up call” against our worst
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enemies.
(9.) How relevant is the movie message to our contemporary political landscape?
(10.) Among its artistic components, which is the heavy weight?
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d. Review 4- “Heneral Luna shows human side of hero” (1.) In what way was Luna’s personality “beautifully captured in Heneral Luna?” (2.) What is the effect of showing Luna’s merciless killing by fellow Filipinos in the big screen? (3.) How did the film “combine history and art, without sacrificing anything?” (4.) How does the movie show to Filipinos that “heroes are humans, too?”
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General Comparative Analysis 1. In asserting what a success the historical action movie has been, each of the reviews point out these artistic merits: a compelling allegorical and relevant story, an impassioned score, an impassioned sound design/score, masterful cinematography, a “fantastic script,” and John Arcilla’s stellar performance. 2. The reviewers are one in praising the acting prowess of Arcilla, especially in portraying the whole spectrum of emotions of the larger-than-life general including the “passionate, sympathetic, battle-weary softer side of the
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character.” However, the film police review finds that the rest of the cast, while not weak, had difficulty keeping up “with the gravitas of John Arcilla’s Luna.”
3. It is Clarence Tsui’s review that provides convincing supporting details for his
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a. The “technically marvelous” sound design is illustrated by Luna’s table banging “overpowering the raucous Cabinet meeting,” the guitar mini concert in the middle and the overall “masterful score.” b. Illustrating the well-crafted cinematography is the innovative flashback
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sequence moving to the general’s young days, seamlessly moving to
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different settings as a masterfully executed visual spectacle. c. The most notable artistic element, the “poetic yet conversational” script, features dialogues seemingly taken from a sonata, and lines so elegant that “curse words sound so cultured, so tasteful.”
4. Even the film police review, which finds some “erratic pacing problems” in the first act, asserts that Heneral Luna tells “a compelling story – allegorical and
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timely to the present day.”
5. The story of political intrigue and conspiracy unveils an intellectual and action hero; hence, it becomes a “tribute to the heroic military commander spearheading the struggle for nationhood.” a. His “brilliance, hubris, and tragic flaw make Luna a tragic hero, victimized by the Filipinos’ damaged culture (inability to transcend parochial and self interests).” b. Luna was also depicted close to his real life traits, including his cursing and losing his temper. 61
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6. Finally, the common message shows the bravery and treachery in war that has relevance in contemporary politics. a. El Heneral was assassinated by the Revolution. (Inquirer.net) b. Heroes are human, too. (Carmelle Lacuata) c. Hen. Luna is a story of “how a dissenting voice can get swept away and perish under a wave of egos and personal interest.” (film police review) d. As Luna “battles foreign forces and then adversaries in his own
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ranks,” his story “mirrors the chaos of contemporary politics.” e. Luna lives the principle: put country before family and everything else. Concluding Activities
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Ask the students to do these projects:
1. Academic: One motif of the movie focuses on “Artikulo Uno.” Research on this Constitutional provision and write on how Luna uses it to enforce military discipline among the soldiers.
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2. Art and Design: The movie gained popularity based on word-of-mouth and a grassroots campaign. Conceptualize how you would promote the movie
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through posters and other forms of media. 3. Tech-Voc: Create either a meal or drink inspired by the characters in the movie and/or the period it is set in. 4. Sports: Create a 15-minute workout or game based on the movie. Summary
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1. The movie reviews reflect how a great general of the revolution fighting for nationhood becomes a victim of shallow interests of people in politics and government.
2. The
blockbuster
movie
has
great
artistic
merits:
laudable
script,
choreography, sound/score, great acting especially by Arcilla. 3. It is both a tribute to the great military leader and a projection of the human side of the hero.
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Assessment Answer these questions concisely. 1. On the reaction paper/review/critique a. Is a report on an event a reaction paper? b. Can a summary of a novel or literary work pass for a critique? c. What are the qualities of a good review or reaction paper? d. Would a favorable or unfavorable gut-reaction expressing an emotion
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be considered a reaction paper? Why or Why not? e. The speaker in a poem need not refer to the poet; who is this created speaker? 2. On the sample reaction papers
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a. Do you think that Gen. Luna exemplified the operative principle that Cardinal Sin had preached almost a century later -- “Bayan muna, bago ang sarili?”
b. Critics emphasize the memorable lines from Kennedy’s inaugural address; even important writers praised him for his effective rhetorical
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devices; and still others were inspired by the legacy of democracy and
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the promise to defend liberty throughout the world. But why does Clarke choose to write about other factors behind the success of the inaugural address?
c. Why may a poem, like “Dead Water” be an effective social commentary?
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d. Without the use of words, how can a work of art like Guernica eloquently protest a horrific event like the Guernica bombing?
e. Of the many forms of social divides – economic classes, color bars, religious conflicts, political ideological divisions, and digital divide – which is the most harmful? Which is the easiest to bridge? Why?
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1. Academic: a. Social Sciences and Law - Make a fair and balanced commentary on the claims of the Philippines on the West Philippine Sea versus those of China. b. Science and Humanities students- Discuss the implications of China’s building artificial islands and military installations on marine life in the South China Sea. 2. Art and Design:
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a. Craft a web design, or graphic design illustrating the military installations endangering South China Sea marine life or the destruction of the Coral Triangle; then, write an essay, a commentary, 3. Sports:
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on these destructive effects.
a. Discuss the possibilities of sports-friendly relations among naval forces of Vietnam, Malaysia, and the Philippines through sports competitions on the Spratly's, and underwater sports packages (diving
4. Tech-Voc:
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and snorkeling) around the atolls.
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a. With the ivory ban, the Chinese fishers now rake in endangered giant clams not only for the meat but also for the handicraft carved from giant clams. [According to Dr. Edgardo Gomez, Prof. Emeritus of Marine Science, U.P, their pillage of the South China Sea for their booming handicraft (especially in Tanmen, Hainan Island, China) is destroying the reef ecosystem.] Write about the income possibilities of
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our own fisherfolk in they engage in shellfish carving too.
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Chapter 3
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Writing a Concept Paper
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Writing a Concept Paper An important academic paper that the student must learn to read and write critically is the concept paper. Presenting samples of brief as well as full-blown concept papers from different areas of knowledge, this module not only clarifies what a concept paper is and its contents, but also foregrounds the values it communicates, the strategies that may be employed in reading and writing one, and the characteristics of a well-written concept paper. As each article presents a concept and builds on the others, you may employ
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a sequential approach: motivating learners, informing the students of the objectives, presenting either well-explained and illustrated information, or guide questions for the lesson proper, providing learning/practice activities and interesting modes of assessment together with appreciative feedback, and clinching summaries and
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reminders.
1. A motivating introduction arouses curiosity, entices the students to stop, look, listen, and try relevant “gimmicks,” and/or hints the relevance and significance of the concept to their lives, or their future.
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2. Specifying the objectives of the lesson as short-term learning outcomes gives clear directions to the student about what he/she expects to learn.
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These also provide the foundation for course planning, including organizing course content, designing instructional materials, and methods.
3. For the lesson proper to be well understood, unlocking verbal difficulties, leading questions, clear explanations, apt illustrations, and examples may be used.
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a. Interesting and relevant Learning activities and practice exercises would enhance learning and may lead to a writing assignment.
b. Assessment questions and projects may be either tried and tested types, or daring and do-able ones.
c. Positive and encouraging feedback for the activities or the assessment results should be devised. 4. The Reminder is a boxed aide-mémoire or prompt for both the teacher and the student. 5. The Summary winds up the lesson with a reiteration of important points.
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To challenge the student to prepare a well-written concept paper on “walls,” the module closes with a power point presentation focusing on various kinds of walls, their diverse uses, and their structural materials. Ranging from the house wall, to the mural, the prison walls, the virtual economic walls, the color bars, the socio-political divides, the religious walls, the psychological walls, the cordon sanitaire; the famous walls of the world – the Wailing Wall, the Berlin Wall, the Great Wall of China, the Walls of Babylon, the walled complex of Sacsayhuaman of Peru, the Intramuros, and the Vietnam Veterans Memorial Wall in the United States – ---the rich variety of
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digital graphics provokes student imagination and thinking into creating a remarkable, even exceptional concept paper either on building walls, or breaking walls in his/her discipline.
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Content Standard
In this module, the learner comprehends the values, the principles, and the uses of the concept paper.
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Performance Standard
At the end of this module, the learner prepares a well-organized concept
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paper in a specific discipline. Matrix of Essentials Text Title
Critical Reading Focus
1. “Boondocks”
The core definition at the Naming and defining at least thirty-
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heart of a concept paper
3. “Ketchup” 4. “Fusion
from
Filipino;
Writing
brief new
English words derived from Filipino for
concept Guessing meanings of words after
and clarification: Greek and identifying their Roots, prefixes and
“Days of the Latin, Week”
five new English words borrowed
etymological narratives of
2. “Months of the Strategy Year”
Activities
and
other suffixes;
narrating
etymological narratives
stories
Semantic History
Writing an outline.
vs. Strategy for writing a
etymological
Writing the body of a simple
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Fission”
concept Paper:
concept paper using an initial
Expanding Initial
definition, and expanding this thru
Definition with
the contrast of various aspects of
Comparison and
given terms along the lines of the
Contrast
contrasts
between
fusion
and
fission in the reading text. 5. “Things:
Par. pattern: illustrations Writing a rudimentary outline for a
Throw
Away and examples, contrast concept
Society”
writing
an
introductory paragraph(s) using a
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order: inductive
paper;
paragraph pattern
6. “Mercury
Concept paper : one Listing effects of
in
structure: definition with certain areas of El Nino in the effects
provinces, of flash floods in Metro
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Pollution”
oil spills
Manila
“Hormones in Categories
7.
the body”
Functions Theories
to
Their Contextualized activities
explain Contextualized activities
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8. “Paleolithic
and
Art”
Paleolithic Art
with Contextualized activities
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9. “Words to the Definition Intellectuals”
10. “The
expansions
Definition, classification Contextualized activities
Sentiments of
comparison
Kundiman”
11 “Our Very Own Chronological
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Arnis”
12 “Why
Sinigang?”
13.
Contextualized activities
development Influences,
effects, Contextualized activities
examples)
Culminating Core
definition
plus Writing a 500-word concept Paper
work: Writing a classification and other on Walls Concept on Walls
Paper choice (s) of patterns of development
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“Boondocks” A Mini-Concept paper Motivating Introduction Find out how familiar the students are about the dynamic growth of the English language as it continually borrows words from other languages. Do they realize how our Philippine languages have been enriched by borrowings from other languages?
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1. Think of these Questions:
a. Did you know that asa, salita, balita, karma, mukha, guro, dalita, hari, are borrowed from the Sanskrit/Indian language?
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b. Can you enumerate words that have enriched our Philippine languages by foreign language borrowings?
i. From Spanish – ventana, sinturon, kutsilyo, mesa, primero, segundo, tercero, singko, derecho, canta, obra, premio, etc. ii. Indonesian/Malay – gunting, payong, anak, halo halo, lima,’
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and salamat.
iii. American – kontraktwal, empleyado, burger, barbecue, keyk,
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klase, riserts, etc. (We simply tagalized the spelling!)
2. Ask These Questions:
a. Did you know that on June 26, 2015, forty-one Filipino words and expressions were added to the Oxford English Dictionary? Examples: barong, bahala na, barkada, barangay, KKB, kikay, suki,
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pulutan, etc.
b. How about Filipino words that have been Americanized? cooties (from kuto or head lice), carabao (from kalabaw), machin (matsing), calamondin (kalamunding, a citrus tree), and boondocks (bundok)
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Objectives This lesson introduces the students to the main purpose of a concept paper – to clarify the meaning of a concept, here, “boondocks.” Through this lesson too, they learn that: 1. a definition usually forms the core of a concept paper; 2. this definition may consist of the original meaning of the term/concept, especially one of foreign borrowing,
and the modifications on its original
meaning and
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3. the later and present-day uses of the word clarify the concept further. Reminders: To inform the students of the other techniques and uses of definition,
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Definitions3 Purposes: 1. To clarify meaning of words, or to correct misinterpretations, or misuse of a term. 2. To stipulate the meaning of a term by limiting, extending, or redirecting the sense in which a term is usually understood; to use a term, borrowed from another field of knowledge, in a special way. Ex: “Window dressing” – used to make a shop window more attractive to buyers. stipulatively used in a false banking report to deceptively project an impression of economic stability or financial growth Techniques 1. Formal – follows a pattern or equation: term + genus + differentia (differentiating characteristics) Ex. A robot is a machine that looks like a human being and performs complex acts of a human being (Webster) 2. By synonym- using a word or phrase that shares a meaning with the term being defined. Ex: Hashish – marijuana. 3. By origin or semantic history – Ex. Yoga comes from the Sanskrit “to join” 4. By Illustration – Ex: Known for their shedding their leaves in the fall, deciduous trees include oaks, maples, and beeches.
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Based on Concepcion Dadufalza, “Supplement on Definition,” in Reading into Writing 2: A Handbook-Workbook-Reader for Critical Reading and Writing in Expository Discourse (Makati: Bookmark, 1996), 184-186.
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5. By function – Ex: A thermometer measures temperature change. 6. By analysis (Breaking down wholes into parts, aspects into levels, and a process into steps) Ex: The republican form of government has three branches: the executive, the legislative, and the judiciary. 7. By likeness or similarity – Ex: Brighter than 100million suns, quasars stand like beacons on the shore of the universe… 8. By analogy or metaphor –Ex: The germs and bacteria or antigens are like a gang of villains invading our body, attacking our unseen defenders, the layers of macrophages, cytokines, and lymphocytes, 9. By contrast- use of opposites Ex: Unlike those of gas, the particles of plasma are electrically charged. 10. By negation – stating what a term is not. Ex: Wild rice, an American delicacy, is not rice at all but the seed of a tall aquatic grass.
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[Since these purposes and techniques of definition will be helpful in understanding concept papers and writing them, you would do well to discuss these in class.] Lesson Proper
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Unlocking Verbal Difficulties. After asking the students to identifying their meanings, ask them to use these expressions in sentences.
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1. Back country - sparsely inhabited rural areas; wilderness. 2. Infamous- extremely bad reputation
Main idea and supporting ideas
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Point out that the concept, a Tagalog-borrowed word has been modified,
and made part of the English language. What is the main idea (thesis) of the text? What are the supporting details? 1. Thesis - Boondocks refers to a remote rural isolated or even wild area. 2. Supporting detail 1- Borrowed from the Tagalog word, bundok, meaning mountain, the word now refers to any rough country, with the letter-s added to make it refer to locations.
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3. Supporting detail 2 -Earlier used by the U.S servicemen during the world war to refer to the remote swampy areas used for training, it later referred to distant, rural areas. 4. Supporting detail 3 - Boondockers, a derivative, are shoes suitable for rough terrain. 5. Supporting detail 4- Boonies became the slang equivalent of boondocks.
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A. Structure The short text is a mini concept paper that consists of a core definition clarifying the meaning of the term, boondocks, and the expansion
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of this core definition. Study the chart below.
The expansions of the core definition consists of the origin of the term from the Tagalog word; the Americanized version which adds –s to the word, in keeping with the American way of referring to locations (as in the woods, the damps.); the popular use of the term by American soldiers for remote training areas; the unpleasant linkage of the term to an investigation into the death of a recruit; and the later day use of the term without that infamous 73 All rights reserved. No part of this material may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means electronic or mechanical including photocopying – without written permission from the DepEd Central Office.
history. Boondockers, shoes for rough areas, and bonnies, the slang version of boondocks, are derived from the term. (also “expansions” on the defined term) This tracing of the origin of a word and the development of its meaning is called etymology.4 Providing the origin of a term and its semantic
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(or meaning) history is one technique of definition.
Learning Activities. How Well do You Know Our Own Language? Engage the students in these two activities.
A. Dyad Activity: Filipino words borrowed from Foreign Languages.
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Provides student - partners a copy of the following grid listing several Philippine borrowed words, and their meanings, but leaving the last column blank. (The teacher’s copy has all the columns for his/her reference). Make each dyad (or partnership) guesses the foreign language from which the
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word or expression was borrowed: they should write I for Indian (Sanskrit), IM for Indonesian-Malaysian, C for Chinese (Mandarin), J for Japanese,
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and S for Spanish.
[This activity may be done orally too, with you asking after each answer why the students think it is an Indian or Chinese borrowing.]
After filling out the last column of the grid, they write their observation
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about Philippine/Filipino words in one sentence. Then each one comments
on what this activity reflects about language in general, and on Filipino/Philippine language in particular
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In linguistics, etymology refers to “the history of the forms and meanings of words,” and how their form and meaning have changed over time. Glossary of grammar and Rhetorical terms http://grammar.about.com/od/e/g/etymologyterm.htm.
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Language Language Borrowed Origin From
Meaning
1. Bibíg
Bibir
Mouth
I
2. Daán
Jalan
Street, Road, Way
I
Bathara
Supreme Being
IM
hī–kau (H)
Earrings
C
5. Dahan–dahan
dandan
Slowly, carefully
J
6. Abante
Avante
Ahead, forward
S
7. Palayók
Periuk
Cooking pot
I
8. Budhî
Bodhi
Conscience
IM
9. Lawin
lǎoyīng (M)
Hawk
C
10. Habà
Haba
3. Bathalà 4. Hikaw
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Filipino Word
J
Ambicioso
Ambitious
S
12. Sintá
Cinta
Love
I
13. Kathâ
Gatha
Fabrication, Tall Story
IM
só–sî (H)
Key
C
Kaban
Sack of rice
J
11. Ambisyoso
14. Susì
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15. Kabán
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Length, breadth
Aviso
Warning
S
17. Dukhâ
Dukkha
Poverty
IM
18. Sukì
chu–khe (H)
Regular customer
C
19. Katól
katori-senkō
Mosquito coil
J
20. Saráp
Sedap
Delicious
I
21. Giyera
Guerra
War
S
22. Tawad
Tawar
To bargain, To forgive
I
23. Tausi
tāu-si (H)
Fermented beans
C
Mahardikka
Nobility
IM
Mukha
Face
IM
tama-tama
Just right
J
27. Kalye
Calle
Street
S
28. Teka
te-yuka
Wait
J
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16. Abiso
24. Mahárlika 25. Mukhâ 26. Tamang-tamà
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B. Brief Etymological Narratives. Ask these questions: Did you know that these words have been included in the Oxford English Dictionary (OED)? Where and how have we used kikay? Do you know the little stories behind our own use of these words? Ask each student to examine two of the Tagalog loan words below, now included in the Oxford English Dictionary (OED). Make the students write a brief paragraph narrating their mini- stories, starting from their
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original use in Tagalog/Filipino, their new coined forms, if any, the probable reason for their having been included in the OED (when other words have not), and end the paragraphs with their new meanings found in the OED. (There may also be a semantic change, when new meanings are assigned
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to existing words. For instance, how did the word salvage, acquire its new rescue”? ) 1. kikay 2. gimmick 3. barangay
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4. kuya
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meaning, “to execute summarily,” a far cry from the usual meaning, “to
5. suki
6. salvage Example:
Balikbayan literally means “return (balik) to one’s country
(bayan). The compound word was coined from the earlier practice of
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Filipinos immigrating to Hawaii for work, then returning to the Philippines to retire with ample savings. Anyone who had gone to work abroad and returns to the country, whether temporarily or permanently, is now a balikbayan. Although generally connoting an elderly but moneyed returning immigrant, today, it also means a richer returning OFW. Also, it can be used with “box” as a modifier (i.e., balikbayan box) to refer to a box of presents either as arrival gifts for relatives and friends, or as a special package of clothes, small appliances, and goodies sent by an overseas worker to the family on Christmas, or other occasion. 76
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Give this Learning Activity on Etymological Narratives as part of an assignment: Asking relatives/older person about the stories behind the words vis-à-vis their present meanings given in the Oxford English Dictionary, ask the students to narrate more interesting background stories of the words. Then request the students to share their word narratives to the class. Ask their views regarding the continuing growth of the English. Also ask them what factors could have contributed to the adoption of these
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Make the students realize that their brief paragraphs explaining the original meanings and changed meanings of the Filipino words comprise mini concept papers. How?
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“expansions.” They could make their own visuals for these.
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Assessment (The students’ answers to these questions reflect how well they have understood certain basic principles of the concept paper, including the mini version.)
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Complete the statements with the best phrases. Write the letters only. A concept paper is written mainly to : a. distinguish between the old and new meaning of a word/concept. b. trace the development of a word from its old form to its new one. c. clarify the meaning of a concept. At the heart of a concept paper is usually: a. the definition of the term. b. the semantic history of the concept. c. a distinction between its standard and slang versions. The etymology of a concept or word clarifies: a. the changes in the meaning of the word. b. the original form of the concept. c. the origin and development of the word/concept. In the paragraph on the boondocks, boondockers is: a. the etymology of the word. b. the plural form of the term. c. a derivative from the term. d. a slang version of the term.
Answers:
1. c- Whatever the technique(s) used, the paper is meant to clarify the
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meaning of a concept. Distinguishing old and new meanings, and tracing its semantic history helps in accomplishing this purpose.
2. a- Again, the technique of tracing the origin and development of a term and its meanings helps clarify the term/concept, but the core strategy usually used is definition. 3. c- Etymology traces, not just the origin, nor the change in meaning, but the origin and development of the term. 4. c- Boondockers is an acceptable word derived from the word boondocks.
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Feedback: Provide these positive comments as feedback: 1. Scoring 4 points: You show a very laudable understanding of the lesson. 2. Scoring 3: One mistake is a good indication that you have generally learned the basics of writing a concept paper. 3. Scoring 2: You may need to reread the lesson and re-do the exercises in order to prepare you better for the more complex versions of the concept
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Summary
Boondocks, from the Tagalog word, bundok (mountain), refers to a remote,
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even wild area. Its ending in –s, and changed spelling reflect how borrowed words may be modified to suit the new meaning and use given it by the American borrowers.
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The mini concept paper may consist of the definition of the word; in this case, its origin and changed meaning. The addition of the new uses of the word
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“Months of the Year” and “Days of the Week” Clarifying Concepts Through Etymological Narratives Motivating Introduction Motivate the students with these instructions. 1. Think of the origins of place names – Manila (Maynilad), Ilocos, Sultan Kudarat 2. Think of the origins of terms named after people- Watt, pasteurize, shrapnel,
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galvanize, mesmerize Lesson Proper
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Read and React
1. Unlocking verbal Difficulties. Ask the students to look up the meanings of these terms and use them in sentences. a. forage for food
c. full of whimsy d. flatfootedly
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b. thongs
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prosy and downright english
g. potency of medicine h. shrivel
vault of the sky
j.
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2. Comprehension guide a. Ask the students to complete the following table summarizing the origins of months of the year and the days of the week. Include both the Latin/Italian and English origins.
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Roman/ Italian Origin Janus
Meaning/Des cription Two-faced god looking to the past and the future – Thong (februa) beating of barren women by two young men
English origin Wulf-monath or wolf month
February
Februaria goddess of
SproteKalemonath
Meaning/ Description The bitter cold made wolves forage for food in the villages Cabbagesprouting month
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Month/ Day January
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March April May June July August September October November December
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b. Inform the students that other origins of words include the Greek or Latin root words, modified by the prefix and suffixes. Examples given are
words
for
time,
place,
size,
and
shape:
Anachronism,
Antediluvian, Antipode, Primeval, and Archipelago. Geographical
names include mesa, Delta, Estuary, Longitude, Latitude, and Cloud.
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c. Provide them this “Lesson Supplement: On Etymologies:” i. Etymology of a word as the origin of that Word: The word etymology is derived from the Greek word ἐτυμολογία, etymologia, itself from ἔτυμον, etymon, meaning "true sense," and the suffix -logia, denoting "the study of." ii. Around seventy-five per cent of English words come from Greek and Latin roots. Hence, you can multiply your word bank a hundredfold if you are familiar with these roots. Below are thirty common root words from Greek and Latin.
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Thirty Useful Greek and Latin Roots Greek and Latin Roots
Meaning
Examples
Bios
Life
Biography, biology
Capt
Take, hold, seize
Capture, Captive
Cede, Cess
Yield, give away
Concede, recede
Chron
Time
Chronology, chronic
Cred
Believe
Credit, credible
Culpare
Blame
Culpable
Cosm
World, universe
Cosmic, cosmos
Dem
People
Dic, dict
Speak, say
Duc, duct
Lead
Fac, fec
Do, make
Gamos
Marriage
Bigamy
Geo
Earth
Geographic, geocentric
Write
Graphic, graphology
Metron
Measure
Metronome, geometry
Mit, miss
Send
Remit, dismiss
Study of, science of
Biology, astrology
Place
Postpone, position
Ped
Foot
Pedestrian, biped
Phobia
Fear
Hydrophobia
Por
Carry
Portable, transport
Psyche
Mind, life, soul
Psyche, psychology
Pyr, pyros
Fire
Pyrotechnic, anti-pyretic
Scrip, script
Write
Scripture, inscribe
Spec
Look
Spectator, inspect
Stat
Stand, put in place
Statue, stature
Vers, vert
Turn
Versatile, convert
Vid, vis
See
Video, visualize
Voc, vok
Call
Invoke, vocation
Vol
Wish
Voluntary, benevolent
Terra
Earth
Terrain, terrestrial
Logos
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Dictator dictate
Induct, conduct
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Pon, pos, posit
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Graph
Democracy, endemic,
Factory
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Prefixes change the meaning of the root word. Hence, recognizing prefixes and their meanings would help the learners build bigger word stores. Meanings
Examples
Ab Bene Circum Equi Extra Intra Inter Intro Mal Multi Mis Non Syn Pre Poly Post Dis Dis In (ie/il/im)
Away from Good Around Equal Outside Within Among Into Bad Many Wrong Not Together with Before Many After Opposite of Depriving of, away Not, in, towards Before, in favor, moving forward
Absent, abdicate Benefactor Circumference Equidistant Extra-curricular Intramural Intercontinental Introduce Maltreat Multimillionaire Mistake Non-existent synagogue Premarital Polygon Postgraduate Disrespectful Disappear, disrobe Insignificant, inbreed, infer
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Under, below, lower in rank
Super Hyper Hypo Trans Un Com, con Ex De Re
Over and above, beyond Over, above, excessive Under, beneath, below Across, beyond Not, the opposite of With, together Out of, former Down, away Back, again, anew Against, reverse, prevents, cures, neutralizes Of, off, not, without
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Sub
Anti A, an
Prophet, propel, pro-labor Submarine, subordinate, subhuman Superman, supersonic Hyperbolic, hyperacidic Hypodermal, hypoglycemic Transcontinental, transcendental Unclear Compartment, committee Export, ex-mayor Descend, deport Repay, restore, re-elect Anti-labor, antiperistalsis, antitoxin, antacid Akin, amentia, agnostic
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Another affix, the suffix, changes the meaning and use of the word. It is usually placed after the root of the word. This chart could help the learners master how suffixes indicate the uses of the words. Meanings
Part of Speech formed by Suffix
Examples
-ate
To become, to produce
Verb
Vaccinate, salivate
-ment -ness
Act of, state of
Noun
Enjoyment firmness
Act of, state of
noun
One skilled in In the manner of Worthy of, capable of
Noun Adverb
Adjective
Characterized by, full of
Adjective
-less
Without
Adjective
Ize, ise Yze
To do, to perform
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-or -ess -ee -ist -ian -ant -ore -yer
Propensity Diversion Pediatrician Politely Adorable Sensible Deceitful, tremendous, atrocious, Toxic, handy
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-ity -sion, -cion -ian -ly -able -ible
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Suffix
Verb
A person who
Noun
A person who
noun
Senseless Apologize Chastise paralyze Actor Preacher, actress Honoree, Pharmacist Custodian Assistant Commodore lawyer
Again, suggest that there are myriad possibilities of combining roots, prefixes, and suffixes. Concluding Learning Activities 1. Breaking Down Words. Break down the following words into their prefixes, suffixes, and roots. Then guess their meanings. An example is provided for you. 84 All rights reserved. No part of this material may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means electronic or mechanical including photocopying – without written permission from the DepEd Central Office.
Words
Roots
Prefixes
Microcosmic
Cosm (world)
Micro (small)
Suffixes -Ic (characterized by, being)
Meaning Being or like a miniature world
For the Students in these Tracts: a. Academic Track – Subterranean, predictability, biogenetical, pandemic, inscription, blitzkrieg b. Art and design- chiaroscuro, iconography, kinetic art, mural, simulacra
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zoomorphic
c. Tech-Voc – apprenticeship, flexicurity, benchmarking, pan frying, infertility d. Sports – aquabatics, decathlon, eggbeater, flamme rouge, haute école e. IA and IT – intranet, metadata, wire framing, software, website,
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2. Etymology Discovery. After consulting a dictionary or the internet for the history of each word, write a two-sentence description of the origin of each. a. Academic- chauvinism, malapropism, forum, gerrymander, gargantuan, namby-pamby, cabal,
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b. Art and design- tragedy, nasty, muse (noun), paparazzi, graffiti c. Sports- marathon, nutmegged, soccer, basketball, hat trick, pomme sandwich, French fries, chickpea,
hackneyed, boycott,
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d. Voc Tech,devilling,
e. IA and IT- Omnigraffle, Axure, bug, Apache, spam, virus, Google
Summary
1. The etymological stories behind words, like those of the months of the year
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and days of the week, can be both entertaining and thought-provoking. These origin stories though may be very different from the present meanings and uses of the words.
2. As a strategy for clarifying terms, etymological narratives could form the introduction of a concept paper. 3. The study of words, their roots, prefixes, and suffixes, could help the learners understand polysyllabic words, or form new words from these building blocks of words.
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“Ketchup” Semantic History Motivational Introduction Give these reflection questions for the students. 1. Think of Sauces for Foods a. Enumerate the sauces used for Filipino dishes and describe each. b. Enumerate the sauces for fast food favorites and describe each.
contemporary foreign dishes. 2. Think further
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c. Compare and contrast our native sauces and their uses with those of
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a. Have you heard of “KBL” (mix of kamatis, bagoong, and lasona or onion) and its uses as dip for barbecued meats and fishes? b. Have you tried the popular biting sauce of pickled pepper (vinegar,
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salt, and cayenne) used for meat dishes, especially kilawin?
Read the Essay and React to It
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Unlocking Verbal Difficulties. Ask the students to look up the meanings of these terms and use them in sentences. 1. distinct 2. exotic
3. ingredients
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4. mass-produced
5. staples of the kitchen
Comprehension Guide Questions Ask them these guide questions: 1. What makes the “ketchup” (or catsup) we know different from its Asian ancestors? 2. How do the Chinese “ke-tiap” and the Indonesian “ketjab” differ? 3. How did the English modify the Singapore-Malaysian-borrowed “kechap”?
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4. To whom may be attributed the American version of the ketchup? 5. How did Heinz make the tomato-based ketchup more popular and marketable? Structural Analysis Let the students know that the text uses a basically chronological organization. 1. Introduction: States the thesis - Today’s tomato-based ketchup is different
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from its Eastern ancestors. 2. Body: Traces the development of the sauce from its Chinese origins. a. Chinese: The 17th century ke-tiap sauce was made of pickled fish, shellfish, and spices.
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b. Indonesian: The dark ketjap consisted of fermented black soy beans, cooked and sweetened.
c. English recreations of the Malaysia- and Singapore-borrowed sauce in 18th century: included mushrooms and walnuts.
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d. American version in mid 19th century – Thomas Jefferson’s addition of tomatoes to the ketchup.
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e. Popular version since 1876 - Henry Heinz’s mass-production of the tomato-based sauce
3. Conclusion: Heinz’s improving the marketability of the sauce in 1880 through
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a slogan and the creation of sixty-five other various products.
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Concluding Activities 1. Contextualized Activities. Make the students do these activities. a. Academic track – Research and report on the different sauces/dips or dressing used by the Japanese, Chinese, Korean, Indian, and Malaysian/Singaporean for: i. Dipping and Mixing ii. Braising or Glazing iii. Tossing and Coating
v. Marinades for Grilling b. Tech Voc – Triad Project:
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i. Concoct at least three distinct sauces/dips made of a combination of local products (vinegar, patis, gata, tomatoes, calamansi, garlic, onion, pepper, cucumber, sesame seeds, honey, and the like); record the ingredients/recipe; and
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conduct a taste test among your classmates for the most preferred sauce/dip. Create a grid reflecting their preferences.
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ii. Interview Charlie’s Prichon or other lechon stories about the seven sauces for their pita wedges of fried suckling pig: hoisin, honey mustard, white garlic, chili tagalog, sate, honey
lemon, and liver (traditional lechon sauce)
c. Sports- Create a taste test competition involving different food sauces. d. Arts and Design- Prepare an artistic visual page (web page or
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cartolina) on the “Five Mother Sauces Every Cook Should Know.” Considering color weights, font sizes, and other design principles, project an appealing but informative visual.
2. Practice Exercise: Chronological Development Ask the students to read the essay below and construct a two-level topic outline tracing the development of the salad dressing.
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History of Salad Dressings
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Salad dressings have a long and colorful history, dating back to ancient times. The Babylonians used oil and vinegar for dressing greens nearly 2,000 years ago. Egyptians favored a salad dressed with oil, vinegar and Asian spices. Mayonnaise is said to have made its debut at a French Nobleman’s table over 200 years ago. Salads were favorites in the great courts of European Monarchs. Royal chefs often combined as many as 35 ingredients in one enormous salad bowl, and included exotic green ingredients such as flower petals. England’s King Henry IV's favorite salad was a tossed mixture of new potatoes (boiled and diced), sardines and herb dressing. Mary, Queen of Scots, preferred boiled celery root diced and tossed with lettuce, creamy mustard dressing, truffles, chervil and hard-cooked egg slices. In the twentieth century, Americans began using basic dressing ingredients (oil, vinegar or lemon juice, and spices) to create an infinite variety of dressings to complement salads. Prepared dressings were largely unavailable until the turn of the century. Until then, home chefs had to start from scratch. Due to variations in ingredients, partly because of lacking storage conditions and year-round supply sources), results varied significantly. Gradually, restaurants began packaging and selling their consistent dressings product to customers, and the salad dressing industry began. Many of the major brands of salad dressings available today were on the market as early as the 1920’s. In 1896, Joe Marzetti opened a restaurant in Columbus, OH and began to serve his customers a variety of dressings developed from old country recipes. He began packaging his dressings to sell to restaurant customers in 1919. In 1912 Richard Hellmann, a deli owner in New York, began to sell his blue ribbon mayonnaise in wooden containers. One year later, in response to a very strong consumer demand, Mr. Hellmann began to market the mayonnaise in glass jars. In 1925, the Kraft Cheese Company entered the salad products business with the purchase of several regional mayonnaise manufacturers and the Milani Company (which led to Kraft’s initial entry into the pourable dressing business with French dressing as its first flavor).
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Summary 1. Thesis – The tomato-based ketchup used today is different from its Asian ancestors. 2. Body – From the Chinese ke-tiap of pickled fish, shellfish, and spices, to the Indonesian ketjap of sweetened and cooked fermented lack soy beans, the sauce was modified by the English with their addition of mushrooms and walnuts, until it was further enriched by tomatoes by Thomas Jefferson. Heinz mass-produced the tomato-based sauce.
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3. Conclusion – A marketable slogan plus various varieties made the Heinz ketchup popular.
4. Order of development – A chronological presentation of development stages
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“Mercury Pollution” Causes and Effects for Clarification Motivational Introduction Provide the students with this background Information:
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Minamata disease (M. d.) is methylmercury (MeHg) poisoning that occurred in humans who ingested fish and shellfish contaminated by MeHg discharged in waste water from a chemical plant (Chisso Co. Ltd.). It was in May 1956, that M. d. was first officially “discovered” in Minamata City, south-west region of Japan’s Kyushu Island. The marine products in Minamata Bay displayed high levels of Hg contamination (5.61 to 35.7 ppm). The Hg content in hair of patients, their family and inhabitants of the Shiranui Sea coastline were also detected at high levels of Hg (max. 705 ppm). Typical symptoms of M. d. are as follows: sensory disturbances (glove and stocking type), ataxia, dysarthria, constriction of the visual field, auditory disturbances and tremor. Further, the fetus was poisoned by MeHg when their mothers ingested contaminated marine life (named congenital M. d.). The symptoms of patients were serious, and extensive lesions of the brain were observed. While the number of grave cases with acute M. d. in the initial stage was decreasing, the number of chronic M. d. patients who manifested symptoms gradually over an extended period of time was on the increase. For the past 36 years, over 17,000 people from Kumamoto and Kagoshima prefectures have claimed to have been Minamata disease victims. Of these, 1,408 have passed away, but even before the official discovery of Minamata disease, caused by Chisso Company, many had died from it. In 1964 Minamata disease also broke out along the Agano River in Niigata prefecture, where the Showa Denko Corporation used the same production process. Elsewhere in the world, damage to health due to mercury pollution from factories has also been reported along the Songhua (Sungari) River in China, and in Canada. And in recent years rivers and lakes polluted by mercury in the Amazon and Tanzania have created serious health problems.
Make the students reflect on these questions: 1. How certain are we that the fish and shellfish we eat are free of mercury poisoning? 2. Are the people near mining areas and coal plants aware of the dangers of mercury pollution?
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Ask the students to read the text on “Mercury Pollution.” 1. Unlocking Verbal Difficulties. Make the students look up the meanings of these words:
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Acid rain Vaporizes Plant emissions Aquatic food chains Phytoplankton Interconnectivity Miniscule Ecosystem Vulnerable Ameliorate Extensively Cataclysmic events
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a. b. c. d. e. f. g. h. i. j. k. l.
Comprehension Questions. Ask these questions as guide for comprehension: 1. Based on Par. 1, what may be a definition of environmental pollution? 2. How grave is the mercury pollution arising from coal-fired plants?(Par. 2)
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3. Explain how mercury can poison our food chain. (Par 3) 4. Can we say that with the Clean Air Act, mercury levels are now safe in the
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USA? Why? (Par 4). Would our own waterways be free of mercury pollution? 5. Why is the natural process of methylation dangerous to humans and wildlife? (Par 5)
6. Explain why humans may be easy victims of toxic methyl mercury. (Par 6) 7. Compare the short term and long term impacts of mercury pollution. (Par 7) 8. Clarify how our interconnectivity has made us strong in the face of
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“cataclysmic events,” and yet, ironically, it is “this interconnectivity that has made our ecosystem vulnerable.”
Structural Analysis. Explain how the text is organized: 1. Introduction: Paragraph 1 presents the view that environmental problems are usually discussed in general terms; hence, there is a need to focus on the specific threats to the environment, particularly, mercury pollution.
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2. Body of the Text a. Causes: The largest sources of mercury pollution are far-flung coalfired plants b. Process: The process by which mercury pollution goes up the food chain is explained. c. Effects (1.) In the USA, long-term effects of mercury pollution on the environment have remained.
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(2.) Methylation affects aquatic life, humans, and wildlife. (3.) More troubling than the short-term effects of digesting toxic mercury are the long-term effects of mercury pollution on the food chain and on the next generation of fowls.
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Concluding Activities
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a. B.A. and Econ: Comparison of the Cost of Damage Caused by Minamata Disease in the Area Around Minamata Bay to the Cost of Pollution Control and Preventive Measures (Unit: million Japanese yen per year); Cost for Pollution Control and Prevention Measures; Yearly average paid by Chisso Co., Ltd., in the form of investments to control polluted areas.
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b. Science and Acad: The negative effects of mercury pollution led to the promulgation of the Minamata Convention in October 2013. Research on the provisions of this treaty, the signatories, and its objectives.
c. Tech-Voc: Research on the levels of mercury pollution in sea foods in coastal areas. Is red tide less dangerous than mercury pollution? d. Arts and Design: Prepare posters reflecting the gross damage on the victims of the Minamata disease. e. Sports: Research on the levels of safety of the beaches, bays, and lakes used for swimming by athletes, tourists, and citizens of areas 93 All rights reserved. No part of this material may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means electronic or mechanical including photocopying – without written permission from the DepEd Central Office.
near coal plants and gold and nickel mining. Prepare a grid detailing the levels of safety and pollution of these various areas. IA and IT – Create a mixed graphic design emphasizing the dangers
f.
of air pollution/mercury pollution
2. Practice Exercise Ask the students to research on a specific environmental hazard which Filipinos should address.
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Make them follow the organization of the essay, “Mercury Pollution,” as they write a topic outline of an imaginary essay on that specific environmental hazard based on the results of their research. Include the cause(s)/source(s) of the hazard as well as its short-term and long-term
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A topic outline provides a quick overview of major and minor ideas to be included in an essay. Each division or member of the subdivision employs
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words and phrases in parallel structures. Generally speaking, the following outlines represent possible frameworks for organizing their essay:
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1. Comparison – contrast
2. Chronological arrangement 3. Sequential ordering
4. Advantages - disadvantages / Pros vs. Cons 5. Cause - effect
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6. Problem - solution
Summary
1. Concept clarified: Mercury pollution 2. Strategies used: Causes of mercury pollution; process analysis of mercury pollution affecting the food chain and ecosystems; short-term and long term effects of mercury pollution with examples. 3. Order of development: Inductive method leading to a clearer understanding of the process of mercury pollution and its effects
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“Hormones in the Body” Classification and Functions Motivating Introduction Cite instances in which old scientific views had been challenged and replaced:
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1. All matter was once thought to be composed of various combinations of classical elements (most famously: air, earth, fire, and water). This was finally refuted by Antoine Lavoisier's publication of Elements of Chemistry, which contained the first modern list of chemical elements, in 1789. 2. Aristotelian physics was challenged and replaced by Newtonian physics, then later superseded by relativistic physics and quantum physics. 3. The continental drift theory was incorporated into and improved upon by plate tectonics. Show that continuing scientific investigations and experiments have been crucial in directing our way of life. Predicting typhoons and rainfall have helped us prepare for possible disasters. Campaigns to eat natural and organic foods rich in
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vitamins and minerals have made us re-examine our diets. Ask the students to cite
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some more examples. Lesson Proper
Reading the Essay and Reacting to It 1. Unlocking Verbal Difficulties. (May be given as an assignment) Considering the context of the word or phrase, ask what these
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expressions from the text would mean: a. b. c. d. e. f. g. h. i. j. k.
Challenged the view (Par. 1) Regulate the production (Par. 1) Coordination of processes (Par. 2) Spurred (Par. 2) Categorized (Par. 3) Exocrine system (Par. 3) Intricate (Par. 4) Alleviate ailments (Par. 4) Hormone therapy (Par. 5) Estrogen (Par. 5) Progesterone (Par. 5) 95
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l. Tempered their enthusiasm (Par. 5) m. Pathologically small (Par. 6) n. Foolhardy (Par. 6) o. Dispense it (Par. 6) 2. Comprehension questions. Ask these questions.
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a. What was the old view regarding the communication system and behavioral processes in the body? b. How was this view challenged? How was it proven that chemicals, not nerve impulses, spurred body processes? c. What kinds of definition are used for “hormone” to replace secretin? Why would “hormone” be preferred to “secretin’? d. Which glands make up the endocrine system? What about the exocrine system? e. Which hormonal functions would you consider “less obvious but difficult to track?” f. What are the functions of the hormone replacement therapy (or HRT)? What are some risks of HRT? g. When are human growth hormone (HGH) treatments given? Why should physicians and researchers be very careful about prescribing human growth hormones? 3. Structural Analysis. Explain the following:
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a. The main idea or thesis of the essay: Hormones, not nerve impulses, regulate body processes. b. Introduction: Background information on the regulators of body processes. By the twentieth century the old view that the nervous system controlled communication system in the body and resulting behavior was challenged by William Bayliss and Ernest Starling. Their experiments showed that secretin produced by intestinal cells “regulate the production of chemicals in a different organ, the pancreas.” c. Body: Definition, Classification, and Functions of Hormones. 1.)
2.)
Explain the definition. Coordination of processes could be done by chemicals alone. The term applied to the chemical is “hormone,” derived from the Greek word “hormone,” to excite. Hence, the formal definition of “hormone” as “the chemical produced by one tissue to make things happen elsewhere.” Classification or Categories of Hormones a.) Those produced by the endocrine system secrete hormones directly into the blood stream. b.) Those produced by the exocrine system are used outside the bloodstream, mainly for digestion.
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3.)
Functions of Hormones
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a.) Key roles – regulate body processes that without them could cause death. b.) Less obvious but far-reaching roles - Modify moods, affect human behavior, personality, etc. c.) Hormone Therapies 1.) Hormone replacement therapy (HRT) a.) Used for women’s middle age problems of mood swings, sudden changes in temperature, and other discomforts. also, for bone weakening b.) Problems associated with HRT include risk of heart disease, cancer, and blood clots in bloodstream 2.) Human growth hormone (HGH) a.) Mainly for children with growth problems b.) Caution practiced by researchers and physicians because of risks associated with HGH
Make the students do these assessment activities:
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A. Comprehension Questions. Select the best phrase/clause to complete the
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1. “Hormone” is derived from:
a. the Greek word “hormon” which means “to excite” b. the chemical secretin produced by body organs c. the label for the chemicals given by William Bayliss and Ernest Starling
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2. Glands of the endocrine system: a. secrete hormones into the bloodstream b. control the voluntary body movements c. include the pancreas and the mammary glands 3. Exocrine glands secrete substances: a. that they pour into the bloodstream b. that they release into an external environment c. that they exchange for the hormones from the endocrine glands
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The pancreas performs: a. exclusively digestive functions b. both endocrine and exocrine functions c. produces only enzymes for digestion
5. Suppressing appetite, or calming aggression, or even changing one’s attitude to others a. may need simple hormone therapy. b. may involve only tiny amounts of the right hormones.
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c. tap intricate hormonal systems. 6. Hormone Replacement therapy (HRT), which has been used for decades,
aged women.
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a. prescribes a combination of estrogen and progesterone for middle
b. addresses mood swings and discomforts in old age. c. may cure some types of cancer.
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a. they may not have sufficient background on the therapy. b. new methods have doused their interest in the therapy.
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c. this therapy could have serious side effects. 8. “Foolhardy” in “It is foolhardy to dispense it” means a. hard-headed.
b. dangerous and risky. c. recklessly bold.
9. Human growth hormone (HGH) may be given
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a. to speed up growth of youngsters. b. to improve digestion and to delay aging. c. to children who would be pathologically short without it.
10. Before the twentieth century, scientists believed a. those nerve impulses were the engine for thought, body movements, and processes. b. that the chemical secretin controlled body processes. c. that body relied only on chemicals for its processes.
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(Answers: 1. a, 2. a, 3. b, 4. b 5.b, 6. a, 7. c 8. b, 9.b 10. a) B. Performance Assessment All Tracks - Dyads: Research on the various endocrine and exocrine glands, and their functions. Prepare a table of these glands and functions.
Summary Sum up the lessons learned from the text
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1. Content – The concept paper focuses on how the study of hormones by William Bayliss and Ernest Starling replaced the old view that the nervous system controlled body processes. It defines the hormone, using both the origin of the term, and a formal definition. The paper
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secretes
hormones
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body processes and those crucial to life. Others are less obvious functions, but still important, for they affect moods, personality
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development, and growth. Hormone therapies include HRT for middle aged women problems and HGH for growth problems. Because of the after effects, however, physicians and researchers have to be cautious about prescribing them.
2. Structure – Share this brief analysis of the text structure
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a.) Core Definition – After the background on the challenged old view that the nervous system controls body processes, the core definition of the hormone is given. b.) Body: Expansions of the definition come in the form of: (1.) Categories of hormones and their functions. (2.) Contrasts between these types and functions (3.) Special uses of the hormones – the hormone therapies a.) The uses and risks of the HRT b.) The uses and risks of the HGH.
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“Paleolithic Art” Clarification through Theories Motivating Introduction 1. Think cave paintings Ask the students how familiar they are with the Altamira caves and their polychrome paintings and engravings of animals and hands that extend to 270 meters in the cave. Do they realize that these arts on cave walls date
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back to the Stone Age? 2. Think further
Do they know that critics found that “all the essential features of art
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converge at Altamira par excellence?” Those artistic techniques (drawing, painting, and engraving), the treatment of shape and use of the medium, large formats and three dimensionality, naturalism and abstraction, symbolism: were all in Altamira? That in 1934 Henri Moore found the works
Lesson Proper
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Reading and Reacting to It.
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so stunning that he called the ancient art “the Royal Academy of Rock Art?”
1. Unlocking Verbal Difficulties
Tell the students that before discovering what made the cave art so
impressive, they must look up the meanings of these difficult words: paleolithic inaccessibility remoteness hypothesized reconstruct discredited enigma contemporaneous concave convex polychrome occasionally
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a. b. c. d. e. f. g. h. i. j. k. l.
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2. Reading the text and reacting to it Ask these questions to facilitate comprehension of the text: a. Why could these art works discovered in 1879 not have been mere decorations? b. Why did some believe that the ancient hunter-artists might have attributed magical properties to the images? c. Why would the “hunting-magic” and “food-creation” theories not hold? d. What other suggested theories have been discredited? Why? e. Why can we not be certain of any explanation for the prehistoric art? Distinguish between a “positive” and a “negative” hand imprint which
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f.
abounds also in the cave art in Pech-Merle.
g. What insight about cave painting might the Pech-Merle animal carvings suggest?
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h. Why do you think were cattle and bison painted on convex surfaces; horses and hands on concave surfaces?
3. Analyzing the broad structure of the text. Share these views with the students:
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a. Main point – Because no contemporaneous explanations could be recorded during these prehistoric times, the cave arts will remain an
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enigma.
b. Supporting view 1- Various theories suggesting why the dark wall caves served as murals for animal and hand paintings have been discredited.
c. Supporting view 2 – Even the probable reason why concave and convex surfaces were used for certain subjects especially in Pech-Merle cannot be
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determined.
Concluding Activities Require the students to comply with the tasks specified.
1. Assessment Questions Make
the
students
write
their
concise
answers
to
these
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b. Why could the representations of human hands be considered “signatures” of cult or community members,” more than of individual artists? c. What is your theory behind the use of bulging rock surfaces for the bison and cattle paintings, and the horse and hand paintings on concave surfaces? 2. Contextualized Activities a. Academic Track: Research on enigmatic ancient art forms, and explanations in a two-paragraph essay.
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suggest possible theories for their creation. Write these possible b. Art and Design: Research on the "The Angono Petroglyphs" (Filipino: Mga Petroglipo ng Angono) as the oldest known ancient cave arts in
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the Philippines, and write a two-paragraph essay on its distinctive features and significance. c.
Tech-Voc: While nutrition science and the media are bombarding us with novelty diet plans and healthy eating secrets, would the answers lie in the Stone Age ancestors’ or Caveman Diet? Explain what the
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Paleolithic Diet (or Paleo), Stone Age, or Warrior diet is, and why we should adopt the eating habits of cavemen of around 10,000 years
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ago. What could be the benefits and risks from this diet? Write your explanation in a two-paragraph essay.
d.
Sports: What is/are the first ever sport(s) invented? Explain how and
why the Paleolithic and Neolithic men could have engaged in this/these sport(s).
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Summary
Various theories attempt to explain why prehistoric hunter-artists covered
cave walls with animal and hand paintings and engravings, and why some surfaces and techniques were used; however, these theories have been discredited. Since there are no contemporaneous recorded explanations during the Paleolithic era, these amazing art works remain an enigma.
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“Words to the Intellectuals” Fidel Castro Definition with Expansions Motivating Introduction 1. Think. Ask the students what comes to mind when they hear the term
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“revolutionary.” 2. Think Further.
Do they think that an artist can also be a revolutionary?
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Lesson Proper
Reading the Essay and Reacting to It.
Before the students read Fidel Castro’s famous speech to the intellectuals in 1961, introduce the author to them.
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1. Getting to Know the Author
Share these important data about the revolutionary author:
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Cuban leader Fidel Alejandro Castro Ruiz (1926- ) established the first communist state in that continent after leading an overthrow of the Fulgencio Batista’s military dictatorship in 1959. He governed the Republic of Cuba as Prime Minister from 1959 to 1976, and then as President from 1976 to 2008, or until he handed off power to his younger brother Raúl in 2008. “Although Castro’s rule successfully reduced illiteracy, stamped out racism and improved public health care, it was widely criticized for stifling economic and political freedoms.”
2. Unlocking Verbal Difficulties Ask the students to familiarize themselves with the meanings of these terms as they are used in the essay: a. exploited b. ideology c. vanguard of the people d. renounce 103
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e. stifle art f.
material sense
g. posterity h. self-hypnosis i.
incorrigible
3. Comprehending the Text Ask the students these guide questions to help them understand the text:
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a. To whom does Fidel Castro address his message? b. Which goals and objectives constitute the revolutionary’s concerns? c. What should be the basis or perspective for the revolutionary’s actions, and goals, for fighting for the good, the useful, and the
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beautiful?
d. What then constitutes a truly revolutionary attitude?
e. What is the duty of the Revolution to artists who do not oppose the Revolution but do not have a revolutionary attitude?
Which facets of a better life for the people should the revolutionary work for?
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g. What should be the twin goals of the artist? h. Why should the artists create for their contemporaries, not for posterity?
Concluding Activities
Make the students comply with these requirements:
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1. Assessment
Ask the students to write their answers to these critical reading
questions on a sheet of paper. a. "Within the revolution, everything; against the revolution, nothing." This was the catchphrase of the historic 1961 meeting of Cuban artists and intellectuals when Fidel Castro made his famous address, "Words to Intellectuals." Explain what this framework of cultural freedom of expression in the early years of the revolution meant.
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b. Would all intellectuals and artists be happy working within this framework? 2. Contextualized Activities a. Academic. Read about the Cultural Revolution in Cuba and try to deduce its social and educational implications. b. Art and Design. Research on how art played a key role in the Cuban revolution and how Cuban art remained dynamic despite the repressive government.
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c. Tech-Voc. Considering the renewed ties between the USA and Cuba, what are the places of artistic and cultural importance that a tourist may now visit more freely?
d. Sports. How have the athletes been affected by the cultural revolution
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in Cuba? Explain in a two-paragraph essay.
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“Why Sinigang?” Doreen G. Fernandez Influences, Effects, and Examples Motivating Introduction 1. Think Food. Ask the students what their favorite dish is. What would be the most preferred dish among the various regions?
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2. Think Further. Ask them: If they realize that among the Cordillerans, where coconut milk is rare, would not sinigang be also rare? Which recipe would the mountain folk choose for the meat from the hunt? In the Ilocos Region where “vinegar Iloco” and fish sauce (or bagoong) seem to be the preferred
Lesson Proper Reading the Text and Reacting to It
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condiments, which would be the favorite dishes?
1. Getting To Know the Author. Introduce our food expert to the students
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before reading what she has to say about sinigang: Doreen G. Fernandez was first an outstanding teacher (with a Metrobank Award to her name),
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writer, cultural historian, and scholar of Philippine theater. Second, she was an iconic food critic who wrote several columns and books on Filipino cuisine. 2. Unlocking Verbal Difficulties: Make the students look up the meanings of these words to ensure a more productive reading: a. adaptable
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b. ubiquitous
c. teeming seas d. pristine quality e. proliferation f.
simmered
g. succulence of roots h. cuisine i.
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k. nuances l.
improvisation
m. abysmal poverty of imagination 3. Understanding the Text Ask the students these questions to help them comprehend the essay: a. Which factor has primarily shaped the Filipino taste? b. Enumerate the varied uses and preparations for rice.
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c. What products do the “dietary constant,” the coconut yield? d. Which factors have given birth to the rich variety of “native cuisine?” e. How has the native cuisine been influenced by the Chinese? How have our dishes been enriched by the Spaniards?
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4. Analyzing the Text Structure. Explain to the students that the essay may be divided into two parts: how the topographical and geographical features of the country shaped the native cuisine, and how the foreign influences have
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enriched our dishes.
a. Ask the students to explain how the island landscape has provided
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various foods from land and water, and shaped the manner of preparing them.
b. Make the students explain the distinctive influences that the Chinese and the Spaniards had on our cuisine.
Concluding Activities
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1. Assessment Questions. Make the students answer the following questions on ruled paper: a. In what way would sinigang be a metaphor for our taste for food and our cuisine-shaping experience? b. Are the vast variety of our foods and the wide range of food preparations a testament to our versatility and creativity as a people? Explain your answer.
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Contextualized Activities: a. Academic. Conduct a survey among the students in your school as to which would be their choice of our national dish and why – adobo, chicken barbecue, nilaga, paksiw, sinigang, pinakbet, and laing? Present the results of the survey in a two-paragraph essay. b. Art and Design. Compile and present to class a visual design of the five most exotic dishes in the country. Accompany this with a page containing brief descriptions of the dishes and what have influenced their recipe
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creation. c. Tech – Voc. Prepare a table of Philippine regional dishes specifying the top product of the region, the corollary favorite dish and food preparation.
d. Sports. Prepare a game focused on “How Well do you Know Our Native
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Summary
Share this lesson summary with the students.
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1. Main Idea. The Filipino cuisine is a product of our island landscape and the influence of the Chinese and the Spaniards.
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2. Supporting Details.
a. Influences on our “native cuisine” come from the “island landscape,” its bountiful surrounding waters and the land (from which we have gathered and produced various animal and plant food products), the weather and seasons (which spawned various foods at various times of the year), and the means and lifestyle of the people (which
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determined the simplicity or complexity of their recipes and preparations).
b. The foreign influences that enriched our cuisine came from the Chinese (with the “noodles explosion) and the Spaniards (with their “rich recipes”).
3. Conclusion The Filipino cuisine identity seems reflected by sinigang.
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“The Sentiments of Kundiman” Definition, Comparison, and Illustration Motivating Introduction Make the students listen to a tape of “Nasaan Ka, Irog?” Then ask them to react to the melody and to the music. 1. Think. Ask the students what they thought and felt about the melody and the lyrics. Do they realize that that song is considered the best example of the
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kundiman during the revolutionary period? And that Francisco Santiago and Nicanor Abelardo, the composers, are two of the greatest composers of the kundiman?
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2. Think further. Ask the students how their favorite contemporary songs compare with the kundiman. Do they feel that the kundiman is more Filipino yet old? Lesson Proper
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Reading the Essay and Reacting to It
1. Unlocking Verbal Difficulties. Ask the students to look up the meanings of
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these words associated with the earlier song types: a. madrigal b. erotic
c. sentimental d. jocose
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e. rhythmic pattern f.
melodic Inflection
g. forerunner h. predominating i.
invocation
j.
chanson
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2. Comprehending the Essay. Clarify that the essay mainly explains the meaning of the concept, kundiman. Ask them these questions to guide them in understanding the essay and its methods of clarification: a. How does the essay define kundiman? What kind of definition is used? b. What are the characteristics of the kundiman? c. Which was allegedly the favorite song of the Filipino soldiers during the revolution?
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d. What are the other early types of Philippine music? e. What are the similarities among the kumintang, the awit, the balitaw, the danza, and the kundiman? What are their differences? f.
What is distinctive about the awit?
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g. How do a folk song and an art song differ?
3. Analyzing the Devices Used. Make the students analyze the way the main point is developed:
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a. Ask the students what elements are compared to show the kinship among the kundiman and other early song types.
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b. Ask them what other devices of clarification, and patterns of development are used, in addition to definition and comparison. How effective are these in clarifying the nature of the kundiman?
Concluding Activities
1. Academic. Research further on the kundiman, particularly the famous
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composers, their contributions to the creation/modification of the kundiman, and their major pieces. Write these data in grid form.
2. Art and Design. Ask a musical group to tape a rap version of Jocelynang Baliwag. Let the class listen to this version, later, to the kundiman version. Then write a paragraph comparing the class reactions to the two versions. 3. Sports. Create zumba moves to the tune of the folk songs, “Salidom-ay,” and “Tsit-si-rit-sit.”
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Summary To conclude discussion on the essay, share this summary with the students. 1. Main Idea – The kundiman is an erotic and gloomy love song with a serious melody, and sung on various occasions, including serenading the beloved. 2. Supporting Details – The kundiman is related to the kumintang, the awit, and the Bisayan balitaw in terms of accentuation/ rhythmic pattern and time signature. 3. Contrast – Unlike the folk song, the song of the common people, the
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kundiman is an art song composed with its music and lyrics perfectly
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“Our Very Own Arnis” Pepper Marcelo Etymological Definition and Chronological Development Motivating Introduction 1. Think Self-Defense. Ask the students, males and females, what their mode of self-defense is. Which style of martial arts do they practice? Do the
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females realize that they can be good at arnis? 2. Think Further. Ask them if they know that arnis has been made the national sport. Do they also know that arnis is now a required physical education course?
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Reading the Essay and Reacting to it
1. Unlocking Verbal Difficulties. Ask the students to know the meanings of these arnis-related terms: a. Martial Arts
c. Baston
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b. Eskrima/Kali
d. Sipa or sepak takraw
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e. appropriating Filipino martial arts f.
ARPI
g. bickering groups
2. Comprehending the Text. Pose these questions as guides for the students’ understanding the text:
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a. What are the different fighting styles covered by the term “arnis?” b. What is the significance of former President Gloria M. Arroyo’s signing RA 9850 into law?
c. What is the significance of making arnis a national sport? d. What are the implications of the use of Filipino martial arts by big time international action stars? e. What problems are posed by the number and variety of arnis fighting styles? f.
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3. Analyzing the Structure of the Text. Inform the students that a topic like revitalizing arnis as a national sport effectively uses a definition and discussion of developments chronologically. a. Starting point: Defining and describing arnis, and its various names, strategies, and use of weapons or no weapons. b. Chronological development: 1.) Signing into law RA9850l declaring arnis a national sport and making arnis a required P.E. course
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2.) Renewed interest in arnis and its cultural importance with the rise of foreign martial arts 3.)
Inspiration for arnis from international actions stars;
especially Bruce Lee’s using Filipino martial arts
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4.) ARPI’s efforts to unite and consolidate various bickering schools of arnis
5.) Promoting arnis by making it an event in the Palarong Pambansa and featuring it in national and international events Performing Learning Activities
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1. Academic. Make a comparative study of the various Asian martial arts in
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terms of fighting styles, nationwide participation, and possible success rate for self- defense.
2. Art and Design. Watch Jay Ignacio’s “Bladed hand.” Then write a mini concept paper on the Filipino martial arts as a “testament not only to the great masters of FMA, but also to the inherent struggle to keep the Philippine indigenous fighting arts alive and swinging.”
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3. Tech Voc. Discuss modern arnis as a blended system initiated by Remy Presas, and compare it with the traditional arnis fighting and its/their strategies. In effect, this is your mini concept paper clarifying what modern arnis is. 4. Sports. Demonstrate to the class the different arnis styles of fighting/selfdefense, in the process, distinguishing the different types of arnis -- kali, escrima, tjakalele, and arnis de mano. Submit a mini concept paper discussing these different types, with sketches or illustrations of the moves/strategies.
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“Fusion vs. Fission” Isaac Asimov Definition with Comparison and Contrast Motivational Introduction 1. Think. Make students reflect on the current problems besetting the world and the country. The teacher may ask these questions.
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a. Next to the carnage and destruction inflicted by the ISIS, which are the gravest global problems beleaguering the world? b. What are the top problems that our country faces?
c. Can you rank these problems according to the most important for
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global and national concerns?
2. Think further. Ask the students these questions to make them think more deeply for answers.
a. What will the world’s major source of energy when and if oil supplies will run out?
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b. What are the country’s alternative sources of energy? Can these alternative sources of energy replace oil when and if the country can
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no longer import nor produce sufficient oil?
c. Can we rely on solar energy as substitute for oil as energy source? d. Would atomic or nuclear energy and its wastes be made safe enough for daily use?
e. Do you think there is an ongoing energy race among the super
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powers, the way there were some arms race and space race in the past?
Lesson Proper 3. Read and React. Before reading the excerpt from “Tomorrow’s Energy,” make the students know who the author, Isaac Asimov is.5
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“Famous People: Isaac Asimov” in http://www.thefamouspeople.com/profiles/isaac-asimov158.php
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a. Would they know that this immigrant to America
was a great
professor of biochemistry (with a Ph.D. in biochemistry from Columbia University), who taught science, wrote science books for children and adults, wrote hundreds of fiction (including novels), first used the term robotics, and developed the Three Laws of Robotics? The National Robotics Week in the USA is held annually in his honor. b. Moreover, he introduced the world to various literary genres, but especially to “science fiction.” He founded the Committee for the
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Scientific Investigation of Claims of the Paranormal (CSICOP), and won these prestigious awards: Thomas Alva Edison Foundation Award, Howard W. Blakeslee Award, Boston University's Publication Merit Award, and the Special Hugo Award.
does this mean?
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c. Trivia- Aside from “robotics,” he also coined the term “spome.” What
4. Unlocking Verbal Difficulties. Can the students guess the meanings of
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these words as they are used in the paragraphs of the text? The dictionary can always be the referee for the right meanings:
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a. fusion – merging of two different elements b. fission- splitting into parts c. coalesce- combine to form a whole d. subtly - cleverly
e. prime- first in quality f.
virtually- essentially; for all means and purposes
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g. “haves” and “have-nots” – rich; poor
5. Read the Essay Critically by answering these guide questions. (The teacher may refer to the italicized answers and the grid for reference.) a. What is the main idea of the essay? The twenty-first century’s major source of clean and cheap energy may be from fusion power, in which “very small atoms are combined into somewhat larger ones”6
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Ibid. 152.
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b. Would you agree with this view? Why?
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Yes. The renewable alternative sources of energy (solar, hydroelectric, wind, biomass, etc.) cannot provide the needed energy for the world. Solar energy, for instance, is very dilute; not properly or equally distributed geographically. Nuclear energy from nuclear power plants has been feared because of the grave dangers from leaks and accidents, like those of the Three Mile Island accident in the USA, the Chernobyl and the Kyshtym disasters in the Soviet Union, and the Fukushima Daiichi disaster in Japan. But if energy can be harnessed from nuclear fusion soon, its promise of cheap and clean energy would be preferred by everyone.
6. What are the differences between nuclear fission and nuclear fusion? [First, a
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science student could be requested to explain the processes of fission and fusion as illustrated by the two pictures below. Then a grid drawn on the board and filled up during class discussion or as a report of two science students, could draw more interest.]
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Nuclear Fission- when a nucleus splices in two or more smaller nuclei. This means 7 that fission is a form of elemental transmutation. Nuclear fission releases energy
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These illustrations and explanatory notes on nuclear fusion and nuclear fission are borrowed from http://www.joeruff.com/artruff/physics/Student_Pages/The_Atom/Nuclear%20Decay.htm.
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Nuclear Fusion- when multiple nuclei join to form a nucleus that's heavier. It releases or absorbs energy depending on the mass of the nuclei
Fission vs. Fusion
Fusion
entails breaking down large atoms into dangerous radioactive materials uses uranium, a rare metal
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Process
Fission
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Bases for comparison:
Energy source By- Product
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Safety
Energy produced Advantage
produces dangerous radioactive materials large quantities of uranium are used; if anything goes wrong, radioactive substances escape into the environment produces considerable energy per pound of fuel As long as the radioactive substances do not leak into the environment, nuclear fission is a good source of energy.
very small atoms are combined to form larger ones uses deuterium, found everywhere there is water. produces helium, a very safe substance small quantities of deuterium are used; if something goes wrong, the process simply stops.
produces four times energy more per pound of fuel. cheap and clean energy; accessible fuel sources everywhere there is water
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7. Nuclear fusion seems a lot better than fission, but what then would be the drawbacks to its use?
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a. Safety - Some quantities of mildly radioactive substances could also be produced; hence, these have to be kept out of the environment. b. Starting Fusion process - More problematic is the difficulty of setting up and holding in place the needed 100 million degrees centigrade to make fusion going. American, British, and Soviet scientists have “steadily come closer” to producing the needed magnetic fields, or laser beams, but are not yet there. Even when the magnetic fields or laser beams are ready, there will be the need to set up gigantic power stations to keep the source of fuel constant, and to keep the environment safe from pollution.
8. If the device and technology for fusion energy would happen, in what way would it be “an energy without geography?”
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Since every country has access to water, including seas and oceans, every country would have access to fusion energy. Understanding the Structure of the Essay
You may ask how the body of the essay is developed.
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1. Why is fusion continually discussed in relation to fission? The two energy sources are opposites; hence, they are continually contrasted. Since fission is better known with the current use of nuclear energy, well-known aspects are discussed.
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a. Hence, the core definition of fusion is simultaneously introduced with the definition of its opposite, fission. b. Expansions of the initial definition come in the form of contrasts between the more familiar fission in terms of the process of production, the energy source, the by-product, the safety, especially of the by-product, the amount of energy produced, and their overall favorable or unfavorable impact on the world. Again, the structure follows the core definition with expansions pattern. However, since the term and its expanded characteristics are clarified better by the use of contrast (between a virtually unfamiliar concept and a relatively familiar one), both the core definition and the expansions employ contrast too:
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Fusion
Initial Definition: Contrast in process
Expansion 1: Difference in energy source
Expansion 2: Contrast in By-Product
Expansion 3: Difference in level of Safety
Combination of small atoms into large ones
Deuterium, everywhere in water
Helium, safe
Small amounts used; if it goes wrong, process stops If w/ Considerable energy problem, dangerous radioactive substances harm people and environmen t
Process: Breakdown of large atoms into radioactive materials
Uranium, rare
Radioactive materials, dangerous if leaks to environment
Expansion 5: Contrast in overall Advantage Cheap, clean energy; ubiquitous sources of fuel Safe as long as no leaks and accidents happen
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Fission
Expansion 4: Difference in Amount of Energy produced Four times that of fission per pound of fuel
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Structure Or Device Used in the Essay
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c. Conclusion- To end the essay with a certain impact, not only the thesis, that fusion provides a cheap and safe alternative source of energy is reiterated, but also a memorable point is added– the possibility of obliterating the economic gap between the haves and the have-nots through nuclear fusion.
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Concluding Learning Activities
Ask pairs of students to think together to do the following:
1. Dyad Descriptions of Binary Opposites. Specifying some criteria/bases for contrasting description, pairs of students could inform the rest of the class about the opposite terms/words. A grid may be used.
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a. Tech-Voc :masculine vs. feminine livelihoods b. Art and Design: modern art vs. traditional art c. Sports: sports vs. e-sports/ athletes vs. video game players d. Art and Design: Art vs. craft; Artist vs. craftsman/artisan e. Academic Track: democracy vs. dictatorship patriarchal vs. matriarchal f.
IT and IA- security vs. privacy
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Example: First World vs. Third World Countries
Political status
First World Countries Rich and developed High level of literacy and education Technologically advanced
Ideology
Capitalist, democratic
Third World Countries Poor and underdeveloped Low levels of literacy and education Independent, but dependent on developed countries; often unstable governments May be capitalist or quasi-socialist, even communist
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Bases for Contrast Economic Status Education
2. Writing A Paragraph Using Contrast. Instruct the students write a twoparagraph body of a concept paper/ expository essay explaining one of the Using the
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terms above by means of the paragraph pattern of contrast.
concept paper, “Fusion vs. Fission” as your model, contrast the two concepts in terms of the bases you have enumerated. Summary
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1. If the meaning of a concept can be better explained by relating it to its opposite, contrasting the two concepts or ideas, in terms of various bases or
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criteria could be a very effective mode of paragraph development. 2. The essay structure could consist of an initial definition of the antithetical concepts, and expanded by asserting other contrasting characteristics or various points of differences between the two (such as in terms of the fuel used, the by-products, the degree of safety, etc.).
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REMINDER: Contrast is a paragraph pattern showing the differences between two objects, two activities, two processes, or two terms. Comparison, on the other hand, shows similarities between/among two or more objects, processes, or terms.
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“Things: Throw Away Society” Alvin Toffler Cumulative Clarification of the Concept Motivating Introduction 1. Think. Pose these thought-provoking questions about material values, about how they view their possessions, such as toys, clothes, cell phones, drawing
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sets, and other personal property: a. Have you ever considered wearing a paper wedding gown (females) and paper tuxedo? Would you keep these after the wedding ceremony or recycle the set into a curtain or table runner/ placemat?
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b. Do you still keep toys that you played with when you were in grade c. What is your dream gadget – the one you want to buy if you had the means? How long would you keep it?
d. If you had to leave your home because of a disaster, like fire, or flood
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waters, which three possessions would you bring with you? Why? e. Can you list some items that you used only once or twice, and then
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2. Think Further. Lead the class in reflecting further on the idea of materialism. Ask these questions:
a. Are you a materialist? In what ways? b. In what ways are you not a materialist?
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c. What do you think of paper napkins, non-returnable bottles, and other disposable products?
Objectives The teacher-guided reading of the essay, a sample concept paper, should not only clarify the meaning and implications of a “throw-away society,” but also afford the learners a model for planning an essay. As they deduce the thesis sentence and the supporting details, identify the strategy used for the introduction, then identify the patterns of paragraph development used in the essay, the students can later prepare 121 All rights reserved. No part of this material may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means electronic or mechanical including photocopying – without written permission from the DepEd Central Office.
a rudimentary plan for an essay, through a properly limited thesis sentence with at least three supporting details; then write an introductory paragraph modeled after the strategy used in the reading text. Lesson Proper 1. Read Alvin Toffler’s “Things: the Throw-Away Society.”
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a. The Teacher could spark up interest in the Author Ever heard of the best-seller Alvin Toffler? He “burst into the limelight in 1970 with the publication of Future Shock, a book that caught the spirit of the age with its challenging vision of a society being torn apart by the ‘premature arrival of the future.’ It became a worldwide best seller. Since then, he and his wife Heidi (who recently owned up to her half of the creative effort and put her name on their books too) have published a string of influential books. The Third Wave (1980) and Power Shift (1990) form a trilogy with Future Shock. Each one and the Tofflers' most recent book, War and Anti-War, takes a different lens to explore the technological and culture forces shaping the future. Although the Tofflers are often thought of as the world's most famous futurologists, two words that are definitely not in their vocabulary are predict and trend. "We believe nobody can predict the future," says Alvin. "We'll read the stuff that comes out of mathematical models, but we'll read it with a degree of skepticism. What we have constructed is a model of historical and social change." The transforming power of technology always plays a central role in the Tofflers’ books, but their first love was not science. Both studied English at New York University and then plunged into the Bohemian world of postwar Greenwich Village, writing poetry and planning novels. ``I was your typical liberal arts student. Math and science were absolutely the subjects that gave me the most difficulty. But for some reason, I knew at a very young age that technology was important, that science was important, and so I took a course in the history of technology and then read, read and read.''
2. Some difficult words may slow down the learners’ comprehension of the essay. The teacher could ask the students to guess their meanings from context, before looking up their meanings in a reliable dictionary and trying to use them in sentences: a. b. c. d. e. f.
eminently – outstandingly, prominently. humanoid - a synthetic human being. iridescent- producing a rainbow of colors. transience – fleeting; moving from place to place. inextricably – too tangled to get free; inescapably. sumptuous- lavish; suggesting great expense or size. 122
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g. radically altered – changed greatly or drastically. h. supplant – replace. 3. Make the students React to the essay by answering these leading comprehension questions, and in the process, guide the students in unraveling the meaning of the text. (The italicized answers guide the teacher.) a. What is the thesis of the essay?
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We are increasingly becoming a “throw-away society.”/ “We develop a throw-away mentality to match our throw-away products.” b. Do you agree or disagree with this thesis? Why?
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Yes, everyday we use “disposable” objects.
c. How does Toffler’s use of the Barbie doll aid in developing his main point?
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It shows how objects before, like the old Barbie doll, are being traded or replaced by newer and technologically improved ones. These new material objects have short, temporary relations with people, unlike the older generations’ possessions with which they have longer relations, like the old dolls which our grandmothers clung to until they disintegrated from sheer age.”
d. Rereading Par. 4, “What human-made things enter into and color” your life? (What values toward material objects have become a part of
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Each day we use disposable paper products (like napkins, tissue paper), box containers, plastic bottles, plastic bags, etc. which are so handy, so accessible, so replaceable that we do not need to wash or clean them.
e. What does Toffler mean by “Our attitudes toward things reflect basic value judgments (Par. 6)? If we love to acquire and use these disposables, these less durable, these short-lived objects for our everyday use, then we have foregrounded consumerist and materialist values. Also, since almost everybody is using these disposables, we have also been swayed by the fad or generation’s practices.
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Do you think that Toffler opposes the use of disposable products (such as Kleenex, paper towels, toothbrushes, lighters, etc.)? Explain. Yes, for these have become more numerous and crucial to our way of life. These “creations” have dictated our ways of life and changed our values.
g. Do you consider yourself a part of the “throw away” society? Why?
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Yes, we have been born into a world that uses disposables each day. In effect, we have gone with the flow. For instance, instead of using handkerchiefs that have to be washed after each use, a small box of tissue paper would be very handy.
h. Which is the best course of action to address the growing tendency to discard/throw away possessions?
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Perhaps the three R’s – reduce, reuse, and recycle,
To help the students answer the questions and to perform the tasks better, share with them these reminders/reviews:
Quick Review
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Reminder: A thesis sentence is the statement of the main idea of a text.
Ask a question. Use an anecdote. Use a quotation. Stress the significance of topic. Give a brief overview. Use a combination of methods.
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1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6.
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SUMMARY OF METHODS USED FOR INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPHS
SUMMARY OF PARAGRAPH PATTERNS FOR SUPPORTING DETAILS 1. Use examples or illustrations 2. Use comparison and/or contrast 3. Use a definition 4. Use analysis 5. Use an anecdote or brief story 6. Use classification and division 7. Use a combination of methods
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Learning Activity This activity enriches the students’ views on materialism as it relates to their lives. Moreover, as the planning activity forces them to prepare a main idea expressed in one sentence, and specify several supporting details under it, they learn the rudiments of preparing an outline for an essay. Ask the students to choose one of these topics, write an apt thesis sentence for it, then provide at least three specific details to support his/her main point/thesis.
promos succeed Thesis: Filipinos love CPA promos. Support:
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Example: Topic: Why Metro Deals /Ensogo/ Groupon Discount Sales / CPA
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Because the CPA “piso” fare affords almost 90% airfare discount for local and international destinations, many Filipinos take advantage of the opportunity to travel to places they may have wanted to see but never could afford.
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As CPA provides a year or several months of travel period, many Filipinos can map out what holidays/dates are most appropriate to book
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their schedules.
Since CPA has widened its local and international destinations, Filipinos have wider choices of vacation or pleasure trips.
Because CPA has upgraded its services and time schedules, Filipino travelers are generally satisfied with the improved services and wider
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choices of flight schedules.
1. Art and Design- Why do car manufacturers change body styles every year?
2. Tech-Voc - What effects do advertising gimmicks have on buying unnecessary home products?
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Practice Exercise Point out that the essay opens with an illustration, the practice of trading in an old Barbie doll for a new one, and that this illustration is also used to develop a point. Asking the students to go back to their thesis sentence, you make them think of an interesting opening paragraph, using one of the methods given in the “quick review.” This introductory paragraph(s) should employ an apt paragraph pattern that develops the first given supporting detail.
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Example: Opening Paragraph for the topic: “Why CPA Promos Succeed”
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A lot of Filipinos eagerly await CPA’s once-a-year “piso fare.” To them, this promotion makes a dream come true for it offers highly affordable airfare to both local and foreign destinations. Making one peso as the base fare and adding only the needed taxes for the choice vacation places, CPA offers traveler-friendly fares, ranging from P499 to P6, 999 during a given booking period for a whole year of travel period. Instead of paying P10, 000 for local travel, and P30, 000 or more for going abroad, many middle class Filipinos shell out only 10-50% of the usual airfare in order to visit places they may have long wanted to see but could not afford. Hence, this promotional fare is greatly loved and awaited by many not-so-rich travelers.
The teacher may need to emphasize the functions of the introductory paragraph(s): An introductory paragraph puts AIDA on a pedestal: attracts the readers’
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attention, arouses interest and desire to read, and goads the reader to act accordingly, i.e., goads him/her to read the paper.
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ASSESSMENT Part One: Comprehension Select the best answer. Write the letters only.
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1. This statement expresses the thesis of the essay: a. Humans’ relationships with things are increasingly temporary. b. Human-made things enter into and color one’s consciousness. c. The old society was based on permanence; the new one, on transience. d. Our attitudes towards things reflect basic value judgments. e. We have developed a throw-away mentality to match our throw-away products.
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2. “This will be even more true in a super-industrial society than it is today” (Par. 4) refers to: a. the contrast between human-made objects and natural objects b. the increasing appeal of technologically produced objects c. the intimate realities of human beings’ existence d. the difference between a natural environment and an industrial one
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3. The dramatic difference between past and future societies(Par 6): a. lies in the young girl’s attitude towards her new barbie vis-à-vis her grandmother’s clinging to her old one b. reflects diametrically opposed attitudes to life c. distinguishes between old permanent societies and new transient ones d. contrasts past and future values
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4. In the last line of Par. 7, “… she is inextricably embedded in a throw-away culture,” the phrase “inextricably embedded” means: a. hopelessly intertwined b. deeply related c. difficult to untangle d. inevitable to happen 5. Strong resistance to a throw-away culture is usually found (Pars. 8-9): a. among French housewives b. in poor societies c. in Sweden d. among pre-1960’s societies
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6. Synonymous with the term “throw-away culture” may be: a. a way of life characterized by products for short-term or one-time use. b. the American pattern of consumerism c. the crass materialism among the developed societies d. a decreasing interest in accumulating new products
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7. Aside from lower prices, what else would be significantly responsible for the paper explosion (Pars. 11-13)? a. cheaper cleaning costs b. opportunities for maximizing creativity and resourcefulness c. versatility in uses after the original purpose d. a new mentality together with altered values
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8. A very significant implication of the paper apparel explosion has been (Pars. 10-11): a. a change of attitudes towards fashion b. the affordability of fashionable wear c. the opportunities to sport the latest fashion d. an altered set of values
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9. How has the advent of disposable products affected people’s mentality (Par. 13)? a. increasing patronage of disposables b. greater variety and choices among products c. shorter relations with such products d. increased attachment to the products
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10. List at least three examples/ illustrations that reflect that your home is “inextricably embedded in a throw-away culture.” (Par. 7)
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Part Two: Concept Paper
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Structural Analysis 1. The paragraphs about the old Barbie doll (Par 1) and about the new improved version (Par. 2) reflect this paragraph pattern: a. contrast between old and new practices regarding Barbie dolls b. anecdotes about the Barbie doll c. details regarding the enticing features of the Barbie doll d. classification and division of Barbie doll owners 2. The texture of plastic, the glisten of a car, and the vision of a cityscape from a jet window (Par. 4): a. prove that human-made things are exponentially increasing b. show the difference between artificial and natural objects c. enumerate objects that color one’s consciousness d. provide examples of human-made things that are close to human beings 3. The most commonly used pattern(s) of paragraph development used by Toffler in this essay is/are: a. comparison and contrast b. illustrations and examples c. definition d. analysis e. Illustrations and contrast 4. The overall order of development is: a. climactic b. chronological c. inductive d. deductive 5. Several details and data given in Pars. 8-11 are corroborated by the use of: a. reliable examples from research b. contrast between past and later practices c. quotations/testimonies from researchers and observers d. evaluations from surveys
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Answers Part One: 1. E 2. B 3. A 4. D 5. B 6.
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7. C 8. D 9. C
10. Give three points to any illustrations of disposables (Answers may
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The use of disposables like paper napkins, bathroom tissue, toothpicks, paper towels, etc.
The containers of food- delivered products, like nuggets in cartons,
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fried chicken in cardboard buckets, pizza in boxes
Plastic and glass containers of drinks, condiments, soda, soy, vinegar,
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oil, chocolate, milk, etc. Part Two 1. A
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Feedback Here are samples of feedback that you may use: 1. If the student could answer all the questions correctly: Excellent! Keep up the good work! 2. If the student incurred one or two mistakes: You did well, especially in understanding Tofflers’ views and his modes of developing his ideas. 3. If the student had three or four mistakes: You are generally on the right comprehension track. Perhaps re-analyzing the paragraphs and their patterns
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of development more closely would help you appreciate Toffler’s concerns regarding our materialism, as well as the paragraph patterns he uses to clarify these.
4. If the student had five or more mistakes: You can improve this score with
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more practice. Since Toffler often uses examples and illustrations, think of what he is trying to clarify with the examples; and note what points he contrasts – old and new /Barbie dolls, young girl or older generation, natural
Summing Up
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things or technologically produced objects, etc.
1. Concept clarified. throw-away culture/throw-away society
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2. Strategies used. Illustrations and examples of human-made objects preferred, but easily replaced; contrast between past practices and present preferences, between past values, and present ones.
3. Order of development. Inductive method leading to a clearer view of a throw-away society: Starts with examples of technologically-produced objects
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coloring people’s worlds and changing their values, and ends with the view that we develop a”throw away mentality to match our throw-away products.
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Assessment Integrative Project: Writing a 500-word Concept Paper on Walls 1. Ask the students: What do we think of when we hear the term “walls”? Have you seen the longest human-made barrier and one of the wonders of the world, the Great Wall of China? Have you heard of the Sacsayhuaman Wall of Cusco Peru whose boulders are so tight that paper cannot slip through? That the walls and gate of Babylon, one of the great
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wonders of the world, was made of blue glazed tiles, and had alternating rows of bas-relief aurochs and dragons? That Hadrian Wall, the longest wall of Europe was built by the Romans to prevent the tribes of Scotland from entering Brittania, their colony at the time?
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That the Walls of Troy are a monument to the ten-year Trojan War in the epic, Iliad? That the remaining part of the Temple Wall in East Jerusalem where people pray is called the Wailing Wall? That the Germans today are ashamed of the cruel experiences connoted by the Berlin Wall? That the old
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capital of the Philippines was a city within Walls?
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2. Of Famous Artistic Walls
Do the students also realize that there have been a number of walls
known thru the centuries for the great murals they display: paintings and sculptures of renowned artists, artistic renditions of literary texts? Palace walls, church and temple walls, street walls, home walls, museum walls, murals of literary texts comprise great showcases of artistic talents as the
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power point shows.
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The Famous and Infamous Walls of the World, the Tangible and Intangible Divides (A Power Point Presentation) 1. As the students watch the presentation, you give the background of each slide, from the domestic walls to the famous walls (given as Notes to each slide)– why they were built, what distinctive qualities these had, what they reveal of the builders then, the significance of these in our world history: a. well-known walls reflective of world’s events b. artistic walls showcasing various forms of art and human values and
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concerns c. intangible walls reflecting human and inhumane relations, as well as socio-economic, political, religious, psychological, and other concerns. 2. At the end of the presentation, the students should be able to note what walls
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are; what their different types and uses have been; their building materials, and architectural qualities for the tangible walls, the causes and effects of various intangible walls. Prewriting Stage
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1. Physical Walls. In preparation for a paper on “walls,” the students working on
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physical or tangible walls should create a grid detailing the location of each of the famous walls, its builders, the reason for the construction, the materials and design, and its current status. All the walls with similar functions are placed together for easier classification.
2. Famous Walls
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Name
Location
Construction Date
Distinctive Characteristics
Materials
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3. Art Walls are also physical and tangible, but they have different functions, structural patterns, materials, modes of presentation, and the like( Ex: murals, museum and gallery walls, exhibit walls, temple and church walls, renditions of literary texts on walls, house walls and fences.) 4. Intangible and Symbolic Walls. These walls show various facets of human relationships, concerns, or values. Choose one group of intangible walls and provide different types, the characteristics of each, and the ways by which the walls may be broken down or built.
class, high class, super rich
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a. Socio-economic classes – poor, lower middle class, upper middle b. Religious divides – Christian, Muslim, Hindu, Buddhist, Taoist, Shinto, Sikhism, Jainism, Judaism, etc.
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c. Racial – white, black, brown, yellow, red
d. Political divides/ parties – Democrats, Republicans; Labor Party, Conservative, etc.
e. Ideologies –capitalism, socialism, communism, etc.
Sexual politics – sexist, feminist, masculinist, LGBT,
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g. Confessionals- Church private confessions
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Psychological walls
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Cordon sanitaire
k. Mental health institution walls
5. After preparing your grid or outline of your choice of wall group, write a 500word theme on walls – building walls, or breaking walls. You may use a core
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definition which you expand by any combination of methods – examples, classification, comparison and contrast, functions, causes and effects, and the like.
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Writing a Position Paper
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A Position Paper Every now and then, we find the need to take a stand on an issue. How do we defend this stand? How do we convince others about the soundness of our position? This section trains the students to write an effective position paper.
1. Values Communicated a. Logical Thinking b. Objective expression of ideas
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Guidelines for Writing the Position Paper
2. Modes of Reasoning a. Inductive
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Inductive reasoning derives a generalization from specific examples and situations. Through an organized presentation of factual evidence
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and proofs, the reader is convinced of the soundness of the arguments that lead to a well-founded general conclusion.
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b. Deductive
Deductive reasoning proceeds from a general statement that leads to particular or specific inferences.
3. Qualities of a Convincing Position Paper a. Contains a clear proposition or statement that must be defended
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b. Assesses conflicting opinions or opposing views on the issue. c. Takes a firm stand on the issue. d. Lists arguments in an organized manner to defend the stand. e. Presents factual evidence or proofs to support each argument.
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“The Case for Short Words” Introduction 1. Inform the students that language is arbitrary and writers choose words freely. Many students think that their writing becomes more impressive when they use highfalutin, ornate, polysyllabic words, and complicated syntax. Simple language and have greater impact on the audience, according to some scholars.
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2. Ask the students how they choose words when they write their compositions. Do they use a dictionary or a thesaurus? What kind of words do they prefer? 3. Ask their bases for their reference.
4. Ask the students to comment on the following ending lines from the famous
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poem “Ulysses” by Alfred Lord Tennyson.
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“Made weak by time and fate But strong in will To strive, to seek, to find, and not to yield.”
The same idea can be expressed through similar expressions: Original Text
weakened
made weak
strong-willed
strong in will
struggle
strive
discover
find
unyielding
not to yield
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Alternative Expression
Call their attention to the influence of rhythm (i.e., the succession of stressed
and unstressed syllables), brevity, and syntactic structures, specifically parallelism, or the poet’s choice. Give the class these last two lines of William Shakespeare’s “Sonnet XVIII”: Ask them to react to these verses.
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Lesson Proper 1. What is the proposition of this selection? 2. Ask the students to prepare a list of the reasons given in the selection for using short words. 3. Encourage the students to express their stand on the issue of using short words whenever possible. Concluding Activity
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1. Let the students express their initial position on one of the following issues: a. School uniforms should no longer be required.
b. The Mother-Tongue-Based-Multilingual Education (MTBMLE) policy should be implemented up to Grade 6.
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2. Assign the students to look for evidence to support their position.
3. Ask the students to write a position paper. Tell them to mention the evidences they found to support their reasons. Show them how to cite their sources
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“Doubts about Doublespeak” Motivating Introduction
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Ask the students if they have heard of people who work as “sanitation engineers” or as “governesses.” Or they have probably encountered expressions such as “persons who are chronologically advanced in age” or those who are “vertically or horizontally challenged.” Do they know what these expressions mean? Sanitation engineers may not have a college degree or formal training in engineering. These people were once (or still are) referred to as “custodial workers” or “janitors” or even “street cleaners.” Governess is a dignified term for a nanny. Senior citizens, the elderly, are indeed advanced in age. People who are too short or too tall face a “challenge” in height. “Informal settlers” squat on land that do not own. “Unconventional beauty” refers to the exact opposite of beauty. Tell the students to make a list of ten expressions similar to the ones given
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1. Ask the students what they think of these expressions. 2. Ask the students if they have used doublespeak at home or in school. Let them cite examples.
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Lesson Proper 1. Let the students read the selection. Tell them to outline it.
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a. What is doublespeak? b. What are the uses of doublespeak? c. What are the different kinds of doublespeak? Give some examples of each. d. Does the author favor the use of doublespeak? Present the author’s arguments for his position.
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“The Other Side of E-mail” Motivating Introduction 1. Find out from the students if they have an email or a Facebook account. 2. Ask them these questions: a. What is the purpose of your e-mail? Why did you open an e-mail account? b. How many messages do you usually receive/send in one day?
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c. Do these messages usually need immediate attention or action? 3. Let the students reflect on their need for the e-mail. Ask them how they took
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care of their communication needs before the e-mail was invented. Lesson Proper
1. Call the students’ attention to Par. 2, Sentence 2 which says: “Like all new media, e-mail has a dark side.” What purpose does this sentence serve? 2. Make the class prepare an outline that will list down both the advantages and
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disadvantages of the e-mail based on the arguments presented in the
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3. Ask the students if the author of this article totally rejects the e-mail. Concluding Activity
1. Let the students assess their need for their e-mail or Facebook account. 2. Ask them to comment on the good and bad effects of e-mail and Facebook on their own lives.
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3. Share with your students your own experiences and some news accounts you have read about some good and bad effects of e-mail and Facebook postings.
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“Women Talk Too Much” Motivating Introduction 1. Bring to class a sample manifesto on an issue concerning women and children (e.g., birth control or human reproduction, children’s welfare, women’s rights.) 2. Show your class how arguments are presented in the manifesto. Begin with the statement of the stand on the issue. Enumerate the arguments to defend
Use the following guide in assessing the document:
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this stand. Assess the effectiveness of each argument.
1. Is the proposition clearly stated? The proposition is the statement to be
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explained or proved. 2. How are the arguments presented?
3. Do the arguments support the proposition effectively? 4. Are the arguments logical and convincing? 5. Do they contain emotional words?
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6. Are these enough proofs to support each argument? Are the pieces of evidence based on reliable data?
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7. Are the arguments sufficient to prove the proposition? Lesson Proper
1. Let the students read the selection. Call their attention to its structure. Do the subheadings help in identifying the important ideas of this selection? 2. According to this article, what factors should be taken into consideration in
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determining whether women or men talk too much?
3. Ask the students to comment on the following statement: “Talk is very highly valued in western culture.”
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“r u online?” Motivating Introduction
Ask the following questions: 1. Is the title appropriate? How does it catch attention? Does it attract one to read on? 2. Compare how the writer begins and ends the article. How do they relate to
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3. Are these effective ways to introduce and conclude essays? Why?
4. How are young people who use the language of the Net referred to? (keyboard generation, Generation IM (instant messenger), wired teens)
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5. How is the language of the Net referred to? teen slang
evolving lexicon
Net Lingo
language of the keyboard generation
lingo online
writing to create speech
typed communication in a new era of speed
speed talking
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6. Does the writer agree with those who think that Net lingo is language that meets the young people’s “needs for self –expression,” as a “creative twist on
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dialogue,” and as “a new harmless version of teen slang”? +Or does the writer side with those who regard Net lingo as the “linguistic ruin of Generation IM”? Or does the essay sound neutral?
7. Early on, does the writer describe Net lingo as the re-creation of language in one’s own image, as teenagers have always done? How is this lingo being re-created? (through the use of new acronyms, abbreviations, and emoticons)
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8. How else does the writer describe Net lingo? In what way is it a combination of writing and speaking? (It is using writing to create speech; “typed communication in a new era of speed.”) 9. Does the writer show the good and bad effects, the “double-edged consequence” of Net lingo? a. Shy boys become comfortable talking online with girls, but in school their grammar suffers from abbreviated words and run-on sentences without periods.
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b. Boys and girls can multitask, but they are easily distracted and have shorter attention spans.
c. Net lingo, as the written slang of the young generation, assures them of “inness” or of belonging to that group, but strangers within could bring
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trouble, although the young are wary of them, and protect themselves by blocking subsequent messages of undesirable online friends. 10. How does the essay become convincing and credible?
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(through the use of interesting examples, statistics, and authorities)
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Contextualized Activities and Practice Exercises Assign the activity below which is appropriate for the student’s track: 1. Academic: Using Net lingo, write a short poem, paragraph, or lyrics to either a folk or a modern song.
2. Art and Design: Draw a cartoon showing a younger person using Net lingo while talking or writing to someone in the older generation.
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3. Tech Voc:
Invent new emoticons for Net lingo.
Beside each, write the
meaning of the invented symbol.
4. Sports: Pretend you are a sports announcer and use Net lingo to describe a basketball or volleyball game. 5. IT and IA:
Think of or search for other abbreviations, acronyms, and
emoticons not mentioned in the article. Then, list these down and share them with the class.
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Assessment Questions/Projects Let the students rewrite paragraph 3 using the formal style. Feedback (for activities)/ Assessment Results 1. Review some ways of writing formally: a. Spelling out words, instead of contracting and abbreviating them (e.g., it is – not it’s; television – not TV) b. Using objective, not colloquial words (e.g., wonderful – not awesome;
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many – not lots of; children – not kids; men or boys -- not guys) c. Speaking preferably in the third person, instead of first or second person (except in business letters)
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Reminder (Boxed Aide-Mémoire)
The writer assumes the position of neutrality by presenting both sides, but the pervasiveness of an optimistic tone hints at a positive attitude to Net lingo.
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Net lingo has advantages and disadvantages.
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“Is Bad Language Unacceptable on TV?” Motivating Introduction Show video clips of swearing in campaign speeches, movies, YouTube, rap songs, etc. Objectives
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To list down the arguments for and against swearing on TV
Lesson Proper (word meanings/verbal matters, questions, explanations, illustrations
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Watershed – the time (usually 9 P.M.-5:30 A.M.) when adult content or material unsuitable for children (e.g., violence, foul language) may be aired
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Organizing Survey Data
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Let the students classify the different positions in the article regarding the acceptability of bad language on TV. To do this, tell them to draw two or more columns with the headings “positive,” “negative,” “neutral,” etc. stands. Next, tell them to enter under the proper column, the specific
argument and proponent.
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Then, make them count how many total arguments there are in each
column, and enter the sum at the bottom. Call on some students to announce the specific arguments and total figures. Finally, make them reduce the number of items under each column by putting together similar arguments and labeling them as to the kind of argument (e.g., religious, mental, social or peer pressure, literary, etc.) Allow for further subcategorizations or even supercategorizations. Conclude the exercise by informing them that they have just done a systematic classification of results, and have begun to do a scientific study involving the process of taxonomy 146
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Concluding Activities Learning Activities and Practice Exercises 1. For all tracks, tell the students to enumerate two or more arguments in preparation for a debate on one of the following: a. whether bad language should be allowed on social media b. whether text spelling should be allowed in academic writing on any current political issue, such as federalism for the Philippines, the need for Bangsamoro, etc.
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2. Next, tell them to develop each argument in at least five sentences supporting the argument with details, facts, figures, logical reasoning, etc. Assessment Questions/Projects.
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Feedback (for activities)/ Assessment Results
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Reminder (boxed aide-mémoire)
Positions or arguments should be supported with facts, figures, logical reasoning, data, reports, testimonials, etc.
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Summary (winding up with reiteration of points) Most adults do not accept bad language on TV, and would want an expletivefree TV and environment for their children.
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“Good English and Bad” Motivating Introduction Ask the students what part of English grammar or what English lesson they find difficult. [Note their answers for a review of these specific grammar points at the end of the lesson.] Objectives
Lesson Proper meanings/verbal
matters,
examples, etc.)
Ask the following questions:
questions,
explanations,
illustrations
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To illustrate good English and bad English as subjective or relative labels
1. How does the title address the issue?
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2. How does the writer introduce the essay? In what way are the verb, the sentence, and the parts of speech in English grammar complex? Explain in
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what way the parts of speech in English are notional. 3. Give one historical reason why English grammar has become complex. Also, consider Smith, Wallis, Dryden, Defoe, Swift, and others, like U.S. President John Adams, Cardinal Richelieu, and Johnson. 4. Does English, like French, have an Academy to resolve language matters? What role is played by language authorities (e.g., the Fowler brothers, Sir
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Gowers, Bernstein, Safire, and Lowth) and dictionaries (e.g., Webster’s Third
New International, American Heritage, and Random House) in the preservation of good English?
5. Is the writer for or against bad English? Consider his attitude towards change in English rules on grammar and spelling. Concluding Activities and Practice Exercises Observing good grammar, make the students write any of the following that is relevant to their respective tracks 148 All rights reserved. No part of this material may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means electronic or mechanical including photocopying – without written permission from the DepEd Central Office.
1. Academic: an essay arguing for the inclusion of certain words and grammatical constructions as acceptable Philippine English 2. Art and Design: a justification for naming a certain work of art as the winner in an art contest 3. Tech-Voc: a paragraph explaining the reasons for voting for sinigang, adobo, or some other as the national dish, or for a certain delicacy as the national dessert; a paragraph persuading people to work as a tour guide, hotel receptionist, bellhop, etc. since it can be rewarding, financially and otherwise
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4. Sports: a paragraph for a flier to persuade people about the effectiveness of some gym equipment
5. IT and IA: a leaflet convincing the reader of the unique features of some
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hardware Assessment Questions/Projects
1. Ask the students to explain each correction given after each of the eight sentences listed in paragraph 4.
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2. Recall grammar difficulties brought up by the students in the Motivating
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Introduction, and discuss the relevant grammar rules. Feedback (for activities)/ Assessment Results Review rules on agreement in singular and plural number for the subject and the predicate, the subjunctive mood, and grammar lessons needed to
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reinforce or clarify their answers.
Reminder (boxed aide-mémoire) It is difficult to label some words and sentences as good English or bad English, since people -- be they language experts or ordinary everyday speakers -- do not always agree on which is good or bad grammar.
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Summary Although one can resist change in language usage so as maintain understanding and clarity (e.g., retaining the conventional spelling and meanings of certain words like cat, elephant, etc.), it is arrogant and futile to halt language change, since common usage is a stronger force than linguistic or academic authority in dictating the fate of new words, spellings, and meanings in language, whose nature it is to be fluid and
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“With These Words I Can Sell You Anything” Motivating Introduction Tell the class to take out their newspaper or magazine advertisements which they were assigned earlier to bring along with the article. Then, let some students show their advertisement and say why they like it. Objectives
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To identify weasel words in advertising so as to become more critical readers of misleading advertisements
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Lesson Proper Vocabulary
Read to the class the following definition:
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A “parity claim” asserts that the advertiser's product or service is at least equal in some or all respects to the product(s) or service(s) that are directly or indirectly described or named in the ad. (Feb 6, 2005 Defending and Challenging Advertising - Keller Heckman. ) https://www.khlaw.com/Files/3002_Leighton_DefendingAdvertising.pdf
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Class Activity Call a student to the board to write down the weasel words enumerated in the article. Then, divide the class into two groups, so that each student in the first group will show her/his advertisement to the entire class, while each student in the second group will identify the weasel word(s). Next,
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let the two groups exchange roles.
Concluding Activities Learning Activities and Practice Exercises (Enhancement/ Writing Assignment) 1. Let the students work in pairs to discuss what they will write: one will be a candidate for class president describing a planned volunteer project for the class, once elected; the other will deliver a campaign speech endorsing the candidate to the class.
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2. The project should be relevant to the speaker’s academic track; the endorsement should be on what the endorser learns to be the qualifications and qualities of her/his candidate. Assessment Questions/Projects Is the use of weasel words moral? Defend your position. The Reminder
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Let the students remember all the weasel words listed earlier on the board. Summary
An awareness of weasel words makes one think more critically about
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“The Great Global Warming Swindle” Motivating Introduction Ask them about the weather. Let them: compare past summers, observe whether it is getting hotter every year, and think of causes for such a change. Objectives To illustrate how to argue or support a stand or position by shooting down the
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arguments of the opposite side and presenting alternatives such as causes or effects other than those claimed by the other
Vocabulary
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Lesson Proper
1. Swindle – from German Schwindler, giddy person; akin to Old English swindan, to vanish
a. scam, fraud; defraud, gaff, gyp, to take money
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b. to obtain money or property by fraud or deceit c. first use: 1955
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2. spurious[is Pyur i yus] – not genuine, sincere or authentic; based on false ideas or bad reasoning
a. bogus, fake, false, forged, counterfeit, inauthentic or unauthentic, phony, sham
b. of illegitimate birth: bastard
3. proxy –representative; authority or power to act for another
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4. hype – deception, put-on publicity; especially: promotional publicity of an extravagant or contrived kind
5. pandemic – from Geek pandemos, pan all + demos people a. occurring over a wide geographic area and affecting an exceptionally high proportion of the population
(meanings, etc. above adapted from Merriam-Webster Dictionary online) 6. Hockey – stick temperature (or hockey stick controversy) – “a plot of the past millennium’s temperature that shows the drastic influence of humans in the 20th century. Specifically, temperature remains essentially flat until 153 All rights reserved. No part of this material may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means electronic or mechanical including photocopying – without written permission from the DepEd Central Office.
about 1900, then shoots up, like the upturned blade of a hockey stick” [similar to a golf club, but used for playing ice hockey] (from David Appell, “Sustainability: Behind the Hockey Stick,” March 1, 2005. www.scientificamerican.com)
Questions Ask the following questions: 1. Describe the great global warming swindle.
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2. Is S. Fred Singer’s position on the great global warming swindle positive (yesit-is-a-swindle) or negative (no-it-is-not-a-swindle)?
3. How do you ascertain (make known, learn, find out with certainty, make certain, exact, or precise) his stand?
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Consider, for example, the following: a. the title
b. the introductory first paragraph, which mentions Singer’s inclusion, as a climate scientist, in interviews for the documentary film The Great
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Global Warming Swindle vs. “an emotion presentation” from a single politician of an earlier documentary film, An Inconvenient Truth
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c. the concluding last paragraph, with his prediction about the attitude of future generations
4. Who are swindled? Who is the swindler? And what is the swindle itself? 5. Explain the hypothetical case in paragraph 5. 6. Explain the irony in paragraph 6 by reviewing the solutions to greenhouse gas reduction in the light of cutting fuel consumption.
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7. According to the writer, is global warming beneficial or harmful? Has sea level risen due to human-caused global warming or to natural causes?
8. Are the rhetorical questions in paragraph 8 effective? Why?
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Concluding Activities 1. Contextualized Activities and Practice Exercises (enhancement/ writing assignment) a. Academic: Write a position paper for or against mining/ golf parks/ rapid urbanization/other environmental concerns b. Art and Design: Write a position paper arguing for the importance of using recycled materials in construction (e.g., plastic bottles)/ fashion (e.g., paper mache belts and wallets)/ etc. Write an essay arguing for environmental activism in
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c. Tech Voc:
planting trees, flowers, and vegetables everywhere: along streets, rivers, railways; in backyards and flowerpots; on school campuses, etc.
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d. Sports: Write an essay arguing for the conscientization of certain sports (e.g., scuba diving, mountain climbing, surfing) so as to preserve and clean up nature.
e. IT and IA: Google the hockey-stick temperature chart and write a
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paragraph explaining the lines, colors, and trends.
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2. Assessment Questions/Projects a. State the argument against the claim that global warming is caused by greenhouse gases from human activity. Consider whether the claimed cause is the true cause or the only cause, and if not, what is the true cause of greenhouse gases?
b. Explain this true cause by writing a paraphrase of paragraph 3.
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c. Is there proof that nature, and not human nature, causes global warming? To answer this, consider writing a précis of paragraph 4.
d. Google one of the following: 1.) Al Gore, An Inconvenient Truth 2.) David Appell, “Sustainability: Behind the Hockey Stick,” March 1, 2005.www.scientificamerican.com
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Feedback (for activities)/ Assessment Results 1. Tell them that in their paraphrase of paragraph 3, they should have rephrased, reworded, used their own words (synonyms, simpler words), retained the order of thought, and broken down long sentences into shorter ones. 2. Tell them that in their précis of paragraph 4, they should have summarized it by reducing it to one-fourth or one-fifth (25% or 20%) of the original length, retained the point of view (third person), used their own words, and retained
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the order of thought. Reminder In arguing, if the opponent –
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a. resents: a purported sole or false cause (e.g., greenhouse gases) counter with: another or real cause (e.g., water vapor) b. purports: an increase or rise (e.g., in temperature) counter with: cycle (increase to decrease to increase in temperature, e.g., warming to
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cooling to warming …)
c. sees: a negative impact (e.g., rising sea level) counter with: a positive
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impact (e.g., rising standards of living) Summary
1. The great global warming is not caused solely and largely by greenhouse gases from human activity, but more often and largely by natural water vapor and cloudiness corresponding to solar activity.
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2. Moreover, warming does not so much cause a rise in sea level, as seas have been wont to rise steadily since the ice age (10,000 years back). In fact, warming raises standards of living.
3. Warming is relatively no problem, compared to the real problems of hunger, disease, denial of human rights, threats of terrorism and nuclear war, natural disasters, pandemics, and asteroid impact.
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“The Hazards of Industrial Agriculture” Motivating Introduction 1. Ask the students to look at the products being sold in supermarkets. Ask them to take note of the health benefits of these products. 2. Ask the students if agricultural products can create health risks. How?
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Lesson Proper
1. Ask the students the following questions:
a. What is the central idea of the selection?
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b. What hazards are posed by industrial agriculture? c. How can these hazards be prevented?
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2. Discuss with the students if the recommendations are doable.
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1. The students can be encouraged to work in groups to launch a campaign to minimize and eventually eliminate the hazards of industrial agriculture.
2. The campaign can include the production of posters and brochures. Creative writers can create poems, short stories, and essays that talk about the hazards of industrial agriculture.
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3. The students can try growing plants that can be eaten. Advise them not to use pesticides and synthetic fertilizers. Find out from the students if the plants are thriving even without pesticides and these fertilizers.
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“More Energy” Motivating Introduction When assigning this article, tell the students to search via the internet the author, Bill Gates. Introduce the lesson by letting them discuss what they read about the Bill Gates. Objectives
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1. What does Bill Gates want? Locate the sentence that states this. Discuss the grammatical mood of the sentence. Is it stating or indicating some fact? Or is it merely expressing a personal, subjective desire? 2. In beginning the essay, does the writer describe a real world? A virtual, imaginary world? Or both worlds? Explain your answer. 3. Is the pace and rhythm of the essay fast or slow? Reread, for example, paragraphs 1 and 5. Are the words, phrases, and sentences long or short? Do they come in quick succession, as in a series? Or are they presented in a slow, tedious manner? Does the effect make you feel like running, or like walking, instead? Is this effect in keeping with the idea behind the title? Explain how. 4. Discuss the problem-solution format in the organization of this essay. Does the structure present a problem first? Does it offer a solution next? Or does it do the reverse? 5. Explain Bill Gates’ formula for zero carbon dioxide emission. Include examples given. 6. Describe Bill Gates’ “energy miracle” (paragraph 38 and up). 7. Is his solution to the problem mathematical-formulaic, miraculous-religious, or critical-creative? In what way is it so? 8. Reread paragraphs 42 and 43, and then explain Bill Gates’ idea of failure and success. Can there be success in failure? How? 9. Does Bill Gates include you as a solution to his problem? Are there ways in which you can help solve it? Does he exhort you, command, request, or beg? 10. Does the essay end in an exhortation, a prediction, or both?
Concluding Activities 1. Learning
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Exercises
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Make the students write a well-argued essay proving any of the following passages from “More Energy”: a. “Life gets better – not for everyone all the time, but for most people most of the time.” (paragraph 12) b. “I have not failed 10,000 times. I’ve successfully found 10,000 ways that will not work.” (paragraph 42) c. “Math cuts out the noise and helps me distill a problem down to its basic elements.” (paragraph 20) d. “There are those who deny it is a problem at all. Others exaggerate 2. Assessment Questions/Projects
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the immediate risks.” (paragraph 21)
Divide the class into four groups that will prepare charts, graphs, diagrams, etc. of facts and figures presented in the essay. Let them select one
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set of data or facts to chart or diagram, but be sure that each group selects a different set.
List on the board the following for selection:
1. data on populations in the world that live in the dark (paragraphs 5 and 7) 2. fact tracing the cycle that starts with those least responsible for CO 2
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emission, ends with those most affected, and includes intervening events and phenomena (paragraph 15)
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3. data on tons of carbon dioxide (paragraph 18) 4. data on the world’s population (paragraph 27) 5. data on the year this essay was written and the time frame for the discovery of clean and cheap energy
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Feedback (for activities)/ Assessment Results Check that their graphs are properly captioned or titled, and all axes, lines,
and numbers are labeled. Reminder The path from a problem to a solution is as follows: (problem> different ideas to solve it > ideas that won't work > ideas that work > solution!) Summary People are persuaded to find ways of creating not only clean but also cheap sources of energy. 159
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“Mahatma Gandhi’s Hunger Strikes” Motivating Introduction 1. After giving the reading assignment, tell the students to search via the internet quotations from Gandhi on any of the following: animals, change, Christianity, diversity, education, eye for an eye, guns, Jesus, loneliness, losing, love and life, loving your enemy, loyalty, peace, truth, service, violence 2. Let them print out at least five of their favorites and read them, with
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expression, to the class.
Objectives
Lesson Proper
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Explain the irony in Gandhi’s assassination by a fellow Hindu. Remember that
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he advocated Muslim, Hindu, Sikh, etc. equality and tolerance.
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1. Learning Activities and Practice Exercises (enhancement/ writing assignment)
a. Academic:
Deliver an enlightened but practical criticism of passive
resistance. Show how it has been successfully applied or modified in other countries. Or write a poem or short play with Gandhi fasting and
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advocating religious tolerance.
b. Art and Design: Draw a unique iconic portrait of Gandhi in a Philippine setting. Or dress up in Indian garb for men and for women.
c. Tech-Voc: Bring an Indian dish or dessert to class; demonstrate how to prepare it, and/or describe the recipe. Or perform an Indian ritual. d. Sports: Demonstrate different violent and nonviolent sports. Or play a native Indian sport or game. e. IT and IA: Draw, create, or gather from the Internet portraits of Gandhi showing him at different times, ages, occasions, or fasting protests.
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Assessment Questions/Projects Choose a quotation from Gandhi, think of an issue it defends or attacks, and write an argumentative essay defending your position on the matter. Feedback (for activities)/ Assessment Results Let the students check that their own argumentative essay includes the following: 1. a clear statement of the issue in the introduction 3. support or evidence for one’s position
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2. one’s position or stand on an issue
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4. a convincing reiteration of one’s position in the conclusion
Assign a student to report on Gandhi’s philosophy of non-resistance.
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list, while the other group draws a diagram. This may be written on the board or on a
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“I Have a Dream” Motivating Introduction Along with this reading assignment, tell the class to search via the internet the biography of Martin Luther King and bring his picture. Call on some to report on interesting biographical details, and others to show Luther King’s picture.
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Objective
To identify the rhetorical qualities of the speech that make it an effective
Lesson Proper Ask the following questions:
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argument.
1. What is Luther King’s dream? Do you know songs with dreams in their lyrics? Compare those dreams with that of Luther King’s.
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2. Explain the historical allusion in the second line. Who is associated with it, and is there a similar dream too? A hundred years later, has that dream
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3. Look for figures of speech and other devices that characterize Luther King’s rhetoric. Explain how they are effective. For example, study the following images: a. a check which has come back marked "insufficient funds"
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b. refuse to believe the bank of justice is bankrupt c. have come to cash this check d. satisfy our thirst for freedom by drinking from the cup of bitterness and hatred e. until justice rolls down like waters and righteousness like a mighty stream f.
valley of despair
g. oasis of freedom and justice
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4. Also, study the sentence construction of the following: a. where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character. b. Finally, the following is the repeated beginning of every paragraph from 11-18:
“I have a dream ...”
c. And the following is the repeated beginning of almost every line in paragraph 21 “Let freedom ring ...”
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Do the images bring vividness to the speech? Does the parallelism emphasize differing points of contention in a clear and balanced manner? Does repetition add to the memorability, assertiveness, and emphatic force of the
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“Detecting Propaganda” Motivating Introduction 1. With the reading assignment, tell them to bring advertisements from newspapers and magazines, or in the form of brochures, fliers, and others. See the Lesson Proper below. 2. Discuss with the students any of their exposures to Facebook and Twitter
3. Point out the issues and bones of contention. Objectives 1. To identify propaganda devices
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propaganda in the last election.
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2. To judge and criticize product advertisements and promotional campaigns so as not to be used, fooled, or duped in arriving at decisions. Lesson Proper.
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1. Let them show and read the advertisements they brought, for their classmates to identify the propaganda device(s) used.
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2. Check that all devices in the article are illustrated; if not, let them check out the examples in the article, or make them give their own examples. Concluding Activities
Write a coherent essay discussing the following points:
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1. Is it wrong to use the propaganda devices described and exemplified in the article?
2. Are these intended to fool people? Why? 3. How does one avoid falling into the pitfall of buying a product based solely on the advertisement?
4. How should one regard propaganda devices used in advertisements? 5. Can there be an interplay of reason and emotion in responding to advertisements?
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Assessment Questions/Projects 1. Work in groups of five and choose an advertisement for a product salient to one of your track e.g., a review class for a board exam, a watercolor, a juicer, a sports bra, a portable printer, respectively. 2. Identify the propaganda device(s) used and criticize each. Improve the advertisement or create one instead. Feedback (for activities)/ Assessment Results
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Check the thoroughness of the essay in terms of answering the questions for consideration. Check the grammar and organization. Reminder
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There are seven common propaganda devices: name calling, glittering generalities, transfer, testimonial, plain folks, card stacking, and bandwagon.
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The different propaganda devices are intended to fool people into buying products they may not really need, so one should be wary of general words. These
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words do not really inform much about the product, and are used only to make the
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ASSESSMENT All of the selections included in this chapter talk about current issues that are of general interest in our present society. The use of English in presenting various stands on these issues is given emphasis in this chapter. The activities suggested for each lesson corresponding to each of the selections cover various disciplines. The goal is to train the students to take a stand on any and all issues, both local and global. The students are thus prepared for life-long learning and academic and professional challenges.
competencies.
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Following are activities that can be used to assess the students’
1. Ask the students to write a position paper on one of the following topics: (Choose a topic that best suits your stand.)
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a. The best way to solve the most urgent problem of the country (e.g. crime, corruption, poverty)
b. The best solution to Metro Manila’s (or any city’s/district’s) traffic problem
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c. The best place to live in the Philippines
d. The best home/livelihood industry to engage in
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e. The best way to support the Philippine athletes f.
The most important reform to introduce to ________________ (Philippine politics, sports, etc.)
2. Encourage
the
students
to
launch
a
campaign
supporting
a
civic/school/youth program (e.g. an environmental advocacy). The students can come up with posters, brochures, flyers, digital materials,
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projects that will represent their support for the program.
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Chapter 5
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Writing a Report
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Writing a Report People have always been narrating what they did for the day: children tell their parents who picked a fight with them, husbands and wives, tell each other what happened at home and at the office, old folks tell the young about the time when they themselves were growing up, lovers tell each other where they have been before they met, students tell their teachers why they were late, end we all want to know the why's and the how's of celebrity successes, failures, break-ups,
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reconciliations and so on.
In other words, every human being has done some informal reporting some time, but once this verbal ability is used to tell about surveys conducted; work done
noted systematically;
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out there in the field; experiments performed inside the laboratory; observations and inventions, inquiries, and others resulting from
technological advances and research – a structured presentation is in order. Explain to the students these guidelines for writing the report:
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Guidelines for Writing the Survey/ Field/ Laboratory/ Scientific/ Technical Report 1. Value Communicated
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Objective, accurate, and honest presentation of facts and results
2. Basic Content
a. May consist of eyewitness accounts or first – hand information b. May contain facts, data, figures, or statistics on or from people, events,
phenomena,
structures,
experiments,
questionnaires,
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interviews, and library research.
c. May include materials and procedures or methods.
3. Modes of Ordering a. Chronological or time order. b. Geographical or space / spatial order. c. Logical – Inductive and Deductive d. Problem – Solution e. Cause and Effect f.
Formal, e.g.:
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Abstract – Introduction – Background – Statement of the Problem – Materials – Method or Procedure – Results – Discussion – Summary, Conclusion, and Recommendations 4. Basic Qualities of a Good Report a. Objective, not subjective point of view b. Accurate, not sloppy presentation of facts, numbers, statistics and data c. Honest, not false or incomplete details and results
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d. Brief and direct sentences.
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“Fast-food Addiction” Motivating Introduction 1. Ask the students what fast-food they eat for meals. 2. Ask what junk food they eat for snacks. Objectives 1. To make the students aware of addiction as the effect of eating fast-food.
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2. To make them interested in counting the calories in the fast-food and junk food they eat.
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Lesson Proper
1. Vocabulary
Discuss (or assign for research) the following words:
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1. obesity [ow-BIY-si-tiy], noun 2. obese [ow-BIYS], adjective
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From online Merriam-Webster: Synonyms: adiposity, chubbiness, corpulence, embonpoint, fat,
fatness, fattiness, fleshiness, grossness, corpulence, plumpness, portliness, pudginess, pursiness, rotundity, weight Antonyms: leanness, reediness, slenderness, slimness, svelteness,
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thinness
3. calorie A unit of heat energy Comes from Latin calor, meaning “heat” First used in 1824 by Nicolas Clement
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Compare: small or gram calorie (cal) -- the amount of energy needed to raise the temperature of 1 gram of water by 1 degree Celsius at a pressure of 1 atmosphere
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Vs
large or kilogram calorie (Cal) -- known as the food calorie or the unit of food energy 1 Cal = 1,000 cal
joule
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calorie = metric system of units
= international system of units
1 cal = 4.2 joules
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1 kcal = 4.2 kilojoules
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Modified from online Merriam-Webster: 4. opiate [OW-piy-et/ –eyt]
A drug, e.g., morphine or codeine, made from the opium poppy, used to reduce pain, cause sleep, or ignore problems and relax instead of doing things needed to be done
From Greek opion, diminutive of opos, “sap” (first used 14th century)
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Synonyms:
drowsy,
narcotic,
hypnotic, sleepy,
slumberous (or
slumbrous), somniferous, somnolent, soporific; anesthetic, anodyne, narcotic
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2. Comprehension Questions 1. Ask them the main issue in the introductory paragraph. (Hamburgers, fries, and cola/soda/soft drinks are so addicting that they keep customers coming back.) 2.
In the next paragraph, ask what the culprits are.(sugar and fat as the caloric content)
3. Ask how many calories there are in a serving of burger and also how many calories a day is required of the average woman. (2,000 calories for
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each question) 4. Call a student to come to the board and draw a diagram, based on paragraph 3 and helped by the entire class, showing the path, from sugar and fats in the body to addiction. (Sugar and fat --->Endogenous (internal)
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opioids (e.g., natural painkilling beta-endorphins) in the hypothalamus the brain stem --->Release of dopamine (a neurotransmitter) into cells in the midbrain (nucleus acumens) --->Dopamine eliciting feelings of pleasure (euphoria) --->Repetition of the action because the body craves the
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release of dopamine inherent in the consumption of sugar and fat) 5. Ask the students two scientific proofs, based on paragraph 4, that sugar
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and fat behave like drugs causing addiction. When sugar and fat were withdrawn from the former sweet diet of rats, the rats exhibited anxiety similar to withdrawal symptoms from heroin and nicotine. Chocolate drink with increasing sugar and fat were given to rats. When a high dose of the same drink was given, the rats showed tolerance to the effects of sugar and fat, as seen in the diminished release of opioids/ opiates.
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Subsequently, they would require a higher dose to achieve the earlier effect of euphoria.)
6. Ask how the author concludes the report.(Applied to humans, brain scans show that the more obese one is, the fewer the dopamine receptors, suggesting that more sugar and fat are needed to experience euphoria.) 7. Ask if there is any caution suggested in the conclusion. (The researchers caution against concluding whether dopamine receptors are the cause/ “basis,” or rather the effect/ “outcome,” of obesity.)
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Concluding Activities Contextualized Activities and Practice a. Academic: Tell the students to convert calories into joules. Refer to the definition of calorie in the Vocabulary above. Let them write an article on how to reduce sugar and fat intake. b. Art and Design: Draw a comic strip showing the effects of an excessive fast-food diet. c. Tech Voc: Prepare a substitute meal and snack for the usual fast-food
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items. d. Sports: Interview school athletes on their diet when preparing for a game.
e. IT and IA: Identify the calories in a serving of meat, chicken, fish,
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vegetables, fruits, street foods, and snacks. Then, prepare a Facebook account that shows the calories in a serving of each food above. Present the various foods visually and in ascending order of their caloric content. Assessment Questions/Projects
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Tell each student to interview or observe at least two people – one who has
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gained pounds, and another who has lost some. Then, let each one write two separate reports on the noted respective regimens. Let them include diets, exercises, and other practices.
Feedback (for activities)/ Assessment Results Discuss the good and bad points of the students’ output. Show them some of
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the more interesting works submitted.
Reminder
Parts of the report on fast-food addiction 1. Statement of the Problem: Fast-food addiction leading to obesity 2. Cause of the Problem: Sugar and fat in fast-food causing addiction 3. Analysis of the Cause: Step by step description of how sugar and fat affect the brain and lead to addiction
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4. Proof (of the cause-effect relationship): Laboratory experiments on rats given a sugar and fat diet of chocolate drink 5. Application of the research: Sugar and fat addiction in rats being similar to fast-food addiction in humans, leading to weight gain
Summary Obesity is caused by fast-food addiction.
A sugar and fat diet in fast-food leads to fast-food addiction.
Endogenous opioids in the hypothalamus (above the brain stem) activate the release of dopamine into the midbrain.
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Dopamine elicits feelings of pleasure (euphoria).
Furthermore, dopamine motivates a repetition of the addictive behavior to
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sugar and fat.
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“Nonverbal Behaviour”: Culture, Gender, and the Media” Motivating Introduction Let the class, or some members, work in pairs to do short role plays, for example: 1. as friends greeting each other 2. as children visiting their grandparents 3. as young men and women having just been introduced to each other
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4. as Filipino and as Chinese/ American/ etc., in which the former entertains the latter, a tourist in the Philippines
5. as an English tutor to an elementary or high school student/ a Korean/ a
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Japanese
6. as a TV host talking to a dance or singing contestant 7. as a reporter interviewing a typhoon victim
8. as a call center agent appeasing an angry client on the phone
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For each role-play, you may assign varying gender combinations: two women, two men, one woman, and one man. Each member of the pair should have
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two or three turns speaking. Before the presentations, tell the class to pay attention both to the role players’ speech content, actions, gestures, body movements, facial expressions, and tone of voice. After the presentations, discuss observed nonverbal behavior.
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Objectives
1. To identify nonverbal language in different cultures 2. To observe that different forms or styles of nonverbal communication are not necessarily better than others 3. To lead students to an awareness of nonverbal communication that results in “more successful multicultural exchanges”
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Lesson Proper Distinguishing Between American English vs. British English Spelling behavior (American English spelling) behaviour (British English spelling; also Canadian and Australian spelling)
Inform them that in the Philippines, the pattern or model is American English.
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Most of the words on the list below are adapted from “Comprehensive* list of American and British spelling differences,”www.tysto.com>-uk-us-spelling-list. Some are adapted from “British and American spelling,” www.oxforddictionaries.com.
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First listed is American English, then British English spelling:
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American airplane Aluminum annex ax bougainvillea canceled center check
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criticize cruelest curb dialog draft
enroll estrogen fetus flier
British aeroplane aluminium annexe axe bougainvillaea cancelled Centre cheque (only as a variant spelling) criticise cruellest Kerb dialogue draught (a portion of liquid; BUT draft if a written plan) enrol Oestrogen foetus flyer
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fulfill, fulfill (fulfillment, fulfillment) install, install (installment, instalment)
[The two pairs above are inconsistent with the expected spelling correspondence based on canceled, cancelled above, in which Americans use single L while British use double L. Single L American and double L British are also applied to generally
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more words, respectively:
British
bejeweled
bejewelled
chiseled
chiselled
counseling
counselling
groveling labeled leveled
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American
grovelling labelled levelled
marvelled
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marveled
modelled
quarreled
quarrelled
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modeled
snorkeling
snorkelling
spiraling
spiralling
tranquility
tranquillity
traveler
traveller
American
British
inflection
inflexion
jail
gaol
gray
grey
jewelry
jewellry
judgment
judgement
licorice
liquorice
likable
likeable
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British
maneuver
manoeuvre
mold
mould
omelet
omelette
phony
phoney
plow
plough
practice
practice
pretense
pretence
program
programme
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American
pajamas
pyjamas
pizzazz
pzazz
scepticism
summarize
summarise
siphon
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skepticism
siphon
theater
theatre
tire
tyre
wagon
wagon
worshiped
worshipped
yogurt
yoghurt
sheik
storey
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story
sheikh
Vocabulary (adapted from Merriam-Webster online]
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plethora [PLE tho ra], noun plethoric [PLE tho ric/ ple THO ric], adjective From Greek plethora, “fullness,” plethein “to be full” [plena “plenty”] Meaning:
a. excess, superfluity, profusion, abundance b. a bodily condition characterized by an excess of blood and marked by turgescence and a florid complexion c. turgescence [ter JE sens] -- distended, inflated, turgid, florid -- 1. red, reddish, ruddy
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d. ornate, flowery (e.g., ornate prose, style, or writer) e. marked by emotional or sexual fervor (e.g., a florid secret life, a florid sensibility) Synonyms: abundance, cornucopia, feast, plenitude, plentitude, plenty [note: plena], superabundance, wealth Antonyms: deficiency, inadequacy, insufficiency, undersupply, undress – disrobe,
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strip, unclothe; divest, expose, reveal Organization
Ask the students how the article is generally organized. Give them a clue by
order of ideas.
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telling them to consider the title as a reading strategy for determining the structure or
(The three parts are: nonverbal behavior as seen in various a. cultures -- paragraphs 1-4
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b. genders -- paragraphs 5-8
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c. media -- paragraphs 9-14)
Let the students give examples of nonverbal behavior for each of the three organizing elements above.
a. Nonverbal behavior in various cultures In contact/ high contact cultures, people stand close together when talking,
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show very sensory experiences, and touch frequently. In noncontact/ low contact cultures, people maintain physical distance and privacy.
In contact/ high contact cultures, people respond with uninhibited, exaggerated emotions through facial expressions, gestures, and voice. In noncontact/ low contact cultures, people respond with less emotion, with self control of feelings which are to be kept within, and with expressionlessness. Moreover, the same nonverbal cue or movement may mean differently in different cultures, e.g., a nod, in American culture, means yes; but in
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Japanese culture, means only that the message is received (but does not mean agreement or consent to it). b. Description of nonverbal behavior in the two genders. (Men are assertive/ authoritarian; women, responsive/reactive. This means that compared to women a. vocally, men talk and interrupt more b. visually, men look at the audience while speaking (visual dominance)
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more than they look at the speaker while listening, whereas women do the opposite
c. spatially and tactilely, men claim more space and more frequently walk in front of, rather than behind, women; they are more likely to
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touch or initiate touching)
c. Description of nonverbal behavior in media. Media and technology “help legitimize stereotypical nonverbal displays” or reinforce image of men as physically dominant; women, subservient to and obsessed with men. In turn, these stereotypes become the model and set the standard or reference point.
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Repeated messages to women are “Thin is in,” look beautiful, young, and
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caring; to men, look tough, aggressive, and in charge: a. In advertisements, women expose a lot of skin and are vulnerable; men are in control. Vocally, more voice-overs are male, even for products targeting women.
b. In computer virtual reality games, including those that allow for gender
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changes, erotic as well as violent scenes depict women as threatened or killed; men as physically in control.)
Concluding Activities Contextualized Activities and Practice Exercises (enhancement/writing assignment) a. Academic: Write a two-level outline of the article.
Include a title, thesis
statement, and proper coding of the divisions and subdivisions. Then, refer to this outline to write a report outline of the same article. Your report outline
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should contain the parts listed in the Reminder box below. Omit the last part, References. b. Art and Design: Draw the evolution of women/men in fashion (clothes, shoes, hats, swimwear, or any combination), career, house chores. Show the contrast c. Tech-Voc: Work in threes to demonstrate various gestures that accompany greetings by Filipinos, Koreans, Japanese, Chinese, and other nationalities. Two students should demonstrate the gestures while one student describes
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what is going on. d. Sports: Work as a group and select a sport (e.g., basketball or boxing) or dance (e.g., Hawaiian or native Filipino). Discuss the nonverbal signs and cues used by referees, players, dancers, audience, etc. Assign some
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members to demonstrate the nonverbal behavior as others describe these and tell the meanings to the class.
e. IT and IA: Prepare your own video or collect short video clips, showing nonverbal Filipino behavior. Include a voice-over describing what is going on
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and what the corresponding verbal message is. You may focus on a particular situation such as a boy and a girl eating at a fast-food chain, people
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quarrelling, a political candidate, or public figure gesturing, a family spending time together, etc.
Assessment Questions/Projects
1. Divide the class into groups of 5-7 members to discuss the questions below and come up with an oral group presentation of their findings. 2. Tell them that in the discussion, each member should say something, and in
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the oral group presentation, each member says at least 5 sentences.
3. Remind all groups to agree on which parts of the findings each member will discuss for the presentation.
4. Discuss whether the article presents the concept of nonverbal communication or rather reports on it: a. Which aspects are conceptual? b. Which aspects are reportorial? c. Overall, is the article a concept paper or a report?
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Feedback (for Activities)/ Assessment Results a. Parts that present ideas about nonverbal behavior, explain them, clarify, propose, or embody a thought or value that is conceptual. b. Parts that relay information or recount events, observed behavior, experiments, interviews, field work, surveys, are reportorial.
They cite
numbers, statistics, percentages, frequency, or general measurements (“more,” “less,” “often,” etc.), time, place, people, cultures, and countries. c. In short, a report answers the questions who, what, when, where, why, and
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how in order to give factual information on past actions or events. Reminder Parts of a report:
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1. Title Page 2. Abstract 3. Introduction 4. Method
6. Discussion
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7. Summary
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5. Results
8. Recommendations 9. References
Summary
1. Nonverbal behavior in different cultures, genders, and media is seen in
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communication through the use of gestures, touch, space, dress, and means other than speaking. Among nations, differences show that all cultures, though different, are equal; that is, one is neither superior nor inferior, better nor worse, higher nor lower.
2. Among individuals, gender differences, however, reveal male tendencies to dominate and female tendencies to be subservient.
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3. This power-lack of power (empowered vs. disempowered) relationship is a stereotype projected in media, which, in turn, all the more reinforces, through repeated messages, the same myth of dominance, thus legitimizing the myth or making the unreal look real.
4. And so the cycle goes on: from the social myth of male dominance, to the perpetuation
of
that
myth
in
media
(through
constant
repetitive
reinforcement), thus leading to the seeming legitimization or apparent reality
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of such a dominance in the individual minds of the viewing public.
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“Philippines 2013 International Religious Freedom Report Executive Summary” Motivating Introduction Ask the students to narrate their first encounter with someone coming from a different province or country, or having a different religion or language. Tell them to give the following details: who the person is (or name the cultural identity) what the student and the other did or talked about, where they met, when they met, and how
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they met (by introduction, chance, as stranger, in public, etc.)
Next, ask them to describe their feelings, thoughts, and reactions after
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meeting the person.
Objectives
1. To describe the parts of a sample report 2. To write a short report with similar parts
Lesson Proper
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1. Terms
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3. To describe the practice of religious freedom
a. Vocabulary a.)
madrassah/ madrasah/ madrasa/ medrese [mah
DRA sa/-sey] -- school or college, especially one
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attached to a mosque where young men study theology. (adapted from www.dictionary.com/browse/madrasah)
b.)
iftar -- the meal served at sunset during
Ramadan, as Muslims break the daily fast. Muslims traditionally first break the fast with dates and either water or a yogurt drink. After maghrib prayer, they then have a full-course meal, consisting of soup, salad, appetizers and main dishes. (islam.about.com/od/ramadan/g/Iftar.htm) 185 All rights reserved. No part of this material may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means electronic or mechanical including photocopying – without written permission from the DepEd Central Office.
c.)
maghrib prayer -- the sunset prayer which begins
when the sun has completely set (http://www.iccuk.org/page.php?section=religious&page=timetableguide)
b. Abbreviations Ask the students to look up all the abbreviations used in the report and read aloud the complete name. MILF – Moro Islamic Liberation Front
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NGOs – nongovernmental organizations
NCMF – National Commission on Muslim Filipinos DepEd – Department of Education
RBEC -- Revised Basic Education Curriculum
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CHR -- Commission on Human Rights
2. Outline
Call one student to the board to write a two-level topic outline of the report
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by listening to the suggestions of the students for each division and subdivision entry.
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Remind the student writing on the board that capitalization style should be the sentence case, in which only the first word has the initial letter capitalized, as in writing a sentence, but without a period after the last word. Compare the sentence case with the title case, in which all main words
have their initial letters capitalized, as in writing a title. Tell the class to omit the introduction and conclusion.
Give clues by
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telling them to notice the numbered sections of the report, and to base the outline on these.
Check that the format of the report they read has these section
headings written on a separate line within the text, as these will comprise the resulting topic outline below:
I.
Religious demography A. Status of government respect for religious freedom B. Legal/ policy framework C. Government practices
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D. Muslim students in selected public elementary schools and private madrassahs E. Abuses by rebel or foreign forces or terrorist organizations II.
Status of societal respect for religious freedom)
Statistical, numerical, and other data Divide the class into 4 groups. Assign the first group to paragraphs 1, 3, and 4; the three other groups, to paragraphs 2, 5, and the last,
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respectively. [Check that paragraph 6 is not a duplicate of paragraph 5.] Tell each group to list down or enumerate all numbers, dates, and percentages found in the paragraph assigned, and then identify what each represents.
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Par. 1: two out of four – annexes (of the peace framework agreement on the Bangsamoro) that were signed by the government and the MILF Par. 2:
105.7 million – total population of the Philippines July 2013 – date of the population estimate
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2000 – year when the survey was conducted by the National Statistics Office
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approximately 93% -- percentage of Christian population in the Philippines 80-85 percent – percentage of Roman Catholics in the Philippine population 5 percent – percentage of Islam, as the largest minority religion, in the Philippine population
2012 – year when the NCMF estimated
the number of Muslims in the
Philippines
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10.7 million – number of Muslims estimated by the NCMF to be in the Philippines approximately 11 percent – percentage of Muslims estimated by the NCMF to be in the Philippines
60 percent – percentage of Muslims residing in Mindanao and nearby islands Par. 3: less than 5 percent – percentage of other religious groups including international denominations, domestically established churches, and Lumad or indigenous people with animistic and syncretic (amalgamated or fused) religions
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Par. 4: five – number of sharia district court judgeships that are vacant or unfilled 43 – number of circuit court judgeships that are vacant or unfilled 588 – number of madrassahs registered with the NCMF 79 – number of madrassahs registered with the DepEd Par 5: 58 million pesos ($1.3 million) – amount provided by DepEd to private madrassahs or Muslim theology schools
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69 – number of madrassahs that received funding from DepEd 2012-2013 – school year when DepEd provided funds for madrassahs
31 percent – increase in the funding for madrassahs, compared to the previous year
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17 – number of additional madrassahs that received DepEd funding
August 8 (2012) – date when DepEd issued an advisory affirming the right of Muslim women to wear the hijab in schools
July (2012) – date when DepEd issued Department Order No. 32
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Department Order No. 32 – DepEd order reiterating its policy on protecting the religious rights of students
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2001 – year when the DepEd issued its policy on the religious rights of students
February 1-7 (2013) – Interfaith Harmony Week August 4 (2012) – date when three Moro Islamic missionaries were shot and killed in Libungan, North Cotabato by unidentified suspects Last par.:
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50 – number of Muslim, Christian, and Lumad youth representatives who attended a Youth Council Summit two-day Summit – duration of the youth summit on leadership and governance training across religious boundaries
two iftars – number of iftars held by the U.S. Embassy 80 – number of religious leaders and Muslim youth for whom the U.S. ambassador held an iftar (Ramadan meal after sunset) 70 – number of youth leaders, civil society organizations, and local officials for whom the U.S. ambassador held a second iftar
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first-ever – the first visit in history made by a U.S. ambassador to a Manila mosque during Ramadan, during which a dialogue on religious tolerance was held with religious and community leaders October – month when the U.S. Embassy worked with a local NGO in a peace advocacy program in Mindanao 40 – number of Muslim, Christian, and Lumad youth leaders in Mindanao for whom a peace advocacy program was prepared)
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Quantifying expressions Ask the class to identify quantity terms used in the report a. Estimates
c. Most belong d. A small number e. An increasing number f.
Approximately
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g. Large
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b. Survey conducted
h. Some human rights NGOs All five sharia...
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i. j.
Both, or neither
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k. First-ever visit
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Writing a Report a. Let the students write a report relevant to their track – b. Academic: on a movie, tv show, talk show, interview of a public official c. Art and Design: on an exhibit or (song/ dance) performance in school/ a mall/ etc. d. Tech-Voc: on a food fest, cook fest, restaurant e. Sports: on a boxing match/ basketball game/ volleyball game f.
IT and IA: on hacking government and bank websites/ Internet connectivity in
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rural areas/ Assessment Questions/Projects
Tell the class to do a survey of their own class on their use of social media.
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Let them consider the following questions: kind of social media often used, time and place of use, length and frequency of use, reasons for using, effects of social media interaction on family, etc.
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Feedback (for activities)/ Assessment Results
Let the students review their reports for grammar, brevity, clarity, and
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directness. Also, let them check that the different parts of their report have proper section headings. Reminder
a. Report – relays information or recounts events in a presentable form b. Executive summary – summarizes the main points of a report. May be read in
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lieu of the report itself, unlike the shorter abstract which is read to help the reader decide whether to read the longer report itself. May be 5-10% of the length of the original report
c. Parts of a report – a. Overview – briefly states the main points of the report, its purpose, and the conclusion, with recommendations, if any b. Background – introduces the subject and explains the reason for the report
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c. Discussion – presents findings including evidence (facts, arguments, details, data, and results) d. Conclusion – reviews main points; may include recommendations. Summary a. The Philippine Constitution, laws, and policies protect religious freedom, which the government respects, although there were reports on abuse religious discrimination. Economic, social, and religious issues contribute to
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armed conflict in certain provinces in the south. b. However, the Philippine government has signed two of four annexes of the peace framework agreement with the MILF on the Bangsamoro.
c. U.S. Embassy officials have encouraged the peace process, discussed
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religious freedom issues with officials, and maintained outreach with religious
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leaders and NGOs for interfaith activities.
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“Guidelines for Physics Lab Reports” Motivating Introduction Ask the students what kinds of reports they have done in their classes. (Current events, laboratory report, author’s biography, etc.) Next, ask other reports they have done at home, on the telephone, or at an office (as a child, running to one’s mother to complain about a sibling’s or playmate’s misbehavior; making an emergency call to the fire department or to a hospital;
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recounting to a police officer on a snatching incident or on a road accident)
Tell them that what all these have in common are the following essentials in a report: who did what, when and where this happened, how and why they happened.
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Ask them if they learned any lesson from these reported events.
Objectives
To identify the qualities of good laboratory reports
examples, etc.)
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Lesson Proper (word meanings/verbal matters, questions, explanations, illustrations
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Emphasize the following:
1. Guidelines for physics lab reports apply, with variations, to all reports in general.
2. Guidelines are the mechanical aspect of report writing; human traits or qualities arising from – or required of – report writing, the moral aspect, which
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is the more important, overriding, and implied lesson in this text.
Concluding Activities 1. Learning Activities and Practice Exercises (> enhancement/ writing assignment) Ask the students to bring a report in their respective tracks listed below and read aloud its different parts or section headings.
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Assessment Questions/Projects Tell the students to compare their reports and write a checklist on the board of all report parts identified. Feedback (for activities)/ Assessment Results Point out obligatory/ compulsory and optional parts that a report may have, as seen in the students’ differing sample reports. (Obligatory/ compulsory: the experiment, or what was done data, or the results
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gathered, conclusions and implications, or what the data tell. Reminder
Watch out for: relationships between measurements, trends, and interactions
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between independent and dependent variables (e.g., inverse relationships, or increases in one variable on account of decreases in the other; direct relationships, or parallel or corresponding increases or decreases in both variables) deviations (due to error, uncertainties in the experiment, idealizations in the theory resulting in
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Summary
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the neglect of other factors).
Good report writing is: honest in data (no tampering of data, no copying from
others who are not lab partners), accurate in grammar and information, precise in calculation, thorough in graph labeling (of slope and intercept), transparent about deviations and uncertainties, orderly or well-organized in structure brief in presentation
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Thus, it follows that a good report writer should demonstrate the personal
traits of honesty, accuracy, precision, thoroughness or comprehensiveness, transparency, orderliness, and brevity.
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Assessment Performance 1. Academic: Form groups of five to seven and share your recollections of laboratory experiments you have done. 2. Art and Design: Work in groups of five to check out business or residential areas where street parking creates problems such as obstruction of traffic flow and of driveways; occupation of lanes and sidewalks; inaccessibility by
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fire trucks, ambulances, and police cars, etc. Next, suggest solutions to such problems, e.g., enforcement of parking rules, provision of parking areas or multilevel parking every so many blocks, etc.
3. Tech-Voc: Form groups according to the kind of community or communities
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you come from (rural, urban, indigenous, “fringes of society,” agricultural, mining, etc.) For each community, discuss the native crafts, artwork, cuisine, livelihood, tourist attraction, or underground economy that the members resort to. Also, discuss the problems and needs in such livelihoods that have
dying traditions, etc.
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to be addressed, e.g., dangers to society, destruction of the environment,
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4. Sports: Working in twos, do a survey of the problems encountered by at least ten college athletes. Gather data by conducting interviews or by distributing questionnaires to them. Then, classify the results into kinds of problems, e.g., housing, transportation, medical, financial, academic, etc. 5. BA: Discuss with the class a business venture you have engaged in. Explain why you chose such a business (e.g., passion and love for the product, family
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ownership, community tradition, etc.) and how your venture fared (if a success, what the secret ingredients were; if a failure, what factors contributed to it or aggravated it). Also, discuss what lessons were learned, and what related or other business ventures you might recommend.
Writing
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2. Art and Design: Write a brief paragraph reporting on parking problems observed earlier. Next, draw a map of the vicinity showing nearby areas or streets where vehicles might park without causing traffic disturbance or road obstruction. Finally, design alternative or supplementary multilevel parking areas in conveniently located areas nearby. If there are none, choose specific lots which the government might buy to be used solely for paid public parking. In general, eminent domain is defined as the power of the nation or a
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sovereign state to take, or to authorize the taking of, private property for a public use without the owner’s consent, conditioned upon payment of just compensation. It is acknowledged as an inherent political right, founded on a common necessity and interest of appropriating the property of individual
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members of the community to the great necessities of the whole community. The exercise of the power of eminent domain is constrained by two constitutional provisions: (1) that private property shall not be taken for public use without just compensation under Article III (Bill of Rights), Section 9 and (2) that no person shall be deprived of his/her life, liberty, or property
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without due process of law under Art. III, Sec. 1.8
3. Tech-Voc: Write a report on one of the livelihoods discussed earlier in your group. Remember to be objective and accurate in reporting the facts, details, and realities of such a community livelihood.
4. Sports: Keeping in mind the parts of a report, write a survey report on problems encountered by college athletes. Use the data from the interviews
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or questionnaires you conducted earlier.
5. BA: Write a report on one of the business ventures of you or your classmates discussed earlier. Follow the format for a good report.
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from G.R. No. 150640 Barangay Sindalan, San Fernando, Pampanga, Republic of the Philippines, Supreme Court, Manila, Second Division, Certified by Reynato S. Puno, Chief Justice, 2001 http://sc.judiciary.gov.ph/jurisprudence/2007/march2007/150640.html
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